Red Valley

[majinsharingan]

{soft guitar parts and slow bass}
{either the verses or the chorus is sung by a second singer}

I've had this feeling now
For three days straight
Waiting for it to go away
Is confusion supposed to hurt this bad?

Wasting away
The days run by
Not quite sure
To live or die
Running away from this

And I'm feeling
Some affliction
And I'm hoping
For redemption
But you can't save me
No you can't save me
No no

(drums and keyboards come in)

{need part 1 of first verse}

I lay awake in thought
Upon my bed
Dreaming of you
Dreaming of her
My hands tied behind my back

I thought I didn't know
Who I should choose
But in reality
It was always you
No doubt in my mind

And I'm feeling
Some affliction
And I'm hoping
For redemption
But you can't save me
No you can't save me
No no

{guitar solo similar to the synthesizers in 23 by Jimmy Eat World, keyboards set to strings}

{guitar and bass parts from the intro}

{in need of bridge}

And I'm feeling
Some affliction
And I'm hoping
For redemption
But you can't save me
No you can't save me
No no
{in need of add-on to the chorus}

{in need of closing verse}