Broken Pieces

[ChibiChan]

[Trying a little story that came to me earlier ^^ let me know what you think and if I should continue!]
Chapter 1: Purpose
[Flashback]
May 10...my 10th birthday...everyone was there, my mother...my father...and my older sister. My family...it was perfect, I got everyhitng that I had wanted...it was perfect...until...mother and father were claeaning up around the house while my sister and I were in our room getting ready to go to bed, when it happened...a huge explosin came from a house about a block away from us...loud...ground shaking...screaming followed the explosion...my sister told me to hide and not come out until she came back. After that her my mother and my father were outside...where the danger was. I curled up in our closet...the small dark closet...more and more explosions were going off, one after another, each one...slowly getting closer...I wanted so badly to go outside and scream for my family to come back and hide...but it was too late...it was the end...one last huge ear shattering explosion went off in the middle of our village. I felt it...the shaking...the pain and fear...the screaming people outside these walls...it was quiet then. No other sounds...I shakily stood and got out of the closet, our room...no everything was gone...I was now in the openess of what used to be the small little Lonely Blossom village...alone...it was me surrounded by what used to be everything...my eyes widened as what I saw caused my knees to lock and buckle under me...I saw my mother and father...lying on the ground together...still and quiet like all of the others...I stumbled over to them, and stared at the two cold pale faces..."M-Mother...F-Father...?" I choked out. No answer...they were...my mind forced the words out...dead. My family was dead...my village...my everything...is dead. I fell and cried. It was all that I could do...everything was gone...I was alone...alone...[End Flashback]

That was the end...the end of my everything...my name is Haruko Yamazaki, I am now 15 years old...which means that it has been 5 years since that terrible day...the worst day of my life...my 10th birthday...I clutched the silver locket in my trembling hand...the gift from my parents, last gift...inside was a family picture...all of us on my birthday. I stood at the edge of the high hill above what used to be my village. The now dead, Lonely Blossom village...I felt tears sting my eyes...I turned and started walking, I didn't know where I would go now...I would travel until I found out what happened that day...the death of my village...I would find out...it is now my purpose for living.
Because now I was alone...
[To be continued in Chap. 2]

[HyuugaHinata]

Nicely done ^_^. I really like what you have so far.

[Kaden]

Interesting. Lets see what ya got!

[jazzy]

[Trying a little story that came to me earlier ^^ let me know what you think and if I should continue!]
Chapter 1: Purpose
[Flashback]
May 10...my 10th birthday...everyone was there, my mother...my father...and my older sister. My family...it was perfect, I got everyhitng that I had wanted...it was perfect...until...mother and father were claeaning up around the house while my sister and I were in our room getting ready to go to bed, when it happened...a huge explosin came from a house about a block away from us...loud...ground shaking...screaming followed the explosion...my sister told me to hide and not come out until she came back. After that her my mother and my father were outside...where the danger was. I curled up in our closet...the small dark closet...more and more explosions were going off, one after another, each one...slowly getting closer...I wanted so badly to go outside and scream for my family to come back and hide...but it was too late...it was the end...one last huge ear shattering explosion went off in the middle of our village. I felt it...the shaking...the pain and fear...the screaming people outside these walls...it was quiet then. No other sounds...I shakily stood and got out of the closet, our room...no everything was gone...I was now in the openess of what used to be the small little Lonely Blossom village...alone...it was me surrounded by what used to be everything...my eyes widened as what I saw caused my knees to lock and buckle under me...I saw my mother and father...lying on the ground together...still and quiet like all of the others...I stumbled over to them, and stared at the two cold pale faces..."M-Mother...F-Father...?" I choked out. No answer...they were...my mind forced the words out...dead. My family was dead...my village...my everything...is dead. I fell and cried. It was all that I could do...everything was gone...I was alone...alone...[End Flashback]

That was the end...the end of my everything...my name is Haruko Yamazaki, I am now 15 years old...which means that it has been 5 years since that terrible day...the worst day of my life...my 10th birthday...I clutched the silver locket in my trembling hand...the gift from my parents, last gift...inside was a family picture...all of us on my birthday. I stood at the edge of the high hill above what used to be my village. The now dead, Lonely Blossom village...I felt tears sting my eyes...I turned and started walking, I didn't know where I would go now...I would travel until I found out what happened that day...the death of my village...I would find out...it is now my purpose for living.
Because now I was alone...
[To be continued in Chap. 2]

that was good little sad but keep on going never give up on something u love doing.

[ChibiChan]

Awww! Thank you everyone! :)

Here's Chapter 2 ^_^

Chapter 2 Part 1: Unknown Name

I started to think about yesterday...back at the village hill..."How could this have happened to me...?" I thought to myself. Everything was falling apart. As I started to get close to what looked like another village I heard a noise in an up ahead bush...just a few steps away. "Who's there?! Show yourself!" I shouted as I pulled out a kunai. No answer...but there was more movement. A tall dark figure came out of the bush, it looked like a boy..."Who are you?!" I shouted. They just stood there...in a quick second I was getting closer to them...I saw a headband..."My name is Miroki Sukimiya...15...from the village hidden in the mist." he answered quietly. I stepped back...mist huh? "Why are you out here?" I asked. But as soon as I said that I got my answer...a few feet away I could see the mist village's gates. He got close...so close...no weapons...or handsigns..."And you are?" he whispered. It took my breath away...the distance, he was being so casual..."Haruko Yamazaki...15...f-from the lonely blossom village..." was all I managed to say. He smirked. "Where are going?" he asked. That...I counldn't answer...because I didn't know where my goal would be reached. "I'm not sure yet..." I replied sternly. After I said that I realized that I had been taken to the mist village's gates...he got them open then said "Welcome to the village hidden in the mist...Haruko Yamazaki."
[To be continued in Part 2!]

[GangstaKage]

Interesting.I liked it.It kept me very interested.I dont suppose shes going to train under Haku and Zabuza now is she?

If that rings a bell.Anyway good story its sad though but inspiring.

[ChibiChan]

Thank you Ryan (Edward >.<) :) I don't think she will ^^

Chapter 2 Part 2

[RECAP: Haruko just met a mist shinobi (Miroki Sukimiya) and is entering the village hidden in the mist]

"Welcome to the village hidden in the mist." Miroki said. It was amazing...a village on water...I looked around as he began to tell me about the village, it was interesting to hear about. "Haruko, you said that you didn't know where you are going...is that true?" he asked as we stopped at what looked like a small house. "Yes, i'm searching for something...an answer..." I replied. I was starting to feel comfortable around others...which was a little difficult for me after the village incident. But this boy, Miroki, has a very calming sense...like I can tell him anything and he would listen to every word. It felt nice..."My village, the lonely blossom, was destroyed 5 years ago on my 10th birthday...by an unknown group of shinobi...that's all that they know now, I plan to find the reason for the attack...that is my goal, my purpose in life now." I told him. He did listen...he had a soft look on his face, like he understood that deep cutting pain..."My other village...the one I lived in before this, was also destroyed..." he said quietly. Miroki did understand. He's been through the same life changing experience...I was both shocked and suprised to hear that. "Oh, i'm so sorry Miroki...how long ago?" I asked. He got stiff and quiet for a second before choking out the words. "Last year..." was all he said. My eyes widened at hearing that...his whole life was changed...was torn...last year? Miroki...he was still frozen, fists clenched..."My goal is the same as yours Haruko." he said in the same stern tone. I got myself together and did the most out of character thing...I hugged him. I pulled him close and held him...I could feel...see the tears stinging at his eyes...because, I understood how much it hurt. He held me and started crying...I stayed still and quiet...I knew that he needed someone who cared...because that's all that I wanted too. Someone who I could talk to about this, and they would understand and listen. Miroki is that someone...he needs it too. "We could travel together...we could find our goal together Miroki...we both understand the pain that each other has endured...with that we can be stronger." I told him as a small smile was coming across my face. It felt good...finally findng that person...and being able to have a reason to smile...felt good...and right. He had stopped crying, and nodded. I smiled and gently wiped his eyes. "Together..." he whispered. And then he pulled me close again. I have finally found somewhere I belong...

[To Be Continued In Chapter 3!]

[Kaden]

a little difficult to read but its coming along great!

[HyuugaHinata]

I love it! Very interesting. Keep it up!