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missmia
06-22-2008, 04:21 AM
This is something I wrote earlier today, so tell me what you think, and what I could fix.. :)

Gotta Know

I see you in my mind
Every single day
And I hear your voice
Echoed in my head

Everyday
I want you here
But your so far
To even be near

Gotta find you
Gotta hold you
Gotta know that your mine
Gotta make sure every moment
Spent with you is right
Now I know that I love you
Do you feel the same

So will you put together
The pieces of my heart
I just need to know
Gotta know

Sometimes I think
That I'm your type
But then I change
My mind
And doubt myself

The photographs I see
Its you with other girls
You look so happy
Can I compare

Gotta find you
Gotta hold you
Gotta know that your mine
Gotta make sure every moment
Spent with you is right
Now I know that I love you
Do you feel the same

So will you put together
The pieces of my heart
I just need to know
Gotta know

My life goes round
To the rythmn of my heart
I can hear it beating
Beating so hard

But can two hearts
Bind together
And stay forever
In eternity

Gotta find you
Gotta hold you
Gotta know that your mine
Gotta make sure every moment
Spent with you is right
Now I know that I love you
Do you feel the same

So will you put together
The pieces of my heart
I just need to know
Gotta know

I need to find you
Need to hold you
Gotta
Know

$$ Sasuke Uchiha $$
06-22-2008, 07:33 AM
Nice........I don't have nothing to say! It's awesome!

HyuugaHinata
06-24-2008, 07:36 AM
I like it ^_^ I don't think you need to change a thing, except that all the "your"s should be "you're". Great job!