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Edge
08-19-2008, 04:37 AM
its a story i wrote i will write some more later....some mistakes I know just tell me what you think..


~London-Art of Mechanism~


In a mysterious age of time,students attend the Karakuri school.This school teaches their students the art of Karakuri,or mechanism.Now that you know all of this information we can begin our story!This is London!


"Heh, so London how was your day today at school,"asked Maka.

"You know how it was you idiot!You go to the same school as I, and attend all the same classes as me,"I said

"Yeah I know,I was just kidding! But anyway,you totally sucked today when the teacher called you up to do the dance of fire!You couldnt even make a ember come out," Maka laughed.

" Yeah, I did suck. Fire dances are not my thing," I admitted

"But they are the easiest type of dance there is! I even was able to master it.But anyway, what is your 'type' of dance?" asked Maka.

" I dont have one, but I preffer ice and wind.They are the only ones I know how to do," I said angry.

' Well I suck at ice and wind dances. I am only good at fire,earth,normal,special, and water dances.But atleast I know how to do more than two types of dances," bragged Maka.


" Shut up!If it wasnt against the rules I would kill you right now!" I screamed

'Knock,Knock!' Lights off! Its 2am, and the curfew is 11pm!'said a voice.

" We can stay up as late as we want to!" Maka said angry

"What was that Maka!?' said the voice madly

"Sorry sir! He didnt mean to say that,but what he meant was that we lost track of time practing are dances!We are so sorry!" I said softhly.

"Well ok,and Maka you have afther school detention tomorrow!"said the voice.


" What! What about London? he is violating the curfew also!" Maka complained

"You dont have dettention because of violating the curfew but because of what you siad! London didnt say anything,except sorry!"said the voice madly again.

" Ok then,Mr.King!" said Maka and me together.

The next day at school

"Now class,I have something to tell you all!" said Mr.King

'Please be that you are quiting!' asid Maka softhley

"Maka!That is another day of detention for you!" said Mr.King

"Aw man!This place sucks." complained Maka.

"But as I was saying before I was rudely inturupted,"As you all know,yesterday the village of Kia was attacked by the Futal Lord,Bass.So incase he and his army decides to attack this school,we are going to tell you and teach you about the power of the almighty dances." said Mr.King slowly

"Why would they want to attack this place for?Its sucks!" screamed Maka.

"Maka,that is another day of detention!" said Mr.King happily

"But anyway,today I am going to tell you why the dances were made and how they came to be.'Long ago,a man by the name of Shilo,was under attack and needed something to defend him.So he though and though,he then remebered about the element spell in which he can drink to have the power of the elements.So he made and drank the element spell,and it didnt work.So he needed to find away to release the elements powers.He then started to dance around in an old fashion japenese style war dance.Then all of a suddent a big burst of fire came out of his feet and hands.He then relized that every dance uses a different element.'So children that is how the dances were made.Tomorrow we will discuss about how the dances were turned into a common form of martial arts.Class dismissed!" Mr.King said slowly.

"Well that class was boring as always!"complained Maka.

"Maka,you were asleep the whole time so you dont even know what we were talking about.Myself,I found it very interesting," I said.



London-Chapter 2


"Maka!Come here and look at the news!" I screamed.

"Im coming,Im coming!" yelled Maka.


*Maka ran into the room,not very excited* "Well what is it?" complained Maka.


"Look,the school was shut down last night!And it says it is because of...a virus!" I said worried.


"A virus?Like the one that makes people sick?" said Maka.


"No,the one that enters a computer.But who would be able to enter the schools main computer?Its guarded twenty four seven." I explained.


"Well,I always knew that the school wasnt as protected as they claimed to be," joked Maka.


"Wait! Its saying that they found all the guards in the janitors closet,dead," I said quickly!

"Well whoever the heck it was had to be very strong.I mean,to kill all of those guards!When they showed up oneday in class they were huge!" said Maka kinda worried.


"Well,I really want to know what happened in the school last night."i said.

"Uh dude,they are saying it all on the news!" Maka said smartly.

"I know,but something doesnt seem right!Everything is like going different ways,they arent saying something,"I said.


"Heh,well there is only one thing to do!And that is go into the school and find out ourselves!"said Maka joyfully.


London-Chapter 3

"Well Maka,how are we going to do that?There is like thousands of people around the school!" I said.

"London,just leave all of that stuff to me.I have a very brilliant plan," he said.

Outside of the school

"Someone!Someone,please help me!" Maka screamed.

"What?What was that?" the news lady said.

"It sounded like a kid to me,and a kid in trouble a matter of fact," the camera man said worried.

*Everybody ran over to were they heard the call for help*

"What is it boy?Is everything ok?" they all asked the boy.(which is Maka in a wierd costume)

"Uh no!Why the heck would I scream for help?My freakin' friend is stuck in the energy room," said Maka laughing to himself.

"Ok then we are on it," said the camera man and everyone else.

*Everybody ran to the energy room*

"Suckers!They actually fell for it!" Maka laughed.

"Ok London,its clear to go now!" Maka screamed.

"Maka shut the hell up!You dont want everybody to run back and find out that it was just a trick,do you?" I said.

"Ok im sorry,now lets just go and get this thing over with," Maka said weirdly.

Inside the school

"Well were here," Maka said quitly.

"Yeah,now its time to find out whats up with the 'virus',I said.

"Ok then,off to the computer room!" Maka said joyfully.

Computer Room

"Heh,it doesnt seem like anything out of the unusual here," Maka said

"Wait,look! Its seems like someone has busted the computers main sytstem open," I said worried.

"Well i guess that is the ' virus ' we are looking for!" Maka said joyfully.

"No,it cant be.Unless the virus was so powerful that it blew the sytsem up," I said in return. 'Lets look around some more and maybe we can find more clues" I said.


*A few Minutes Later*

"Hey London,come here its a letter of somewha,t" Maka screamed.

*I ran over to Maka as fast as I could*

"Well what does it say Maka," I asked.

"I dont know," Maka shot back.

"Well why didnt you read it," I asked again.

"I wanted you to read it instead of me,"Maka said in return

"Ok then,I will read it," I said kinda scared.

*I picked up the note*

"It says,"....."For whoever reads this note,the ' virus ' that you are looking for is not a computer virus.But instead it is a human,a human that is my slave that will do anything that I want him to do.His name is Morimoto,an elite member of the Bass Elite Society, or the association of V.I.R.U.S.,which ever one you please.And oneday he and I will destroy the word and rebuild it to our desire."

"Oh shit," Maka said.


London- Chapter 4



"Knock,Knock! Whoever is in there come out and we maynot shoot!" said a man.

"Oh shit!London we better get the hell out of here!" Maka said panicky.


"Ok,open the door you idoit!" I screamed.

*Maka opened the door slowly*

"Stand right there!Dont move," screamed the man again


"Crap!We are probably going to get exspelled for doing this!"Maka said quitly.

"Come with me boys,we have some questions to ask you," said the person.

*A few Minutes Later*

"Now boys,why were you two in the computer room?" asked the man.

"Well,we were..."

"Shut Up Maka!" I said afther punching him in the arm.

"Well sir,to tell the truth we were in that room to actually find the ' virus'" I explained.

"Uh...ok then,why were you in the room looking for the virus?" asked the man.

"It seemed like the reporters weren't telling something,so me and my friend here wanted to find out the missing piece of the story," I said."So we went in the room and found out that the computer's main system had a big hole in it,much like a bomb went off,"I contuined"So we looked around some more,guessing that no computer virus could blast open the system like that unless it was not just a regular virus.Thus we looked around some more nad forund a note that was from the futal lord,Bass that said he and his partner done this and that they were apart of the Bass Elite Society or V.I.R.U.S.," I said in a hurry.


"Heh,you two are very smart.I mean those reporters were the best in the word and was known for lieing and acting it out to seem true,and you were able to spot out that they weren't telling something.I must admitt that is very good." the man said joyfully.

"Ok then sir,so we are not in trouble," I asked.

"Heck no!Why would you get in trouble for being smart and wanting to know the entire story.So no, you two are not in trouble" the man said.


"Yes!! Now I wont have to go back home to that awful brother of mine!" Maka said joyfully.

"So you two can leave now,goodbye!" the man said.

"Ok then,thank you alot sir!" I said happily.



London-Chapter 5

"Well London,that was a big night last night," Maka said to London the next morning.

"Yeah,we could have got in some big trouble," London said with a smile on his face.

"Yeah, we were so lucky!.." Maka said very loudly.

"Well lets head out to school.." London said kinda low.


Mr.King's Class room

"Class as you all know,we were ' attacked ' the other day.." said Mr.King loudly. "So today and for aslong as it takes we will have the first ever 'Karakuri,tournament of skill' so everyone be on your toes and be ready to fight anyone!" Mr.King said joyfully.

"What!?..a tournament..a tournament of ..where we get to fight each other..?" Maka said stunned by happy.


"Yes, a tournament where all the students of my class and Mr.Kills class will fight each other and the prize will be..

"Yes,come on say it..!" Maka said to himself.

"Nothing..!" Mr.King said joyfully looking at Maka.

"What!? Nothing..but...why..?" Maka said sadly.

"Because to attend this school,no bodys parents had to pay a dime so why should we give you anything when no body gave us anything..?" Mr.King said with an angry face.

"What!? But my mom said that she had to pay thousands and thousands of dollars for me to go,and that is the only reason I came..!" Maka said angry.

"Well..Maka I guess you just got tricked big time..!" Mr.King said laughing.

"Yeah..I guess I did," Maka shot back.

"But anyways,everyone go into the class meeting room.."Mr.King said in a high picth voice.

"Well,Maka im so exitced to actually get to fight and show everyone my new dances I have learned.." London said joyfully.

*A few minutes later *

Class Meeting Room

"Everyone please take a set..!" Mr.Kills said loudly.


"As you all know we will have a karakuri,tournament of skills today,so here are the rules..!"Mr.King annouced loudly.

"The rules are in this tournament you can not use strenght or punches or anytyper,just dances.." Mr.kills cut off Mr.King talking.

"So now that we have that all cleared up we can begin,so the first macth will be...' London Horo..vs Lious Falls..!" Mr.King said in a high pitch voice.

"London,thats you!Go up there and show everyone what you can do..!" Maka said joyfully.

"Now,are you two ready!?Now lets begin..!" annouced Mr.Kills.

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"Heh,so are you ready to lose London..!?" Lious said proudly.

"No Im not but the real question is are you..!?" London shot back.

"I will only lose if you beat me and that is not going to happen..! Now I guess I will start..!" Lious said smartly.

"Ok then,Im ready for anything you throw at me!" London said.

"Ok the, 'Matsu:Dance Of the Heavens!' " Lious shouted loudly.

"Uh Lious it didn't do anything.." London replied.

"Are you sure about that..? Look at your feet!" Lious said fastly.

"Huh..what the heck..!My feet are on fire..!" London shouted.

"Idiot,you must be stupid or crazy to not feel your own foot on fire..!" Lious said smartly.

"I gotta get my shoes off..or its going to go up my body and Im going to be just one big fire ball!" London thought to himself. *London bent down to take his shoes off* "Huh!? They arent hot..!? This isnt real fire its just an illusion...!" London said happily.

"Well your'e right for the first time!" Lious said back.

"But what does dance of the heavens have to do with fire..?" London replied clueless.

"Just becasue the name doesnt fit the power that comes out doesnt mean anything,haven't you been paying attention in class..?" Lios said.

"This dude is just to good and to smart he can easily beat me..but there is one way I can beat him and thats with the dance of shadows!" London thought to himself.


London-Chapter 6

"Ok Lious..! Im going to end this fight right now..!" London said loudly.

"Heh, I will see about that..!" Lious replied.

"Ok then..I warned you..! Im gonna unleash the power of the shadows art of ' Kira:Shadows of Death' " London shouted in concentration.

"What the heck..!? I never heard of this dance before..!" Liuos said scared.

*The room turned dark* * It became light around Lious and Lindon..Shadows rose up and grabed ahold of Lious's legs*

"Now..! Drag him under!" London cammanded the shadows.

"What the hell! Get these dang things off of me..!" Lious shouted.

*Lious was dragged under the ground by the shadows,only his head showing.*

"Heh..Lious its over now! art of 'Kira:Shadow knock out' " London shouted.

"What..!? I can't breathe...get..this..." Lious said in pain but passed out do to he wasn't able to breathe.

"The winner of this bout is, 'London Horo!" Mr.King shouted happily.

"Huff..that macth was a killer...but I won..." London said tired.

"Well good fight London..!You sure got the best of him..!" Mr.King told London joyfully.

"uh..Mr...Mr..King can I go to the nurse..?" London studdered.

"Why yes..you can London..!" said Mr.King.

A few Minutes Later

"Ok the next bout will be..' Maka Hill 'vs Toro Kushi " Mr.King annouced.

"What..!? I get to fight!? Yes finallt I get to show everyone that i am the best student here!" Maka shouted.

"Well Maka I want you to win this one and dont humilate yourself..ok..?" Mr.King said.

" I will win Mr.King..and I will prove you wrong about me..!" Maka shot back.

"Well I hope you do..!" Mr.King said with a smile on his face.

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"Are both of you ready..?" asked the teacher.

"Yeah..Im ready..lets just get this over with.." Maka replied.

".......yeah..." Toro said quitly.

"Then..begin!" shouted the teacher.

"So are you ready to lose..loser..!?" Maka asked Toro.

"............." Toro just stared at Maka.

"So I guess you are the quit thype of person..?" Maka said.

".........." Toro just looked at Maka intensly.

"Ok..Im tired of you not talking..im gonna kick your ass..!" Maka said.

"......." Toro still staring intensly on Maka.

" I will begin..! art of ' Fire:demons rage' " Maka shouted.

*Fire rose up all around Toro and dove in on him,ingulfing him in flames*

"Why dont we put that fire out..? art of ' Water:Blast from the sky. " Maka shouted again.



*Water started to fall from the ceilings and then a big blast of water fell ontop of Toro,putting out the flames*

"So your alittle cold..?what your'e not..!? Well I better make you cold then. Art of 'Ice:Block Breaker' " Maka shouted once more.

*all of a suddent cold steam rose from the ground and froze Toro,leaving him frozen solid*

"Heh..oh..you want more..?" Maka talked to himself.

"Maka stop..! You win!You win..!" shouted Mr.King.

"Yes! I finally won...!" Maka shouted while jumping.

"Sir..how are we going to get him unfroze..? If we done it by hand or waited for him to de-frost he will die..!" asked the teacher.

"I don't know.he might just die...I never really heard of the dance so I dont know how to reverse it.." said Mr.king sadly.

"Heh..you idoits..'un-do' " Maka whispered to himself.

*The ice broke and Toro fell to the ground,shivering*

HyuugaHinata
08-21-2008, 09:20 PM
It was really interesting to read! Nice work.