Listen to me!

[caseclosedchild(narurakue]

this is my first song go easy on it rate please:

Why do i talk,it makes no difference,it doesnt matter,we had a fight you walk off i say something you blow it off...ive had enough im makeing a stand!

[X2]
Im gonna scream shout break it out.

[X5]
That doesnt work...why?Is it me or you?

[x7]
LISTEN TO ME!

[x2]
LISTEN UP!
Im gonna be the one to walk.
im gonna be the one to blow it off
your gonna be the one to be ignored

[uchiha123123]

it is ok

[Leiko]

Bleh.....yeah,it's ok. :^^:

[HyuugaHinata]

It's alright ^^.

[caseclosedchild(narurakue]

Thanx!

[KillTheOpposing]

It's ok but could use a little more variety.