Gomen ne...

[Tsukiko]

Here's a really, really short piece I just wrote.

Gomen ne...
Isn't that sad?
Please, dry my tears.
Make all the pain go away.
Look at me for at least a second.
Please...don't ignore me.

I am nobody...

actually this image inspired me: http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee260/vampire_demon913/Gaaraalone.gif

I get depressed seeing it...

but anyways, comments,
criticisms.

Maybe Ill try to extend on this...but I sorta like it as it is. I keep rereading it...something seems out of place =/

[Deidara-Chan]

Yes it might be short but it's preety Cool!

and yeah that image is Depressing..

[Tsukiko]

arigatou Dei-chan. ^_^

[HinataCuddle]

Hmmm... nope.
Strange, but I don't like this one. But it's probably not because it lacks quality, but because I don't like sad peotry in general...

[Tsukiko]

Lol.
well, thanks for being honest. ;]

I guess the majority of my poetry is sad.
but I havent written anything in ages. (besides this just now but I didnt work on it much)

I'm having a bad Poet's Block. ><

[HinataCuddle]

Lol.
well, thanks for being honest. ;]


You're welcome! I wouldn't be much help if I just said "WOW cool!! etc etc" would I? XD


I guess the majority of my poetry is sad.
but I havent written anything in ages. (besides this just now but I didnt work on it much)

I'm having a bad Poet's Block. ><

Sry, can't help you with that, I never went any further than:

Roses are #FF0000
Violets are #0000FF
All my base
Are belong to you

XD

[Soul]

sort of depressing..

[Tsukiko]

^yeah, but I plan to work on it some more...sooner or later. :p

[¤ Shrike † Itachi ¤]

Here's a really, really short piece I just wrote.

Gomen ne...
Isn't that sad?
Please, dry my tears.
Make all the pain go away.
Look at me for at least a second.
Please...don't ignore me.

I am nobody...

actually this image inspired me: http://i229.photobucket.com/albums/ee260/vampire_demon913/Gaaraalone.gif

I get depressed seeing it...

but anyways, comments,
criticisms.

Maybe Ill try to extend on this...but I sorta like it as it is. I keep rereading it...something seems out of place =/

That's really sad. =(

[Thomas60]

Gomen ne... Sorry?
Gomen ne sai... I'm Sorry?

I don't know the difference... that clip comes from my fav shippuden episode ^^

[Tsukiko]

Yes, Gomen Ne is "Im Sorry" as is Gomen Nasai.