SooperTrooper
10-05-2008, 05:49 PM
Crescent Genesis
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Crescent Genesis is a story about a land different from ours. The people there have something called 'Mana' and can use it in many extrodinary ways. To unlock this 'Mana' they have to use 'Jito'. The 'Jito' is another word for 'spell' in this mystical land. There is 1000 Jito spells, probably even more! The person who uses Jito is called a 'Jikan' or 'Jito User'. Before you can become a full fledged Jikan, you must enter the 'Dojo' in the city you live in. When you enter the Dojo, you learn the 10 basic Dojo Jito, also called, D-Jito.
Once you graduate from your Dojo, you become a 'Jikan'. When a Jikan, you are free to learn the rest of the Jito. The goal for the Jikan's, is to get every single spell, and become king or queen of one of the major cities.
The Three major cities are Sukugi, Jinyo and Hiroka. When you become a Jikan, you are sent to one of these major cities! [you join the one in your country / district]. When a Jikan, you are named one of these three, according to the city you live in. You are either a Dark Light [Sukugi], Light [Hiroka] or Holy Light [Jinyo]. These are alignment elements, it says where you are from, pretty much.
The main city is Hiroka, it is in the middle of the whole place, the other cities and towns surround it. In Hiroka, there can only be a king. Once you become king, you are master of the city. The king in Hiroka holds the most legendary, delicate thing in the whole world. The Crescent Genesis. This holds the power of the three gods!
the first god is Kinsin, she is god of the mana.
the second god is Yokomi, he is god of the people.
the third god, who is the creator of everything, is Nokko, he is god of the Jito and everything created by nature.
The three vectors hold the three major cities as stated before. The Dark Vector, the Genesis Vector and the Heaven Vector
Each Jikan recieves a necklace with ten beads to start with. Once you become a more experienced Jikan, more beads are added. These are called Soul Beads. They hold the power of your soul, which holds your mana. These beads are white, and when you use up a ceartin amount of mana, your beads turn a light blue, showing that your power has gone down, and you can only sue so much more Jito before you have to rest. On the front bead, is the Insignia of your great vector. These show your alignments with your great vector.
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Now, in the present time, the story is about a boy who enters the Dojo, in hope of becoming the gretest Jikan ever! This boy's name is Hiro Makami. He lives in the small town of Okogi. Now. . .for the story to unfold, and for you to see the magical wonders of the world of the Jikan!!
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Chapter One: Hiro Makami!
A soft wind carried itself through the small, dark town of Okagi. It seemed to go n forever now, there was always wind in this village, probably because it was a village in the wind territory. The sound of gentle creaking seemed to carry out in the whole village, and it seemed to never stop. Day came pretty quickly, though it seemed to Hiro Makami, the ten year old boy that lived in this small town. This young boy lived in a small house just on the edge of town. The roof was a light green, and the base of the house was white. Hiro’s eyes slowly opened to the filter of light then fell upon his face from his bedroom window. He smirked “Last day at the Dojo!” he yelled in joy as he pushed the sheets of his bed of himself, and ran out of the door of his house, he stopped in the kitchen that came after his bedroom and looked around. No one else was awake yet, and this made Hiro pretty annoyed. He grabbed a green apple and bit into it. He gave a gentle grin as he munched on this apple, loving the taste. Hiro slowly placed the apple down on the brass counter and walked into the small living room that was to the left of the kitchen. He sat down on the mat that lay in front of a small tea table. He grabbed a book and started reading. The book was entitled ‘Hitsichi Nohomi’s guide to perfectness’. Every time Hiro finished a sentence, he seem to role his eyes in stupidity coming from the book. He set the book back in it’s place, and walked over to his bedroom. Moments later, he stepped out with himself fully dressed and having his backpack. His mother stood in the kitchen smiling.
“Have a great day at school honey!” she announced as he nodded and walked out of the house. Light flooded in the house when Hiro opened the door, then seemed to leave after he shut it. His feet took light steps as he walked on his way to the dojo. His eyes glanced up to a mountain that was tinted purple with a little bit of blue. The sun reflected off of it, making it glow with awe. This mountain was called Goji Mountain, the highest mountain in the Genesis vector. He smiled as his eyes spotted the small temple at the top. This temple was a praying temple, that every successful Jikan went to, to pray on the god of Jito, Nokko. Hiro sighed “One day, I’ll be praying at that temple!” he announced as he kept walking to the Dojo.
Moments later, Hiro entered the Dojo, which was an all white building with the insignia of the Genesis vector on it. He looked around and put his backpack on a shelf with the others. He walked over and sat down on a mat at the head of the class, beside a red headed girl and Blue headed boy. Hiro turned his attention to the boy next to him and gave a smirk “Tangosu-Kun! This is it! The final chapter of the Dojo chronicles!” he said as the boy gave a pathetic smirk “Hiro-Sama, why is everything to you, chronicle?! Baby Chronicle, Kid Chronicle…girl-loving chronicle?!!” he said as Hiro shrugged “I don’t know” he said smiling “It sounds more epic!” he smirked greatly as Tangosu sighed.
Chapter 2: Hiro V.S Tangosu
The day seemed to go on for a while now. Tangosu and Hiro sat on their mats, watching their sensei, Ukami Itachi, teach them the basic measures of being a Jikan. “Now class, this is your last year at the dojo, so, I’m going to let you off early!” he announced as everyone grinned. Ukami grinned back and looked at the clock that was ticking rather loudly on the wall “Okay, everyone remember to come here tomorrow for the official Jikan walk. That’s where you get your official badge to let you go to Hiroka!” he said as everyone cheered and rushed out the door. Ukami smirked “Hiro…” he spoke slowly and quietly to himself.
Tangosu and Hiro stepped outside with grins on their faces “Tangosu-Kun” he began as Tangosu’s head shot toward Hiro’s “Y-yes, Hiro-Sama?” he asked quietly “I think it’s time again” he said as Tangosu smirked “Time to show our strength as a true Jikan?” he asked as Hiro nodded “Lets” he said as he ran into the field, and up to a metal gate that was painted green. Tangosu ran after him with happiness. Moments later, Tangosu and Hiro mat in the training field. There was a boulder on the left, and then there was nothing else except field. Tangosu closed his eyes "Okay Hiro-Sama, I'm strong now" he said as Hiro gave a smirk at him "Begin!" he announced as silence covered the field.
A few people gathered around the fight. They all started saying 'Fight!' repeatedly. Tangosu's glasses reflected the intense light of the sun, and Hiro smirked "Ready for this!?" he asked as the crowed roared in excitement. Tangosu looked up with a stern look on his face "Right!" he said as Hiro clapped his hands together "Do-Jito number 4; Basic Doppelganger!" he said as the image of Hiro started to get blurry and sway. Soon enough, a full doppelganger of the original Hiro swayed out of the normal Hiro, and proportioned himself beside him. The clone smirked and ran at Tangosu. Hiro ran after the clone immediately. Tangosu growled and clapped his hands together too "Jito Number 11" he said as Hiro's eyes widened "He can use Senior Jikan Jito? When did he learn to use Senior Jikan Jito?" he asked as Tangosu bit his lip "Advanced Doppelganger Spell!" he said as Hiro's eyes widened. Tangosu unleashed two clones that were fully healthy. They ran at Hiro's Clone and punched at the same time, making the clone fade into nothing. The Tangosu clones immediatly turned right and slammed their fists into Hiro's arm. Hiro did a backflip and grabbed his arm.
"Ow" he said rubbing his arm. Tangosu gave a small smirk "I-i hit you, Hiro-Sama!" he said as the crowd stopped their cheering. Usually, when ever tangosu and Hiro fought, Hiro always evaded Tangosu's moves form his clones, or clone. But, for some reason, tangosu hit him.
Chapter 3: Failure; Friendship!
Hiro tilted his head up to take a glance at the determined face of Tangosu. His eyes shot a look towards Hiro as he clapped his hands together. Hiro gasped at this sight of him doing another jito after that senior jikan spell. Hiro growled "No!" he said as he clapped his hands together fast "First Do-Jito spell; Basic Dojo Punch!" he said as he lifted his fist up and it began glowing a neon yellow. He ran forward and punched both of the clones and they faded into nothingness. Hiro kept on going and tried to punch Tangosu. Tangosu jumped in the air and did a backflip, evading the attack. When he landed, Hiro jumped right in front of him and attempted a normal kick.
Tangosu blocked his kick with his arm, and punched with his other arm, sending a heavy fist toward Hiro. He grabbed his fist and kneed his stomach, making him cough up blood. Tangosu did another backflip, going farther away from Hiro. Hiro slowly narrowed his eyes toward Tangosu "Your stronger, Tangosu-Kun!" he said as Tangosu smiled "Thank you, Hiro-Sama" he said slowly as he looked down "Hiro-Sama" he said slowly as Hiro widened his eyes "Yes?" he asked as Tangosu looked up "After we are given our medals to become official Senior Jikan..." he said slowly as Hiro looked at him confusingly "I can't be your friend" he said as Hiro's eyes opened wide and looked at Tangosu "Tangosu-Kun!" he said as Tangosu shook his head "Goodbye, Hiro" he said as Hiro's eyes widened at Tangosu dropping the 'sama' part off his name.
The next day, Hiro and the rest of the Dojo students crowded in towards the ceremony of naming. All the students got on a long bench that was ment to hold them all. The parents and guardians stood in the crowd, smiling. The fathers all smirking and bragging about their childrens powers. People were taking pictures and all that. Finally, one of the Dojo sensei calmed the drowd down and everyone looked at Ukami.
"Parents, Grandparents" he began as he looked at a man that was very aged "And Lord Hakumei" he said, addressing him in a special way "I would like to welcome you all to the official naming of the Senior Jikan. Once given their medal, the students may go over to sensei Jupon" he said, refering to a middle-aged man standing far away form the crowd "And wait for the others, then, they will set out with me and Yuuga Sensei, to Hiroka to meet the king, Lord Gichoji, and will all meet him personally" he said as mumbling began in the crowd, then, the ceremony began.
Soon after all of the students had officially become Jikan, the crowd roared in applause and tears of joy. Then, everyone was off, setting off to the main city, Hiroka. Hiro and Tangosu stayed away from eachother, usually looking at eachother with anger and sadness, knowing that it would never be the same again.
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Crescent Genesis is a story about a land different from ours. The people there have something called 'Mana' and can use it in many extrodinary ways. To unlock this 'Mana' they have to use 'Jito'. The 'Jito' is another word for 'spell' in this mystical land. There is 1000 Jito spells, probably even more! The person who uses Jito is called a 'Jikan' or 'Jito User'. Before you can become a full fledged Jikan, you must enter the 'Dojo' in the city you live in. When you enter the Dojo, you learn the 10 basic Dojo Jito, also called, D-Jito.
Once you graduate from your Dojo, you become a 'Jikan'. When a Jikan, you are free to learn the rest of the Jito. The goal for the Jikan's, is to get every single spell, and become king or queen of one of the major cities.
The Three major cities are Sukugi, Jinyo and Hiroka. When you become a Jikan, you are sent to one of these major cities! [you join the one in your country / district]. When a Jikan, you are named one of these three, according to the city you live in. You are either a Dark Light [Sukugi], Light [Hiroka] or Holy Light [Jinyo]. These are alignment elements, it says where you are from, pretty much.
The main city is Hiroka, it is in the middle of the whole place, the other cities and towns surround it. In Hiroka, there can only be a king. Once you become king, you are master of the city. The king in Hiroka holds the most legendary, delicate thing in the whole world. The Crescent Genesis. This holds the power of the three gods!
the first god is Kinsin, she is god of the mana.
the second god is Yokomi, he is god of the people.
the third god, who is the creator of everything, is Nokko, he is god of the Jito and everything created by nature.
The three vectors hold the three major cities as stated before. The Dark Vector, the Genesis Vector and the Heaven Vector
Each Jikan recieves a necklace with ten beads to start with. Once you become a more experienced Jikan, more beads are added. These are called Soul Beads. They hold the power of your soul, which holds your mana. These beads are white, and when you use up a ceartin amount of mana, your beads turn a light blue, showing that your power has gone down, and you can only sue so much more Jito before you have to rest. On the front bead, is the Insignia of your great vector. These show your alignments with your great vector.
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Now, in the present time, the story is about a boy who enters the Dojo, in hope of becoming the gretest Jikan ever! This boy's name is Hiro Makami. He lives in the small town of Okogi. Now. . .for the story to unfold, and for you to see the magical wonders of the world of the Jikan!!
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Chapter One: Hiro Makami!
A soft wind carried itself through the small, dark town of Okagi. It seemed to go n forever now, there was always wind in this village, probably because it was a village in the wind territory. The sound of gentle creaking seemed to carry out in the whole village, and it seemed to never stop. Day came pretty quickly, though it seemed to Hiro Makami, the ten year old boy that lived in this small town. This young boy lived in a small house just on the edge of town. The roof was a light green, and the base of the house was white. Hiro’s eyes slowly opened to the filter of light then fell upon his face from his bedroom window. He smirked “Last day at the Dojo!” he yelled in joy as he pushed the sheets of his bed of himself, and ran out of the door of his house, he stopped in the kitchen that came after his bedroom and looked around. No one else was awake yet, and this made Hiro pretty annoyed. He grabbed a green apple and bit into it. He gave a gentle grin as he munched on this apple, loving the taste. Hiro slowly placed the apple down on the brass counter and walked into the small living room that was to the left of the kitchen. He sat down on the mat that lay in front of a small tea table. He grabbed a book and started reading. The book was entitled ‘Hitsichi Nohomi’s guide to perfectness’. Every time Hiro finished a sentence, he seem to role his eyes in stupidity coming from the book. He set the book back in it’s place, and walked over to his bedroom. Moments later, he stepped out with himself fully dressed and having his backpack. His mother stood in the kitchen smiling.
“Have a great day at school honey!” she announced as he nodded and walked out of the house. Light flooded in the house when Hiro opened the door, then seemed to leave after he shut it. His feet took light steps as he walked on his way to the dojo. His eyes glanced up to a mountain that was tinted purple with a little bit of blue. The sun reflected off of it, making it glow with awe. This mountain was called Goji Mountain, the highest mountain in the Genesis vector. He smiled as his eyes spotted the small temple at the top. This temple was a praying temple, that every successful Jikan went to, to pray on the god of Jito, Nokko. Hiro sighed “One day, I’ll be praying at that temple!” he announced as he kept walking to the Dojo.
Moments later, Hiro entered the Dojo, which was an all white building with the insignia of the Genesis vector on it. He looked around and put his backpack on a shelf with the others. He walked over and sat down on a mat at the head of the class, beside a red headed girl and Blue headed boy. Hiro turned his attention to the boy next to him and gave a smirk “Tangosu-Kun! This is it! The final chapter of the Dojo chronicles!” he said as the boy gave a pathetic smirk “Hiro-Sama, why is everything to you, chronicle?! Baby Chronicle, Kid Chronicle…girl-loving chronicle?!!” he said as Hiro shrugged “I don’t know” he said smiling “It sounds more epic!” he smirked greatly as Tangosu sighed.
Chapter 2: Hiro V.S Tangosu
The day seemed to go on for a while now. Tangosu and Hiro sat on their mats, watching their sensei, Ukami Itachi, teach them the basic measures of being a Jikan. “Now class, this is your last year at the dojo, so, I’m going to let you off early!” he announced as everyone grinned. Ukami grinned back and looked at the clock that was ticking rather loudly on the wall “Okay, everyone remember to come here tomorrow for the official Jikan walk. That’s where you get your official badge to let you go to Hiroka!” he said as everyone cheered and rushed out the door. Ukami smirked “Hiro…” he spoke slowly and quietly to himself.
Tangosu and Hiro stepped outside with grins on their faces “Tangosu-Kun” he began as Tangosu’s head shot toward Hiro’s “Y-yes, Hiro-Sama?” he asked quietly “I think it’s time again” he said as Tangosu smirked “Time to show our strength as a true Jikan?” he asked as Hiro nodded “Lets” he said as he ran into the field, and up to a metal gate that was painted green. Tangosu ran after him with happiness. Moments later, Tangosu and Hiro mat in the training field. There was a boulder on the left, and then there was nothing else except field. Tangosu closed his eyes "Okay Hiro-Sama, I'm strong now" he said as Hiro gave a smirk at him "Begin!" he announced as silence covered the field.
A few people gathered around the fight. They all started saying 'Fight!' repeatedly. Tangosu's glasses reflected the intense light of the sun, and Hiro smirked "Ready for this!?" he asked as the crowed roared in excitement. Tangosu looked up with a stern look on his face "Right!" he said as Hiro clapped his hands together "Do-Jito number 4; Basic Doppelganger!" he said as the image of Hiro started to get blurry and sway. Soon enough, a full doppelganger of the original Hiro swayed out of the normal Hiro, and proportioned himself beside him. The clone smirked and ran at Tangosu. Hiro ran after the clone immediately. Tangosu growled and clapped his hands together too "Jito Number 11" he said as Hiro's eyes widened "He can use Senior Jikan Jito? When did he learn to use Senior Jikan Jito?" he asked as Tangosu bit his lip "Advanced Doppelganger Spell!" he said as Hiro's eyes widened. Tangosu unleashed two clones that were fully healthy. They ran at Hiro's Clone and punched at the same time, making the clone fade into nothing. The Tangosu clones immediatly turned right and slammed their fists into Hiro's arm. Hiro did a backflip and grabbed his arm.
"Ow" he said rubbing his arm. Tangosu gave a small smirk "I-i hit you, Hiro-Sama!" he said as the crowd stopped their cheering. Usually, when ever tangosu and Hiro fought, Hiro always evaded Tangosu's moves form his clones, or clone. But, for some reason, tangosu hit him.
Chapter 3: Failure; Friendship!
Hiro tilted his head up to take a glance at the determined face of Tangosu. His eyes shot a look towards Hiro as he clapped his hands together. Hiro gasped at this sight of him doing another jito after that senior jikan spell. Hiro growled "No!" he said as he clapped his hands together fast "First Do-Jito spell; Basic Dojo Punch!" he said as he lifted his fist up and it began glowing a neon yellow. He ran forward and punched both of the clones and they faded into nothingness. Hiro kept on going and tried to punch Tangosu. Tangosu jumped in the air and did a backflip, evading the attack. When he landed, Hiro jumped right in front of him and attempted a normal kick.
Tangosu blocked his kick with his arm, and punched with his other arm, sending a heavy fist toward Hiro. He grabbed his fist and kneed his stomach, making him cough up blood. Tangosu did another backflip, going farther away from Hiro. Hiro slowly narrowed his eyes toward Tangosu "Your stronger, Tangosu-Kun!" he said as Tangosu smiled "Thank you, Hiro-Sama" he said slowly as he looked down "Hiro-Sama" he said slowly as Hiro widened his eyes "Yes?" he asked as Tangosu looked up "After we are given our medals to become official Senior Jikan..." he said slowly as Hiro looked at him confusingly "I can't be your friend" he said as Hiro's eyes opened wide and looked at Tangosu "Tangosu-Kun!" he said as Tangosu shook his head "Goodbye, Hiro" he said as Hiro's eyes widened at Tangosu dropping the 'sama' part off his name.
The next day, Hiro and the rest of the Dojo students crowded in towards the ceremony of naming. All the students got on a long bench that was ment to hold them all. The parents and guardians stood in the crowd, smiling. The fathers all smirking and bragging about their childrens powers. People were taking pictures and all that. Finally, one of the Dojo sensei calmed the drowd down and everyone looked at Ukami.
"Parents, Grandparents" he began as he looked at a man that was very aged "And Lord Hakumei" he said, addressing him in a special way "I would like to welcome you all to the official naming of the Senior Jikan. Once given their medal, the students may go over to sensei Jupon" he said, refering to a middle-aged man standing far away form the crowd "And wait for the others, then, they will set out with me and Yuuga Sensei, to Hiroka to meet the king, Lord Gichoji, and will all meet him personally" he said as mumbling began in the crowd, then, the ceremony began.
Soon after all of the students had officially become Jikan, the crowd roared in applause and tears of joy. Then, everyone was off, setting off to the main city, Hiroka. Hiro and Tangosu stayed away from eachother, usually looking at eachother with anger and sadness, knowing that it would never be the same again.