How to cure my broken heart?

[Sai15]

{verse 1}
You pulled in me to your heart/
you said i mean everything to you/
we even started to make plans/
my heart knows that i finally found the one/
lately we've been changing/
we dont even talk anymore/
i wondering if your even thinking about me/
or maybe its the girl on your computer screen/

[CHORUS]
I am dying with out you/
all the things you said weren't even true/
You love me but you don't even listen to me/
I'm lost but you dont care/
you made my heart fall to pieces/
but i say to myself/
how to cure my broken heart?/

{verse 2}
Im laying dead on the floor today/
dont know even what to say/
my heart burns with the aches that your no longer mine/
lately i've been changing/
I dont even want to talk to youanymore/
im wondering if your even thinking about me/
or maybe its still the girl on your computer screen/

[CHORUS] x2
I am dying with out you/
all the things you said weren't even true/
You love me but you don't even listen to me/
I'm lost but you dont care/
you made my heart fall to pieces/
but i say to myself/
how to cure my broken heart?/

{verse 3}
when you even dare to call me (call me)/
i will never take you back/
but i will will ask you one question.../

You made my heart fall to pieces/
How are you gonna cure my heart.../

[Damon163]

I love it...:love: 10/10

[majinsharingan]

As always you need to work on your lyrics but choppy lyrics aren't rare in love/break-up songs. I couldn't find a consistent rhythm either so I give it maybe a 5/10.
Although I do like that you finished this one.

[Soft Rain Mist]

I think it's very well spoken from your heart.