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Tsukiko
11-12-2007, 02:43 PM
Yay! This forum is up...and I shall be the first..too..post here!! =D

Ho hum...'kay, here it is. ^-^

Crimson tears,
Falling from aqua eyes.
Covered in black,
But not yet quite dark.

Drifting sand,
Controled by his hand.
Out alone,
No comforting words.

Silent wind,
At the moonlit night.
By himself he wanders,
With hopeless eyes.

Unloved,
Unwanted.
Hateful has his heart turned.
But not yet fully evil,
Not yet overcome.

Crimson Sand,
Master of the Desert.
Unbeatable strength,
A necessary existence.

Bitter agony,
Unbearable pain.
A wounded heart,
Innocence still fares.

Seen as morbid,
Monsterous and cruel.
Yet though he is,
Gentle and kind,
Pure and true.

No more crimson tears to fall.
The last one,
A promise to be strong.

Crimson Sand,
A misunderstood soul.
Just needed sympathy,
Just wanted to be loved.

Zent
11-12-2007, 03:37 PM
Nice poem :) Sounds like you're talking about gaara :P

Ido
11-12-2007, 05:07 PM
lol, she must be, she's a gaara fan.

And awsome poem Crimson ^_^

MANGA_FREAK4
11-12-2007, 06:05 PM
Wow ^^

Its so...
well...
Peotic XD

I LOVE IT!

Tsukiko
11-12-2007, 06:07 PM
Thank...you...=] Lol, and yes, of course its about Gaara-kuun..lol. Its the best one I've wrote about him...lol.

akatsukigirl300
11-12-2007, 11:49 PM
*Gives stars on poem*

Niiice. =]

shikamaru
11-25-2007, 12:11 AM
nice.
i like it.

Tsukiko
11-25-2007, 02:14 AM
arigatouuu!! ^^

draninja
11-25-2007, 02:51 AM
your talking about Gaara right

Tsukiko
11-25-2007, 02:52 AM
^of course. ^^

draninja
11-25-2007, 02:53 AM
Because He Is Awsome

Tsukiko
11-25-2007, 02:59 AM
yup. ^^ I have quite a few of him...lol...but this is the only one Ill ever post.

draninja
11-25-2007, 03:01 AM
did you find that off the web =z or did you think it up =)

Tsukiko
11-25-2007, 03:02 AM
I wrote it of course!! XD

draninja
11-25-2007, 03:02 AM
yay a true Gaara FC leader

JackpottJinchuuriki
11-25-2007, 03:06 AM
lol its magnificent!!! i loved it!! xD
ur realli good!!! u better bcome huge and famous 4 this stuff cuz ur great at writing!!! keep up the good work!! xD

draninja
11-25-2007, 03:08 AM
somebody posts about 613 posts more than usual lol

Tsukiko
11-25-2007, 03:49 AM
lol its magnificent!!! i loved it!! xD
ur realli good!!! u better bcome huge and famous 4 this stuff cuz ur great at writing!!! keep up the good work!! xD

aw thank chuu. =3

JackpottJinchuuriki
11-25-2007, 10:58 PM
yup. ^^ I have quite a few of him...lol...but this is the only one Ill ever post.

omg POST MORE!! POST MORE!! xD please?!?!?! just for mmeeeeeeeeee?!!? haha:gaara:

Tsukiko
11-25-2007, 11:17 PM
Hm.....I dunno...dunno if they're any good.

JackpottJinchuuriki
11-25-2007, 11:25 PM
well, if u wrote them then of course they r wonderfull!!!!
post, post, post!!! xD

Tsukiko
11-26-2007, 01:13 AM
ok's. ^^ maybe tomorrow. =]

JackpottJinchuuriki
11-26-2007, 01:15 AM
YES!!
lol...im uberly-hyper rite now.. xD
i will be looking 4 some new material..tomorrow!!

Soul
01-13-2008, 10:14 PM
Once again 10/10

MissySmithy
01-14-2008, 12:09 AM
That was so awesome Crimson!
I loved it so much!
You have to write so more!

¤ Shrike † Itachi ¤
01-14-2008, 12:18 AM
Wow, that was so good!

10/10