The Dawn of The Dark Angel

[gemini]

I made this story up a few days ago I hope you like it! :)
right now this all I've got I'll post more tomorrow thanks for reading



Ciana walked the dark dank catacombs with nothing but a candle to light her way. She was searching but searching for what she didn't know. Suddenly she woke to her own blood curdiling scream "It was just a dream." she told herself as she stepped onto the cool wooden floor. Slowly she walked to the bathroom and splashed some cold water on her face. She'd been having these dreams ever since her parent's death three months ago. As she made her way back to her room she heard a baby crying which she thought was strange cause she was alone. Ciana looked around any way and saw nothing so she slowly returned to her warm bed and awaited another sleepless night. The next morning she got out of bed and put on all black even her long brown hair was tied back in black ribbon with silver trim. She walked down the sidewalk to the cemetary with to black roses and placed them on her parent's graves.

[gemini]

Here is more of the story


As she walked threw the gates leaving the cemetary she heard foot steps behind her she turned around but no one was there. She began to quicken her pace and even though there was no one behind her the footsteps grew louder. She stopped moving just to make sure she wasn't hearing her own footsteps but the footsteps still grew louder. Suddenly she heard whispers calling her name. She began to run she hit someone and fell to the ground she looked up and saw a brown haired silver eyed boy looking down at her. "Are you ok?" he asked politely.
"Yeah sure but who are you?" Ciana asked shaking in fear.
"Names Conner and you are?" he asked helping Ciana to her feet.
"I'm Ciana nice to meet you and thanks for the help." she said still shaking a little.
"No prob its nice to meet you too." he said smiling
They walked in silence until Conner asked "Why were you running from the cemetary earlier?"
"You wouldn't beileve me if I told you." Ciana stated blandly.
"Try me I'm not as closed minded as you think." Conner retorted.
"I heard whispers calling to me." she said shuddering at the memory.
"Sure you did." he said in a worried tone that Ciana didn't seem to notice.
"See I told you that you wouldn't believe me!" Ciana ranted and then she began to run down the side walk again as tears streamed down her face.
Suddenly she heard the whispers and footsteps once more she ran faster until she couldn't hear them anymore.

[HyuugaHinata]

It's interesting. Good job. Keep it up ^_^

[FunnyGuy]

Yes really....Keep it up ^^

[silver]

its really good and please make the chapters more lengthy and write more