TsuHanyou
09-15-2008, 01:41 AM
Mods can you delete the old "Inuyasha: Travis The Hanyou." Story thread? I decided that story was to bad, and im redoing it. (im truly sorry Oliva 13)
I had to use a japanese name, i dont know what was goign through my head when i chose: "Travis" And there was to much dialouge, heres the new version!
heres prolouge and chapter one, (which i may add is much better now.)
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Ryoku The Hanyou
An Inuyasha Story.
Prologue:
The Hanyou Boy
Winry Kaguya Stood outside her house in the village, the wind was blowing, and she was staring off into the distance, she was pregnant, and she could feel the child kicking in her belly, standing next to her was another woman, dressed in a yellow and red kimono, she put her hand on Winrys shoulder, while a tiny boy dressed in a small plain red kimono, with silver hair and dog ears, clung to her leg.
Meanwhile, 30 miles away, a great war was taking place on the Mount Hakurei Battle field.
Warriors Demons off all kinds were raging battle against Each other, trying to prove who was the better.
Tensa Kaguya, a highly respected assistant leader of the dog demon tribe is shown kneeling at the feet of the Primary Leader of the Dog demon tribe, the Leader is wearing a silver kimono, and has silver hair, with a sword at his side.
Standing next to the leader, is his demon son Sesshomaru Who has basically the same look as his father.
Tensa Spoke: “Sir, the cat demon tribe is gaining in numbers, and our army’s resistance is weakening.”
The Leader replied: “Yes Tensa, perhaps it is time for some drastic measures.”
“What do you mean sir?” Tensa Asked.
Then there was a sound, a quiet sound, like a foot tapping the ground; an arm with sharp claws was suddenly sticking out of Tensa’s chest, he fell over, and standing there was a woman in a black suit, with trimmed black hair, a tail, and cat ears, her right hands claws were extremely sharp.
“Tensa!” The leader yelled, and dashed to the body lying on the ground.
The cat demon lunged, but was suddenly stopped by Sesshomaru, who had grabbed the cat demons arm.
“Your Mine.” Sesshomaru said.
The cat demon hissed, and they both disappeared.
The Dog Demon leader, turned Tensa over, blood was gushing out of the hole in his chest, his face had gone pale and his eyes were plain white.
The leader, now fueled with rage, roared into the sky, the sound covered the whole battlefield.
Suddenly the Dog demon army was pushing back the cat demons, as if they had gained more strength than ever before.
The Cat demon Sesshomaru was fighting called to retreat, and the dog demon tribe had won.
Meanwhile, back at the village, Winrys baby had just been born.
However Winry was living with a disease, one that hadn’t affected the fetus, and when the baby was born, she only had a few minutes to say how much she loves him. She cradled the little bundle in her arms, and removed a little bit of the blanket to show the baby’s face, she smiled when she say the little dog ears the baby had.
She took her final breath, and whispered:
“Ryoku.”
Chapter 1: Ryoku Kaguya
Our Story Starts In Tokyo Japan, at a large Blue house.
A 14-year-old boy sits on the roof of the house, he’s wearing a bandana and his hands are in his pocket, he wears a plain white shirt and baggy light brown pants.
His name Is Ryoku Kaguya.
He gazes at the clouds and wonders about his first day of high school tomorrow, he thinks about new friends he may make, new enemies he may make, and how hard his homework will be.
But there's one thing Ryoku worries about the most, what he is.
You see under that bandana, there are dog-ears, and the reason he wears gloves is because his hands have claws.
His Strength, speed, and sense of smell are about 5 times better then the average human beings.
Ryoku is an abnormal teenager.
For as long as he can remember he’s had this body of his, and the farthest he can remember is to when he was 5.
He’s tried to cut his claws, but they grow back the next day, and no matter how hard he tried he can’t fold his ears up.
People have seen him like this before, but they’ve all believed that it was just some sort of silly cosplay hat.
But What about in high school?
Will the students believe that it’s a hat?
What if they try to take it off?
And worst, he knows that hats and other such things are not allowed in school.
Ryoku has all these questions running through his mind, but there's one that he’s been asking himself forever.
“What am I?”
Ryoku shakes his head and trys to forget about his worries.
He jumps off his roof and lands on his feet in the backyard; he opened his back door and walked inside to the kitchen.
His orange cat, Aki, lay plopped against the wall on the kitchen counter.
Ryoku scratched Aki under the chin and he purred, Most of the cats he’s seen ran away from him like he was a dog, but Aki didn’t, when Ryoku went to the pet store and to the cat section, Aki was the only cat that wasn’t backed away in its cage hissing with its tail puffed up, instead it was bumping its head against the cage bars and asking for attention.
Ryoku walked to the fridge and took out a pitcher of iced tea, as he poured himself a glass the sound of the iced tea hitting the cup could be head throughout the house, the house was completely empty.
He takes a sip of the iced tea and pulls his wallet out of his pocket and examines how much money is left, Ryoku works as a catty for Golf and since he is able to carry two bags, earns about 100 dollars a week, that’s all he needs for the rest of the week so that he can buy supplies.
“Lets see, I held two catty bags for the week, earned 100 dollars and bought groceries, I still have…40 dollars left, good.”
Ryoku puts the wallet back in his pocket and pets Aki, and then starts upstairs.
“BANG BANG BANG!” Comes a sound from the door, the door is kicked down and a man in a black suit with a mask over his face and a gun bursts in.
The man looks around and spots Ryoku, then points the gun at him.
“Stay right there kid, just tell me where you keep your money and ill be on my way.”
Ryoku smirked at the man and slowly took out his wallet.
“You want my money? Then here, take it.”
And then in a blink, a spinning wallet hit the man in the eye; he dropped his gun and fell over.
Ryoku took this has his change and lunged off the stairs, grabbed the gun and slid under the man behind him.
“You Little Brat!” The man yelled, and was about to turn around when he felt a sharp pain in his back, Aki had jumped off the counter and was hanging on the mans back, He slowly slid off scratching the man with his claws.
“Stupid Cat! Get Off my back!” The man yelled.
“Good job Aki!” Ryoku said and held the gun by the front, then bashed it against the mans head, the man fell over out cold, Aki jumped off the man and Ryoku saw the large bleeding scratch marks on him.
Ryoku sighed and picked Aki up to pet him, then looked around.
“No one hurt, and nothing damaged, good.”
Ryoku slung the man over his shoulder and put the wallet back in his pocket.
“Be right Back Aki.” He Said.
The cat nodded, and watched as Ryoku put on a sweatshirt and left the house.
It was dark out and no one was around, it was perfect for him.
Ryoku ran down the driveway and dashed down the street towards the police station that was about a block away.
He reached the police station and walked through the doors, the pole chief was standing there.
“Ah, back again I see Ryoku.”
Ryoku Nodded.
“Got another one for you, this man tried to rob my house, what a mistake that was.”
Ryoku gave the man to two policemen who carried him away, the police chief watched the man be carried away, and then asked:
“And the scratches?”
“Aki, of course.” Ryoku replied.
Ryoku shook the chief’s hand, and turned around to walk out.
“We could always use you on the force you know.” The chief said.
Ryoku waved and continued walking.
“Ill fight crime on my own time chief.”
Ryoku walked out.
The chief stared at the doors and remembered when he first Met Ryoku.
It was 9 years ago, the chief was walking his dog along the sidewalk, he was passing Higurashi shrine, when he saw the 5-Year-Old Ryoku walking down the steps towards the sidewalk.
The chief knew the people that lived there and had never seen that boy before, so he went up to meet him, he asked Ryoku where he had come from, but all he responded with was a hand pointing to the well that was in higurashi shrine.
The chief had noticed the dog-ears and claws, but decided not to ask.
“Come on, lets see if we can find your parents, boy.”
The chief had brought him to the station and asked Ryoku his last name, which was “Kaguya”.
The man searched the name up in the data records, only one name came up: “Winry Kaguya.” He checked the information on her, apparently she had went missing a long time ago, and that no one has liven in the house since because it was bought officially by her.
The chief tried to bring Ryoku to a foster home, but each one had refused to take him in because on how he looked, they thought he was some kind of mutant.
So after giving up, The police chief let Ryoku live in His house, he came over every day to bring in food and take care of him, until he became 13 and old enough to take care of himself, the chief had seen how much he had matured and had decided to make him an official adult of Japan, it took a while to convince the government to make the boy an Official Adult, So they waited a year and watched how Ryoku dealed with being an adult, after seeing how much he was mature, they made him an official adult on the grounds that If made a mistake, this privilege could be taken away.
So Ryoku became an adult at 14, and being an adult he had access to his own credit card, allowing him to Buy groceries and earn money without argument or trouble.
The Police chief still comes over to check on Him, but not as much anymore.
“What A good kid.” The Chief said to himself.
Ryoku ran back down the street and walked into his house.
Aki was perched on the counter besides him ready to greet him with a head bump.
Ryoku scratched Aki and head upstairs.
He walked into his room, the walls were lined with Posters from popular TV shows, and there was a medium sized TV parked in front of his bed, with A Nintendo 64 sitting under it.
He set his clothes up for school and his backpack to, and then lay down in Bed and turned the light off, he watched TV until he fell asleep; tomorrow was a big day for him.
Kagome Higurashi, a 15 year old girl is packing her bags for school tomorrow, she hears a knock on the door, and opens it to find her 9 year old little brother, sota standing there rubbing his eye.
“Good Night Sis.” Says sota while yawning.
“Good Night sota, have a good sleep.” She replied with a smile on her face, and then watched as sota left and closed her door.
She sits down on her bed and begins talking to herself.
“Well tomorrows a school day, and im going to actually be going to school, it may not be that important to Inuyasha, but I need to pass 9th grade!”
“I Told Inuyasha id be back in two days, and knowing him he’s probably angry.”
“Well I need to hit the sack, don’t want to be late for school tomorrow.”
And with that she turned off her light and went to sleep.
I had to use a japanese name, i dont know what was goign through my head when i chose: "Travis" And there was to much dialouge, heres the new version!
heres prolouge and chapter one, (which i may add is much better now.)
_________________________________
Ryoku The Hanyou
An Inuyasha Story.
Prologue:
The Hanyou Boy
Winry Kaguya Stood outside her house in the village, the wind was blowing, and she was staring off into the distance, she was pregnant, and she could feel the child kicking in her belly, standing next to her was another woman, dressed in a yellow and red kimono, she put her hand on Winrys shoulder, while a tiny boy dressed in a small plain red kimono, with silver hair and dog ears, clung to her leg.
Meanwhile, 30 miles away, a great war was taking place on the Mount Hakurei Battle field.
Warriors Demons off all kinds were raging battle against Each other, trying to prove who was the better.
Tensa Kaguya, a highly respected assistant leader of the dog demon tribe is shown kneeling at the feet of the Primary Leader of the Dog demon tribe, the Leader is wearing a silver kimono, and has silver hair, with a sword at his side.
Standing next to the leader, is his demon son Sesshomaru Who has basically the same look as his father.
Tensa Spoke: “Sir, the cat demon tribe is gaining in numbers, and our army’s resistance is weakening.”
The Leader replied: “Yes Tensa, perhaps it is time for some drastic measures.”
“What do you mean sir?” Tensa Asked.
Then there was a sound, a quiet sound, like a foot tapping the ground; an arm with sharp claws was suddenly sticking out of Tensa’s chest, he fell over, and standing there was a woman in a black suit, with trimmed black hair, a tail, and cat ears, her right hands claws were extremely sharp.
“Tensa!” The leader yelled, and dashed to the body lying on the ground.
The cat demon lunged, but was suddenly stopped by Sesshomaru, who had grabbed the cat demons arm.
“Your Mine.” Sesshomaru said.
The cat demon hissed, and they both disappeared.
The Dog Demon leader, turned Tensa over, blood was gushing out of the hole in his chest, his face had gone pale and his eyes were plain white.
The leader, now fueled with rage, roared into the sky, the sound covered the whole battlefield.
Suddenly the Dog demon army was pushing back the cat demons, as if they had gained more strength than ever before.
The Cat demon Sesshomaru was fighting called to retreat, and the dog demon tribe had won.
Meanwhile, back at the village, Winrys baby had just been born.
However Winry was living with a disease, one that hadn’t affected the fetus, and when the baby was born, she only had a few minutes to say how much she loves him. She cradled the little bundle in her arms, and removed a little bit of the blanket to show the baby’s face, she smiled when she say the little dog ears the baby had.
She took her final breath, and whispered:
“Ryoku.”
Chapter 1: Ryoku Kaguya
Our Story Starts In Tokyo Japan, at a large Blue house.
A 14-year-old boy sits on the roof of the house, he’s wearing a bandana and his hands are in his pocket, he wears a plain white shirt and baggy light brown pants.
His name Is Ryoku Kaguya.
He gazes at the clouds and wonders about his first day of high school tomorrow, he thinks about new friends he may make, new enemies he may make, and how hard his homework will be.
But there's one thing Ryoku worries about the most, what he is.
You see under that bandana, there are dog-ears, and the reason he wears gloves is because his hands have claws.
His Strength, speed, and sense of smell are about 5 times better then the average human beings.
Ryoku is an abnormal teenager.
For as long as he can remember he’s had this body of his, and the farthest he can remember is to when he was 5.
He’s tried to cut his claws, but they grow back the next day, and no matter how hard he tried he can’t fold his ears up.
People have seen him like this before, but they’ve all believed that it was just some sort of silly cosplay hat.
But What about in high school?
Will the students believe that it’s a hat?
What if they try to take it off?
And worst, he knows that hats and other such things are not allowed in school.
Ryoku has all these questions running through his mind, but there's one that he’s been asking himself forever.
“What am I?”
Ryoku shakes his head and trys to forget about his worries.
He jumps off his roof and lands on his feet in the backyard; he opened his back door and walked inside to the kitchen.
His orange cat, Aki, lay plopped against the wall on the kitchen counter.
Ryoku scratched Aki under the chin and he purred, Most of the cats he’s seen ran away from him like he was a dog, but Aki didn’t, when Ryoku went to the pet store and to the cat section, Aki was the only cat that wasn’t backed away in its cage hissing with its tail puffed up, instead it was bumping its head against the cage bars and asking for attention.
Ryoku walked to the fridge and took out a pitcher of iced tea, as he poured himself a glass the sound of the iced tea hitting the cup could be head throughout the house, the house was completely empty.
He takes a sip of the iced tea and pulls his wallet out of his pocket and examines how much money is left, Ryoku works as a catty for Golf and since he is able to carry two bags, earns about 100 dollars a week, that’s all he needs for the rest of the week so that he can buy supplies.
“Lets see, I held two catty bags for the week, earned 100 dollars and bought groceries, I still have…40 dollars left, good.”
Ryoku puts the wallet back in his pocket and pets Aki, and then starts upstairs.
“BANG BANG BANG!” Comes a sound from the door, the door is kicked down and a man in a black suit with a mask over his face and a gun bursts in.
The man looks around and spots Ryoku, then points the gun at him.
“Stay right there kid, just tell me where you keep your money and ill be on my way.”
Ryoku smirked at the man and slowly took out his wallet.
“You want my money? Then here, take it.”
And then in a blink, a spinning wallet hit the man in the eye; he dropped his gun and fell over.
Ryoku took this has his change and lunged off the stairs, grabbed the gun and slid under the man behind him.
“You Little Brat!” The man yelled, and was about to turn around when he felt a sharp pain in his back, Aki had jumped off the counter and was hanging on the mans back, He slowly slid off scratching the man with his claws.
“Stupid Cat! Get Off my back!” The man yelled.
“Good job Aki!” Ryoku said and held the gun by the front, then bashed it against the mans head, the man fell over out cold, Aki jumped off the man and Ryoku saw the large bleeding scratch marks on him.
Ryoku sighed and picked Aki up to pet him, then looked around.
“No one hurt, and nothing damaged, good.”
Ryoku slung the man over his shoulder and put the wallet back in his pocket.
“Be right Back Aki.” He Said.
The cat nodded, and watched as Ryoku put on a sweatshirt and left the house.
It was dark out and no one was around, it was perfect for him.
Ryoku ran down the driveway and dashed down the street towards the police station that was about a block away.
He reached the police station and walked through the doors, the pole chief was standing there.
“Ah, back again I see Ryoku.”
Ryoku Nodded.
“Got another one for you, this man tried to rob my house, what a mistake that was.”
Ryoku gave the man to two policemen who carried him away, the police chief watched the man be carried away, and then asked:
“And the scratches?”
“Aki, of course.” Ryoku replied.
Ryoku shook the chief’s hand, and turned around to walk out.
“We could always use you on the force you know.” The chief said.
Ryoku waved and continued walking.
“Ill fight crime on my own time chief.”
Ryoku walked out.
The chief stared at the doors and remembered when he first Met Ryoku.
It was 9 years ago, the chief was walking his dog along the sidewalk, he was passing Higurashi shrine, when he saw the 5-Year-Old Ryoku walking down the steps towards the sidewalk.
The chief knew the people that lived there and had never seen that boy before, so he went up to meet him, he asked Ryoku where he had come from, but all he responded with was a hand pointing to the well that was in higurashi shrine.
The chief had noticed the dog-ears and claws, but decided not to ask.
“Come on, lets see if we can find your parents, boy.”
The chief had brought him to the station and asked Ryoku his last name, which was “Kaguya”.
The man searched the name up in the data records, only one name came up: “Winry Kaguya.” He checked the information on her, apparently she had went missing a long time ago, and that no one has liven in the house since because it was bought officially by her.
The chief tried to bring Ryoku to a foster home, but each one had refused to take him in because on how he looked, they thought he was some kind of mutant.
So after giving up, The police chief let Ryoku live in His house, he came over every day to bring in food and take care of him, until he became 13 and old enough to take care of himself, the chief had seen how much he had matured and had decided to make him an official adult of Japan, it took a while to convince the government to make the boy an Official Adult, So they waited a year and watched how Ryoku dealed with being an adult, after seeing how much he was mature, they made him an official adult on the grounds that If made a mistake, this privilege could be taken away.
So Ryoku became an adult at 14, and being an adult he had access to his own credit card, allowing him to Buy groceries and earn money without argument or trouble.
The Police chief still comes over to check on Him, but not as much anymore.
“What A good kid.” The Chief said to himself.
Ryoku ran back down the street and walked into his house.
Aki was perched on the counter besides him ready to greet him with a head bump.
Ryoku scratched Aki and head upstairs.
He walked into his room, the walls were lined with Posters from popular TV shows, and there was a medium sized TV parked in front of his bed, with A Nintendo 64 sitting under it.
He set his clothes up for school and his backpack to, and then lay down in Bed and turned the light off, he watched TV until he fell asleep; tomorrow was a big day for him.
Kagome Higurashi, a 15 year old girl is packing her bags for school tomorrow, she hears a knock on the door, and opens it to find her 9 year old little brother, sota standing there rubbing his eye.
“Good Night Sis.” Says sota while yawning.
“Good Night sota, have a good sleep.” She replied with a smile on her face, and then watched as sota left and closed her door.
She sits down on her bed and begins talking to herself.
“Well tomorrows a school day, and im going to actually be going to school, it may not be that important to Inuyasha, but I need to pass 9th grade!”
“I Told Inuyasha id be back in two days, and knowing him he’s probably angry.”
“Well I need to hit the sack, don’t want to be late for school tomorrow.”
And with that she turned off her light and went to sleep.