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OrochimaruKakashi
12-31-2007, 09:05 PM
ok so this is a story i wrote about Kakashi and why he's always late. Just so you know it's a love story so there is some hugging and kissing here and there but that's it! i promise..... now i'm warning you....it's really long so if you don't like to read long stories i suggest you don't read it because it is EXTREMELY long. :D well if you decided to stick around i hope you enjoy it. oh and it's not quite done so at the end there is a "TBC......" ok so enough chit chat here it is.....

Kakashi’s Secret:
The truth why Kakashi is always late
Kakashi x character I created.



It was an average day in Konoha. Kakashi was reading Icha Icha Paradise again for the bazillionth time this week as he watched his three young Genin students practicing like usual. “Oww! You idiot!! Watch where the heck you’re aiming!” Naruto shouted. “Well maybe if your head wasn’t so big you knuckleheaded ninja!” Sakura screamed. “I am not a knuckleheaded ninja!!” Naruto retorted. Kakashi put down Icha Icha Paradise and strode over to his two bickering students while Sasuke watched nearby. Kakashi said, “Ok you two calm down”. Naruto exclaimed, “She started it!” “Did not” “Did too” “Did not” Kakashi then began to get annoyed “ok that’s enough you two!! Don’t make me use my Lightning Blade Jutsu on you!” Naruto and Sakura stopped immediately and began to shudder at the thought of Kakashi unleashing his most powerful and dangerous Jutsu. Their Sensei was normally calm and relaxed, but when he got angry it wasn’t pretty, in fact it was terrifying. “Good now that you’re all calmed down I can tell you that your training is over for the day” Kakashi said. Naruto exclaimed “oh cool! Thanks Kakashi-Sensei!” and Kakashi smiled under his mask as he watched them run away. Kakashi decided to go to his secret spot to read his book and he knew that he wouldn’t be disturbed because no one but him knew where it was. He was sitting there quietly when all of a sudden he heard rustling in the bushes. He put his book away and took his fighting stance. “Who’s there?” Kakashi shouted. Someone started to walk out of the bushes. “Who the heck are you and how do you know about this place!?” Kakashi said, getting angry. Just then a beautiful young ninja about Kakashi’s age with beautiful shoulder length, silvery white hair that matched the color of Kakashi’s and dazzling black eyes that matched the exact shade of Kakashi’s visible eye, walked towards him. “Kakashi” she said, in a voice as beautiful as her face, “Is that anyway to treat me of all people?” Kakashi stared at her. “Katana” Kakashi said. “I’m sorry I didn’t know it was you. Did anyone see you coming here?” Kakashi was worried that someone might have followed her here, for you see no one knew about her and Kakashi’s relationship even though they had Jonin missions together all the time no one seemed to pick up on it. This for them was good because they weren’t quite ready for people to know about them being together. She smiled at him and said “no” and then she hugged him and Kakashi sighed with relief as he rubbed the uncovered side of his face into her soft hair. Then she reached for his mask and he didn’t stop her as she pulled it down and kissed him. She went to pull away but Kakashi pulled her closer. They were there for hours. Then Kakashi stopped kissing Katana and his visible eye widened with shock. Katana said in a worried voice “Kakashi? What’s wrong? Was it something I did?” Kakashi hurriedly replied “no, it’s not you. I just forgot I was supposed to meet Jiraiya at Icharuka’s almost half an hour ago! I forgot he invited me to lunch to talk about Icha Icha Paradise.” Then Katana asked “can I come? You know I love the Icha Icha series as much as you do and I mean it’s not like people haven’t seen us walking and talking about it before. Everyone knows that I love the series as much as you. Plus it’s not like we’ll be broadcasting our love for each other. It’s only lunch. Plus Jiraiya will be there. And even if he wasn’t there people wouldn’t suspect anything because we’re Jonin teammates (yes even Jonin-Sensei’s have teams for advanced missions) after all” Then Kakashi thought about it for a minute and said “yeah ok. And you know you’re right.” and he kissed her, pulled up his mask, and disappeared in a puff of smoke. She quickly followed. When she arrived at the village entrance she found Kakashi waiting for her. Kakashi said “let’s go” and they walked to Icharuka’s talking about Icha Icha Paradise. Then Jiraiya saw Kakashi walking towards him with Katana and said “about time you got here Kakashi! Are you ever on time for anything?” “Sorry I kept you waiting Jiraiya, I got lost on a road called life” Kakashi said in his calm voice. “And I see you brought along Katana. *to Katana* Hello Katana. How is your Genin team?” Jiraiya asked her. And Katana replied “what Genin team? All my students failed to pass from the Academy. So I have no Genin team at the moment. Iruka said he was going to assign me to be the second Sensei for an already existing team, but he didn’t say which one. I’m supposed to meet him in about half an hour” Then Jiraiya laughed and said “So Kakashi, how many times have you read Icha Icha Paradise this week?”. Kakashi chuckled and said “Oh only about 5 times” and Jiraiya laughed again and sarcastically said “only 5 times?” Then the three of them sat there and talked until Katana said “well, I have to go meet with Iruka. I’ll see you around Jiraiya. See you later Kakashi” then Kakashi replied “see you. I just hope you don’t end up with Gai! He’ll drive you nuts!” Katana laughed and said “tell me about it!” and she walked towards the Academy where she knew Iruka was bound to be. Meanwhile Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura were sitting around in the grass. They had nothing better to do because they we’re usually training with their sensei, Kakashi. “This is so boring!!” Naruto complained. Sakura said “well we’re usually training with Kakashi-Sensei, but he let us go early” then Sasuke said “well I don’t know about you two but I’m outta here” he began to walk away and Sakura said as she blushed “great idea Sasuke!” and followed him, leaving Naruto alone. “Oh that’s real nice! Just leaving me here!” Naruto yelled at them, but they were too far away for them to hear him. Naruto sighed and said to himself “I wonder what Kakashi-Sensei is up to anyways” so he decided to go find his Sensei. Naruto found Kakashi at Icharuka’s still talking to Jiraiya. Naruto ran over to them as he waved and said “Hey Kakashi-Sensei! Pervy Sage!” Jiraiya smiled and said in a surprised tone “Naruto! What brings you here?” “I’m just bored” Naruto replied. Then Kakashi said to him “Hello Naruto. Where are Sasuke and Sakura?”. Naruto said, in an annoyed tone, “they just left me all alone and walked off to go find something better to do!”. Just then Iruka came over. Naruto waved happily and said “Hi Iruka-Sensei!” “Oh hello Naruto, i wasn’t expecting you to be here” Iruka said. Then Kakashi chuckled and said “are you kidding me? This place is like his second home. That’s all he talks about during training. Ramen, ramen and more ramen” Kakashi, Jiraiya and Iruka laughed while Naruto gave his sensei a glare. Then Iruka said “Kakashi, I need to discuss something with you” then Kakashi calmly replied “ok” and the two senseis walked a short distance away to where they wouldn’t be overheard. “How would you feel about having another Sensei to help you with your team?” Iruka asked. Kakashi thought about it a minute and replied “yeah i could use an extra hand especially with Naruto around” Iruka chuckled and said “well he is a handful. Ok bring your team to the Mission reception area tomorrow to meet them” Kakashi nodded and they walked back over. Then Iruka said “hey Naruto, how about some Ramen? My treat” Naruto excitedly said “ok! Thanks Iruka-Sensei!” And Iruka ordered 4 bowls of ramen, one for himself, one for Naruto, one for Kakashi and one for Jiraiya. Then Kakashi said “thanks Iruka, this was nice of you” and Jiraiya agreed and said “yeah” Naruto began slurping away happily, then Iruka and Jiraiya began to eat theirs. Naruto looked over at Kakashi and then it hit him! Kakashi was about to take off his mask in front of all of them! Naruto watched Kakashi excitedly but then disappointedly went back to his ramen as he saw Kakashi lower his mask, but put up Icha Icha Paradise simultaneously to hide his face. Then Naruto asked “hey Kakashi-Sensei”, Kakashi finished his ramen and pulled up his mask as he put his book down “yeah?” he replied. “Why do you always wear that mask? And when you do take it off why do you hide behind your book? What’s behind it anyways?” Naruto asked curiously. Then Kakashi calmly said “you know...I’m not really sure why I wear it. It’s just a habit. As for what’s behind it. Well you’ll find out soon enough” Naruto sighed and then said “I’ll see you tomorrow Kakashi-Sensei. Bye Pervy Sage. Bye Iruka-Sensei and thanks for the ramen!” Naruto walked home seeing as he had nothing else to do. Then Iruka left and Jiraiya said “well Kakashi, I have to go talk to Tsunade about something, Important Sannin stuff.” And he walked away heading towards the Hokage’s house leaving Kakashi alone. Kakashi decided to go just walk around the village and read his book. As Kakashi wandered around he ran into a few people he knew and stopped to talk to them. First he ran into Shizune. He asked her how she was and what was new. Then she told him she couldn’t talk long because she was doing something for Tsunade. And then he ran into Gai, who naturally challenged him to yet another competition. Gai said “Well, well, well, if it isn’t Kakashi!” Kakashi looked over the top of Icha Icha Paradise and said “what do you want now Gai? Can’t you see I’m trying to read my book?” Then Gai said “It’s my turn to pick the challenge Kakashi!” then Kakashi sighed and said “very well then, what’ll it be this time?” as he put his book away. Gai said “a race around the village! First one back here wins! And if I lose I will so 3000 push ups!!” Kakashi sighed and said in his calm voice “ok whatever” then they got ready to race and Gai shouted to Lee “Lee count us down!” then Lee replied “Yes Gai-Sensei...ready! Three, two one! GO!” and they raced. Kakashi wasn’t worried one bit because he knew he was faster than Gai. Kakashi was the first one back, with Gai close behind. Lee looked a little disappointed and then Kakashi said “that puts me ahead. 51 wins and 50 losses” Gai said “I will beat you the next time Kakashi!” Kakashi just shrugged and walked away reading Icha Icha paradise. He realized that it was late so he headed home and got some sleep. The next morning Kakashi headed to where he usually met up with Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura and found them there waiting impatiently because he was late...again as usual. Kakashi said “ok you three! I have some news for you” then Sakura excitedly said “ooh what? Is it good?” then Kakashi said “you’re getting another sensei.” Then Naruto and Sakura looked baffled and said “WHAT!?” Sasuke just stared in confusion. Then Naruto said “But Kakashi-Sensei what about you!?” Then Kakashi chuckled “you misunderstood me. I’m still going to be your sensei. We’re just getting another sensei to help out. So now you’ll have two senseis.” Then Naruto and Sakura sighed with relief and Sasuke said “whatever.” Kakashi said “ok now we have to go see Iruka so he can introduce us. And i have no idea who our new sensei is. Iruka didn’t even tell me if it was a guy or a girl” So with that they headed to meet Iruka. There stood Iruka in his usual spot. Kakashi said “Hello Iruka. So where is this new Sensei?” Iruka shouted to someone in another room, “come over here please!” and then Kakashi, Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura all looked as they saw none other than Katana walking towards them. Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura jokingly always called her “The Female Kakashi” because she dressed almost exactly like him, except for the mask and the skewed headband, and her hair, but she could easily just put gel in it and it would match Kakashi’s exactly, not to mention she loved the Icha Icha books as much as he did. Then Naruto exclaimed “Her!? You’ve got to be kidding me! She as obsessed with the Icha Icha books as Kakashi-Sensei is! And is just as big a perv too.” At this Kakashi hit Naruto upside the head. “What the heck was that for!?” Naruto yelled. Kakashi said “Be more polite!” Then Katana came over and said “hello Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura.” Then she turned to Kakashi. “Hello Kakashi” The three Genin looked at Kakashi and saw that he was blushing a lot. Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura smirk at each other. They had a strong feeling that Kakashi liked her, but still had no idea of their relationship. “This is your new Sensei. Katana Sokino. I know that you already know her Kakashi, at least I hope you do, she is on your Jonin team after all. And from what I can see you 3 *he nodded towards Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura* have met her before am I correct?” Iruka asked. “Yes” Naruto said in an annoyed voice. Sasuke and Sakura nodded. “Well I have to get back to my duties” said Iruka. Then Kakashi said “Ok you three, meet at the training grounds in three hours”. They nodded and went off. Then Kakashi and Katana walked towards the park. Kakashi said “well this is a surprise. I wasn’t expecting you to be the new Sensei. I was expecting some new person who just got accepted as a Sensei and I thought that I was going to have to train them too. But I’m glad it’s you and I’m glad you didn’t get stuck with Gai or someone like that” then Katana sat down on a park bench and Kakashi sat next to her but not so close as to suggest anything. “I’m glad too” Katana said. They sat there until they remembered that they were supposed to meet Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura for training. So they headed to the training grounds....late. Naruto shouted “there you are! Late again! And you! *points to Katana* you’ll probably be just as late as Kakashi-Sensei is all the time!” Then Katana calmly said “now what makes you say that?” then Naruto retorted “you two are just alike!! You always have your faces in those dumb books! Your eyes and hair are the same color! Heck you even dress similar!!” Then Sakura smacked Naruto upside the head and shouted at him “now is that anyway to treat our new Sensei!?” then Katana said “thank you Sakura. *Sakura beamed* now Kakashi-Sensei and I have an activity planned for you. Each of you must try to take 5 things from each of us. Who ever has the most points at the end gets to skip training tomorrow.” This caught their attention and they paid attention eagerly. Kakashi finished explaining “now here is the point system, it really quite simple. You get 10 points for an object that we have on us at the time. For example, kunai, shiruken and stuff like that, 5 points for each object from our houses and 15 points if you can get our Icha Icha Paradise books. Understand?” They nodded. “oh and who ever wins not only gets to miss training but also gets to see what’s under my mask. And if you tie you all have to show up for training tomorrow, then MAYBE just maybe I’ll finally show you what’s under my mask after training....” Kakashi added. This made the three of them very excited. “You have until training tomorrow” Katana said. “And Go!” Kakashi said. Then the two senseis disappeared in puffs of smoke. Then Sasuke said “You know we all want to see Kakashi-sensei’s face. We should just work together and try to get the same items so that way we all tie, but so what if we still have training. We still might get to see his face” Then Sakura, being her giddy self every time Sasuke had an idea said “what a great idea Sasuke!” So, the three of them tailed their two senseis all day. At the end of the day they met back up and Naruto said “so what’d you guys get?” Sasuke said “two kunai from Kakashi-Sensei, a shiruken from Katana-Sensei and an old photo of Kakashi- Sensei when he was young and one of Katana-Sensei’s books on jutsus. So that gives me 40. How about you guys?” Sakura said “three shiruken from Kakashi-Sensei, one of Katana-Sensei’s pictures of when she was young and one of Kakashi-Sensei’s books on chakra. So that gives me 40 points too. How about you Naruto?” Naruto said “Both Kakashi-Sensei and Katana-Sensei’s copy of Icha Icha Paradise, one of Katana-Sensei’s shirts and one of Kakashi-Sensei’s masks” then Sasuke in amazement said “how the heck did you get these!? *pointing to the Icha Icha books* Naruto replied proudly, “well it was really hard to get them, but all i did was follow them and waited till the opportune moment.” “Which was?” Sakura asked. “When they were busy reading Icha Icha Violence. They were sitting on the park bench reading them and talking about them and so i took their copies of Icha Icha Paradise while they were preoccupied.” Then Sasuke patted Naruto on the back and said “wow i didn’t think you had it in you. I tried to get their copies and they caught me. Maybe you’re not such a bad ninja after all. I mean you did get their most prized possessions and not to mention after they already caught me trying to take them, which probably put them on their toes. You know Naruto, you’re pretty ok.” Naruto grinned and said “thanks. You’re not so bad yourself” Then Sakura smiled and in a slightly sarcastic tone said “awww. Does this mean you two are friends now?” Then Naruto and Sasuke looked at each other and nodded and Sasuke said “Let’s get her!” Then they ran towards her. As she was running from them, shouted “Hey! What’s the big idea!!?” Then they tackled her to the ground and all three of them laughed as they continued to play fight (meaning not actual fighting....just joking around and stuff) The next day they arrived at the training grounds with the stuff they had gotten from Kakashi-Sensei and Katana-Sensei. They sat there and then their eyes went wide and their jaws dropped as they saw Kakashi-Sensei and Katana-Sensei arrive ON TIME! Then Naruto said “Everybody run!!!!! It’s a sign of the apocalypse!! Kakashi-Sensei and Katana-Sensei are actually on time!!!!” then Kakashi laughed and said “yes, we’re actually here when we said we’d be here. Now lets see what each of you got. Sasuke you first.” Then Sasuke said “wait shouldn’t you already know? I mean it is your stuff” then Kakashi replied “yes that’s true but we still need to tally it up. Now what’d you get?” then Sasuke showed everyone and said “two kunai from Kakashi-Sensei, a shiruken from Katana-Sensei and an old photo of Kakashi- Sensei when he was young and one of Katana-Sensei’s books on jutsus.” Then Kakashi said “good. Now that gives you 40 points. Sakura, you next...” Sakura took out the items she had retrieved and said “ i got three shiruken from Kakashi-Sensei, one of Katana-Sensei’s pictures of when she was young and one of Kakashi-Sensei’s books on chakra.” Katana said “ that gives you 40 points too Sakura.” Then Kakashi input “ok Naruto, it’s down to you. What’d you get?” Naruto beamed and took out each item as he said them “ well first i got one of Katana-Sensei’s shirts * he showed them a shirt* and one of Kakashi-Sensei’s masks *he held up what in fact was one of his masks* and finally...these,*he showed them two copies of Icha Icha Paradise* Both Kakashi-Sensei and Katana-Sensei’s copy of Icha Icha Paradise!” Then Katana’s eyes and Kakashi’s visible one widened in shock. Kakashi trembled and stuttered “How-How did you-how did you get those!? Those were our most guarded objects because we knew that you guys were bound to try to take them. And we doubled the protection after Sasuke failed to get them” Naruto proudly replied “It was sort of hard at first, but then when i saw you two take out your copies of Icha Icha Violence i knew that it would be a piece of cake because knowing you two, you’d become so focused on that book that you’d let your guard down on the other books. So while you two were reading i took the two books from your pouches” then Kakashi smiled under his mask and said “Well done Naruto!! you have managed to do what no one has been able to do. You successfully managed to get our copies of Icha Icha Paradise from us! Not even Tsunade could do it when she tried to pull an April fools joke on us! And she’s one of the legendary Sanin! Anyhow that puts you all even with 40 points each! *he took all the items from them* So you know what that means! Time for training!” then Sakura said “But Kakashi-Sensei! We all tied! And you said if we all tied you’d show us what’s under your mask!” then Kakashi said “I said ‘I MIGHT show you after training’ so get to training and if you work hard then we’ll see”


TBC................

Soul
01-01-2008, 01:25 AM
The REAL reason kakashi is late is, because of the death of his friend, Obito.
he goes to his grave everyday ^_^

just incase you dont know, just wanted to say xD

but nice literature.

Deadlocked
01-01-2008, 04:14 AM
^Yeah, I think that's the reason =P

But nice story, and its not that long. I read whole books in an hour, I read that in 5 minutes =P

OrochimaruKakashi
01-01-2008, 04:55 AM
you are talking to a girl who can name his birthday, favorite foods, least favortie foods, favorite hobbies and can give a perfect word for word depiction of his life story....off the top of her head at any given moment.....but yeah i know the reason why he is always late is because of his friend Obito and he visits the memorial stone every day and the reason he is late is because Obito was always late, yet that was the one thing that Kakashi was always annoyed by.

and it is only a fanfic and the reason i put "real" in all capitals was only meant to make the readers think that it was bound to be an amusing reason why he was always late......... and thanks :D I appreciate the nice comments :D

oh and that wasn't all i had written at the time.....i have 5 more pages finished on my Word Document program....in total 10 pages so far.....but it'll probably be many more pages....but i hope you all stick around for them :D

Soul
01-01-2008, 04:59 AM
^Yeah, I think that's the reason =P

But nice story, and its not that long. I read whole books in an hour, I read that in 5 minutes =P

in an hour? interesting...

Neji'sEyes
01-05-2008, 06:49 PM
The REAL reason kakashi is late is, because of the death of his friend, Obito.
he goes to his grave everyday ^_^

just incase you dont know, just wanted to say xD

but nice literature.

oh yea thats true!

Taled Demon-32
01-07-2008, 09:51 PM
he proably he sleep's in

OrochimaruKakashi
01-11-2008, 04:25 AM
i know the actual reason why he's always late like i said before.....

you are talking to a girl who can name his birthday, favorite foods, least favortie foods, favorite hobbies and can give a perfect word for word depiction of his life story....off the top of her head at any given moment.....but yeah i know the reason why he is always late is because of his friend Obito and he visits the memorial stone every day and the reason he is late is because Obito was always late, yet that was the one thing that Kakashi was always annoyed by.

and it is only a fanfic and the reason i put "real" in all capitals was only meant to make the readers think that it was bound to be an amusing reason why he was always late......



i know all that.......but hey it's just a fanfic......

Spindori
01-16-2008, 03:21 AM
I didn't read it because you told me not to in the first post. I noticed when I was scrolling down, you didn't even divide it into paragraphs. After reading posts and fanfics in the forum 'A Growing Affection' (Found in my sig.) is in, I've learned a lot about writing processes. I'm just saying...

OrochimaruKakashi
01-16-2008, 07:13 PM
actually i said if you don't like to read long fan fics then you don't have to if you don't want to....

¤ Shrike † Itachi ¤
01-16-2008, 08:12 PM
Kakashi is always late because he is looking at himself in the mirror.


Duh. ;B

Konoha's Warrior
01-16-2008, 11:55 PM
This is made up right? Your not for real are you ?

OrochimaruKakashi
01-25-2008, 07:36 PM
well duh it's made up!! Katana is actually my own personal Naruto chracter that i created.....

and here's more of the story........

“Ok now for training your goal is to practice your jutsus” Kakashi said “ I have prepared theses three scarecrows, but I have put a Jutsu on them so I’m going to see how long it takes you to destroy them…now one at a time….Sakura you first…Naruto, Sasuke watch….” “Ok Kakashi-Sensei!!” Sakura replied then Sakura attempted to take out the scarecrow and she managed to do it in a fair amount of time. “Ok Sakura that was very good. Sasuke you next!” then Sasuke nodded “hn……CHIDORI!!!!!!!” And Sasuke hit the scarecrow full force and it disintegrated as soon as his Chidori hit it. “Good work, Sasuke!!” Kakashi said “Ok Naruto, you next” then Naruto replied “Believe it!” he did the hand sign and shouted “SHADOW CLONE JUTSU!!!!” His clones began to store up the chakra in Naruto’s palm and he shouted “RASENGAN!!!!!!!!!” and then the scarecrow just collapsed and Kakashi smiled and said “well done Naruto! ok that concludes training today! You all did very well…and I guess you’ve earned this…..ok I’m serious this time…..no Icha Icha books or anything to block….*he reached up for his mask*” then Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura looked at him eagerly…this was it. Finally after all these years they were finally about to know what Kakashi-Sensei’s true face looked like. “Ok….here is my true face…*he pulled down his mask*” Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura looked upon the face of their Sensei for the first time. Sakura’s eyes widened and she began to blush profusely “Wow….Kakashi-Sensei….you’re….you’re well…..hot!! she said giggling. Then Naruto nudged Sasuke and said “well it looks like she’ll be obsessing over him instead of you now. *he grinned*” Sasuke smirked at him and they began to laugh.

ayu.chan
02-15-2008, 10:55 PM
Interesting! I likey! :)

Uchiha-Madara
02-15-2008, 11:22 PM
i like to think that he is always late cus he visits Obito's "grave"

OrochimaruKakashi
02-16-2008, 01:30 AM
I know....I do too....but it's only a fanfic....plus the reason i wrote it is cause well....Katana is supposed to be me :D writing a fanfic is the closest thing i could get to having a "relationship" with him....i wrote one similar to this with Oro....

but actually i never changed the real reason entirely....actually half the time the both of them are late is because Katana is sort of comforting Kakashi while he stands at Obito's grave...

ayu.chan
02-18-2008, 01:27 AM
you know, you should edit the 1st post and put more detail of Katana in there. Because you state that she's a perv, but she never did anything perverted. that would be cool!!

Oh and maybe you can switch it to Naruto's POV when he steals the Icha Icha books!!

Just sayin that it would be cool. But its really good so far!! me likey :D

OrochimaruKakashi
02-24-2008, 10:03 PM
ok here's the latest part...sorry for not updating sooner..i've been busy but here's a whole bunch that i just wrote last night...and i'm warning you now....there's some NarutoxSasuke stuff.....but it's not really graphic or anything....



That night Katana and Kakashi were holding hands, walking along the dark empty streets of Konoha. “You think we should tell them Kakashi?” Katana asked. “Tell who, what Katana?” Kakashi asked curiously. “Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura….about us. Our relationship” Katana calmly told him. “I don’t know….do you think we should?” He said. “Well I think they have the right to know. I mean we are their senseis” Katana told him. Then Kakashi thought for a minute and said “Hmmm…..well I guess so. Plus it would get them to stop asking us if we like each other or not….so I say why not…it couldn’t hurt. And you know I’m tired of sneaking around like this…I say we don’t hide it anymore. From anyone….” “Alright, tomorrow we’ll tell them” Katana said.
Meanwhile Naruto was fast asleep in his bed when all of a sudden there was a knock at the door. “Wha-who’s there?” he mumbled sleepily as he walked to the door. He opened the door to see none other then Sasuke standing there. “What’s the big idea waking me up at midnight!?!?!” Naruto shouted. “Pipe down loser! You want to wake up the whole village?!?” Sasuke said. “Why are you always doing that!?!?” Naruto asked. “Doing what?” Sasuke said. “Why are you always putting me down like that!?! Why do you always pick on me and treat me like I’m nobody!?” Naruto said as his voice started to rise again. “Why? You want to know why!?!” Sasuke shouted. “Yeah I do!!” Naruto said. Sasuke lowered his voice so he wouldn’t be overheard. “It’s because…..because” he stuttered. “Because what?” Naruto demanded. “It’s because I LIKE you ok!?” Sasuke said. “WHA!?! Y-y-you like me? Like a friend?” Naruto asked. “No….not like a friend….” Sasuke said as he closed Naruto’s front door and locked it. “Naruto….I love you….” Sasuke said. “Y-y-you l-love me?” Naruto said baffled. “Yes…..ever since we met.” Sasuke said. “But then why’d you always treat me like that Sasuke?” Naruto asked.
“Because I didn’t want anyone to find out my feelings for you….so I covered them with rivalry” Sasuke said. “Wow….I never knew.” Naruto said as he smiled as Sasuke. Sasuke returned the smile. Then he looked directly into Naruto’s eyes, but this time it was a look of caring and understanding, then he leaned in and kissed him. Naruto showed no sign of emotion at all so Sasuke, fearing that Naruto didn’t feel the same way about him, pulled away, but as soon as he did, Naruto pulled him back in and kissed him hard. Then Sasuke began to unbutton Naruto’s pajama top while Naruto simultaneously pulled off Sasuke’s shirt. Naruto sensing what was coming next unzipped Sasuke’s pants while Sasuke pulled down Naruto’s pajama bottoms. Then Sasuke took him over to the bed. They fell onto the bed when Naruto pulled Sasuke in for a kiss. Then they were completely enveloped in each other. When Naruto awoke he looked around and wondered if what happened last night was only a dream. Then he saw Sasuke lying next to him and it hit him….it was real…..Sasuke loved him and he loved Sasuke. Then he remembered what happened after Sasuke kissed him….he and Sasuke had an intimate night. Then Naruto looked over at Sasuke as he began to wake up. “I enjoyed last night Naruto” Sasuke said as he sat up.
“Me too Sasuke” Naruto said with a soft smile to his new found lover. Sasuke looked at the clock and said in a worried voice “oh no….we’re late for training!!” “So what…it’s not like Kakashi-Sensei and Katana-Sensei will be there yet anyways we have plenty of time” Naruto said reassuringly. They got dressed and headed to the training grounds to find Sakura there waiting. “There you two are! Where have you been?” Sakura said annoyed. “Sorry Saukra we uh… *Sasuke blushed*….we were looking for Kakashi-Sensei and Katana -Sensei” Sasuke said. “Oh” she said in a surprised tone “well there not here yet” she added. “I’m getting really sick of them being late all the time” Naruto shouted. Just then Kakashi and Katana appeared. “Ok you three we have something to confess” Kakashi said. “What is it Kakashi-Sensei?” Naruto asked curiously. “Well it’s about us” Katana said. “What about?” Sasuke asked. “Ok well the thing is….Katana and I are well in a relationship” Kakashi said. “WHAT!?!?!?!” Said Sasuke, Naruto and Sakura looking baffled. “Know I know this is a bit of a shock…..we should have told you sooner” Katana said. “How long have you been together?” Naruto asked. “Hmm……since we were assigned to be on the same Jonin squad, but we’ve been friends our whole lives” Kakashi said. “Wow…I had no idea” Naruto said. “Ok enough of that….time for training” Katana said. They went on training as usual.
The next day Kakashi and Katana were about to head to the training grounds. “You do know what today is don’t you Kakashi?” Katana said practically in tears. “Yes” Kakashi said solemnly. They arrived at the training grounds looking quite sad and upset. “N-no training today” Kakashi said on the verge of tears. “Kakashi-Sensei…is something wrong? The two of you seem really upset” Sakura asked. “No…it’s nothing” Katana replied. “Just uh yeah…just go and have a day off” Kakashi said. “Well ok” Naruto said and the three of them left. Kakashi and Katana headed to the memorial stone and gazed upon the name of a ninja, Obito Uchiha. “C-can you believe it’s been this long?” Katana said. “I know” Kakashi said. “Oh Kakashi I miss him so much” Katana said. Then tears streamed down her face then Kakashi held her in his arms as a few tears came down his face. Meanwhile….”I wonder why they were so sad” Naruto said. “You think we should find out why to see if we can cheer them up?” Sakura suggested. “Yeah!! Good idea Sakura!” Naruto exclaimed. They searched until they saw Kakashi and Katana in each other’s arms looking at the memorial stone. “They’re looking at the memorial stone. Maybe something bad happened on this day” Saukra said. “Hmm could be. Should we ask them?” Naruto said. “Hmmm….I think so” Sakura said. So they walked up to their senseis. “Kakashi-Sensei? Katana-Sensei? Is something wrong? What happened? It’s ok you can tell us” Sakura said. Kakashi sighed and said “ok sit down….it’s a long sad story” they all sat in the grass as Kakashi began to tell them a story….”well you see it all started when we were about 13 right before we were due to take our test to become Jonin….” Then Naruto interrupted “WHAT!?!? Jonin at 13!?!?” “Yes we were very advanced ninja for our ages. We became Genin at 5 and Chunin at 6” Katana said “wow you were only Genin for a year?” said Sakura in surprise. “Yes now if you keep interrupting I’ll never finish the story” Said Kakashi. He continued “now where was I oh yes…. Katana, two of our good friends Obito and Rin and I were nigh inseparable. We never did anything with out the others. Well Obito, Rin and I had been assigned a mission and Katana was instructed to come along. So we were near the hills outside the village and all of a sudden these guys appear out of nowhere and capture Rin. I suggested that we head back for help because that was one of the Leaf Ninja Rules, but Obito ran after them. So Katana and I had no choice but to break the rules and follow. We found him battling the three ninja who had captured Rin. We jumped in the fight. All of a sudden one of them throws a kunai at Obito and he couldn’t dodge it in time so I jumped in front of him and took the hit. It hit my face and my left eye was completely mutilated and almost completely gone. Fortunately Katana and Rin had stopped two of them. And before the other one left he causes a huge rockslide that would have crushed me if Obito hadn’t pushed me out of the way. So he took the full force of the rockslide and his left side was crushed. As hey lay there we could tell he wasn’t going to make it…so as a last gift to me he had Rin, she was a medical ninja in training, transfer his left Sharingan eye into my damaged eye socket. And then the last thing he ever said to us was ‘You guys were the best friends I ever had….don’t let my death be in vain’. So we had no choice but to leave him. We headed back to the village. Katana practically had to carry me back because I was too weak from bleeding so badly. After that day we finally realized our nindo, our ninja way. ‘Those who break the rules are scum that is true, but those who abandon their friends are worse than scum’. And ever since that day Katana and I come to this memorial stone everyday and just think about him” Kakashi bowed his head and they saw tears coming down his face. Sakura was in tears as she said “that’s just awful!”
“So that’s how you got your Sharingan eye” Naruto said. “Yes” Kakashi said. “Wait a minute…Obito was an Uchiha?” Sasuke asked curiously. “Yes he was” Katana said.
“You never told me you knew any Uchiha” Sasuke said. “Well you never asked” Kakashi said. “So that’s why you’re always late? You’re here?” Naruto asked. “Well that’s part of it….it also because Obito had a habit of being late, actually that was what I hated about him, but to honor his memory we sort of took on his habit” Kakashi said. “Well you all have the day off….don’t waste it on us” Katana said. “Are you sure?” The three of them asked. “Yes go ahead. We’ll see you tomorrow” Kakashi said. So they left Kakashi and Katana alone.

ayu.chan
02-26-2008, 09:33 PM
WOW. VERY Interesting. :eek: lol

Namine
03-05-2008, 03:01 AM
.......intersting

Tesame_Renji
03-06-2008, 04:04 PM
hehe nice story, not as long as u claimed
but good none the less ^_^ :jir:

OrochimaruKakashi
03-08-2008, 03:45 AM
have you checked the second page? there's continuing chapters....it's not done yet....and it's already like 20 pages long on Microsoft Word......

OrochimaruKakashi
03-31-2008, 02:01 AM
the newest installment of the story will be up shortly

Raving Shadow
03-31-2008, 02:24 AM
Can't Wait to Read More Orok ^^

$$ Sasuke Uchiha $$
03-31-2008, 05:46 AM
Me nither(sorry for spelling)

OrochimaruKakashi
03-31-2008, 10:49 PM
Ok as promised here's the latest chapter.....

A few weeks had passes since Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura had learned the truth about why Kakashi and Katana were always late. They never complained about their lateness again. It was around 2 pm when Genma frantically ran into Tsunade’s office. “Lady Hokage!!!” Genma shouted. “What is it this time Genma?” Tsunade asked. “It’s Orochimaru!!! He’s back!!!” “Back? What do you mean back!?” Tsunade asked. “he’s returned!!!! And he’s kidnapped Naruto and Sasuke!! He’s holding them hostage somewhere in the Forest of Death!!” Genma told her. “Genma, get me Katana, Kakashi, Asuma, Kurenai, Gai, and any other Jounin you can find!!! Now!!!” Tsunade demanded.
“Yes Lady Hokage!!!” Genma said and he ran from her office. “what is that conniving snake up to this time” Tsunade thought to herself. All of a sudden Kakashi, Katana, Anko, Gai, Kurenai, Asuma, and Jiraiya, he was in the village so he came in too. Tsunade felt a little relieved that Jiraiya decided to help. “Lady Tsunade!!! Where’s that dirty snake keeping them!?!?” Kakashi demanded. “I’ve been told by Genma that he’s holding them hostage somewhere in the Forest of Death. Isn’t that right Genma?” Tsunade said. “yes Lady Tsunade” Genma replied.

Meanwhile in the Forest of Death…..“Orochimaru you filthy snake!!!! Let us go!!!!” Naruto demanded. “Ah…..so it seems my reputation precedes me.” Orochimaru hissed in his quiet yet malicious voice. “why are you holding us hostage!?” Sasuke asked. “now, now no need to get angry……you’ll be told everything in good time” Orochimaru said, “Kabuto….” He said. Kabuto appeared out of the bushes “Yes my Lord? What is your request?” Kabuto asked his master. “watch them and make sure they don’t escape.” Orochimaru told his faithful servant. “Yes Lord Orochimaru” Kabuto replied obediently. Orochimaru jumped into the highest tree he could find to see if anyone was on their way here, and sure enough he saw his fellow Sannin Tsunade, along with several Jounin, Kakashi, Katana, Gai, Anko, Kurenai, Asuma and one Chunin, Iruka, running towards his location. He jumped down and called out for The Sound Ninja Five. They immediately appeared when he called for them. “Ok here’s what I need from you…..each of you will be instructed to fight the ninja I assign you to. Tayuya, you’ll be fighting Kurenai, Jirobo you get Asuma, Sakon and Ukon I need you two to split to fight separate ninja….can you do that?” he told them. “Yes My Lord” they replied. “good. Sakon you get Gai, Ukon fight Anko, Kidomaru you fight Iruka, Kimimaro you fight Kakashi and Kabuto you’ll be fighting Katana.” He ordered. “Lord Orochimaru, what about Tsunade?” Kabuto asked. “You leave her to me. Now all of you get ready!!” Orochimaru said. All of a sudden Tsunade and the other ninja burst through the trees. “Attack now!!!” Orochimaru ordered. And they were all locked into epic battles…….


TBC.......

ayu.chan
04-06-2008, 05:15 AM
YAY! action! So, is Orochimaru fighting both Tsunade and Jiraiya?

OrochimaruKakashi
04-07-2008, 04:00 AM
no.....Jiraiya's off doing "Research" LOL

well here's the latest part....

Tsunade was shouting at Orochimaru as she dodged his attacks. ”Orochimaru!!! You filthy snake!!! Let them go!!!” Tsunade demanded. “Why should I? There’s nothing in it for me if I let them go” Orochimaru retorted licking his lips in his signature way. “What could you possibly want them for!?! More of your vile experiments?” Tsunade yelled at him. “It’s not what I want them for….it’s what I’m going to use them for….” Orochimaru said as he chuckled evilly. Meanwhile Katana and Kakashi were side by side fighting Kimimaro and Kabuto. “Why don’t you just give up!!!? You’ll never beat me!!!” Kabuto taunted. “want to bet?!?” Katana retorted. Just then Katana jumped away to dodge Kabuto’s chakra scalpel but she couldn’t move in time and it hit her in the arm. “Ahhhhhhhh…….you’ll pay for that!!!” She charged at him with Lightning Blade but just as she hit the area around his heart he hit her with Chakra Scalpel. It hit her at full force and it cut her all over. She fell to the ground and lay there motionless as blood pooled around her. Kabuto slammed into a tree from the force of her Jutsu and lay there with blood dripping from his mouth as he too lay motionless. Kakashi’s visible eye widened with shock. “Katana!!!!!!” he shouted…but it was not good, she was unconscious. He turned his attention to his current opponent….Kimimaro. “So you’re Kimimaro….” Kakashi said. “Yes….and now I must destroy you….in order to fulfill my purpose to Lord Orochimaru” and then they fought. Eventually Tayuya, Sakon and the rest of the Sound Five had all been driven back except for Orochimaru and Tsunade….they were still in a deadlock. “Lord Orochimaru!!! We can not keep going like this!! They’ll kill us!!!” Tayuya shouted. “Very well then!!! Fall back!!!” Orochimaru ordered. Jirobo picked up the unconscious Kabuto and fled. “You may have won this time….but I’ll be back for Sasuke….. Orochimaru hissed and then fled with his minions. Tsunade ran and untied Naruto and Sasuke. “Grandma Tsunade you did it!!!” Naruto yelled excitedly. “Is everyone alright?” Tsunade asked. “We’re all ok over here” Asuma told her. Meanwhile Kakashi was at Katana’s side staring down at her lifeless body as tears formed in his eyes. Tsunade was counting to make sure everyone was here “Wait a minute….where’s Kakashi and Katana?” Tsunade asked. Just then she saw Kakashi carrying a very beaten and bloody lifeless Katana. “What happened?!?” Tsunade asked. “it was Kabuto….he hit her with his chakra scalpel. Lady Tsunade we need to get her back as quickly as possible!!!!” Kakashi said. “yes...Lets go!!” Tsunade said as they hurried off to the Leaf Hospital. At the Leaf Hospital everyone was waiting anxiously. An unwritten rule for ninja was to never show sadness as it was a sign of weakness but Kakashi couldn’t hold back any longer and he burst into tears. Kurenai and Iruka sat next to him to try to calm his nerves. “shhh….it’s going to be ok Kakashi” Kurenai assured him. “how can I?!? it’s all my fault!!!” Kakashi sobbed. “Don’t say that” Iruka said. “But it is!! Kabuto was coming after me and she jumped in the way to block him!!! It’s like Obito all over again!!” Kakashi sobbed harder. The wait seemed like a life time…Kakashi’s head was racing with thoughts of Katana and all they have been through…..flashbacks of when they were little, the Chunin exams, the incident with Obito and Rin, The Jounin test, their relationship, everything……and it all might be gone in an instant. What he regretted the most was that he might not get the chance to propose to her….he was planning on taking her to dinner tonight, but thanks to Kabuto that won’t happen…even if she survives there’s no way she’ll be fit to go home…...so he bowed his head and just cried…..

ayu.chan
04-07-2008, 04:04 AM
Gah! Stupid Kabuto just has to ruin peoples lives....
Great though!! :)

OrochimaruKakashi
04-10-2008, 02:15 AM
thanks.....next part will be up soon .....also coming up will be some ShikaxTemari and more SasuxNaru

ayu.chan
04-10-2008, 02:17 AM
Theres more? I kinda like tragic endings... lol! XP

OrochimaruKakashi
04-23-2008, 03:22 AM
yes there's more.......


Just then a solemn looking Tsunade came out of the operating room. Kakashi looked up at her. Her expression said it all and he feared the worst. “H-how is she Lady Tsunade?” Kakashi asked. “She’s stable…for now. But it doesn’t look good. Her cuts are very deep and Kabuto hit several of her vital organs with that Chakra Scalpel of his. She also received quite a nasty blow to the head and will suffer memory loss…she’ll remember some things…..but not all…..and the memory loss is temporary and should only last about a month…..after that all of her memories should return. Oh and she’s awake…you can all go see her now if you like……but in small groups oh and I’m warning you she’s pretty bad…and she might not remember all of you right away…..” Tsunade told them. They filed into the room in small groups. First were the people who knew her best. Kakashi, who was being practically carried by Kurenai and Iruka because he was an emotional wreck at the moment, went in first followed by Asuma. Kakashi, who was more stable now, walked to Katana’s bedside and sat in the chair next to it. He looked at her and it tore his heart to shreds to see her like that. Just then she weakly spoke “K-k-Kakashi? Is that you?” “yes……I’m here….everyone else is here too. Kurenai, Asuma, Iruka, Anko, Gai….all of them are here to see you” Kakashi said to her as he gently held her hand. “How are you feeling?” Iruka asked. “I-I don’t know…..I-I can’t feel anything right now. And I can’t remember what happened….and *looks around* where am I?” “You’re in the hospital….you were attacked by Kabuto…..don’t you remember anything?” Asuma asked. “No……*sobs* I wish I did though…” Katana said. “shhh……it’s ok…..everything is going to be fine you just get some rest” Kurenai assured her. Katana felt a little dizzy so she went to sleep. Asuma suggested that they all go out for some ramen to help get Kakashi’s mind off of Katana for a while.

Kaden
04-27-2008, 04:32 AM
A really good story! except for the whole gay sasuke-naruto thing. that was horrible. otherwise, pretty good...

ayu.chan
04-27-2008, 01:57 PM
Me likey! :)
Great Story!

OrochimaruKakashi
04-28-2008, 02:33 AM
what can I say.....i'm a sucker for Yaoi.....i don't particularly like Sasuke or Naruto that much except when they're paired up as a Yaoi couple.....so ya know.......it was the only way i could even consider putting them in the story......but i do also like NaruHina......who knows.....maybe in my next fanfic Naruto and Hinata will be together......plus it's my fanfic......LOL but I'm glad you like everything else ^_^ and you don't have to worry i don't plan on having anymore NaruSasu scenes.......oh and i'm almost sone with the next part.....

ayu.chan
04-28-2008, 03:56 AM
Yay! Good.
You know, you could leave the Yaoi part out and the story would flow just fine :)
But yet again, I'm not the writer, ^^

OrochimaruKakashi
04-28-2008, 03:51 PM
yeah....i'll cut that out for fanfiction.net......i plan on posting it there.....along with the Kashi x Ruka yaoi story i'm working on.....oh and Ayu did you write more on my Oro one shot? i really want to find out what happens....

Kaden
04-28-2008, 04:55 PM
yay! the Kakashi relationship was well written. very good. i'm actually really wanting to read the next part!

OrochimaruKakashi
04-28-2008, 08:29 PM
thank you ^_^

it makes me feel good to know that people like my writing....i was a little nervous how people would react to the way i wrote out his relationship.....but i feel better now ^_^

Kaden
04-29-2008, 04:43 PM
Nah it was fine. It makes him seem real...like actually human.

OrochimaruKakashi
04-30-2008, 02:46 AM
LOL ^_^ it does doesn't it?

well the new part will be up soon....i've been busy so i haven't had time to update.....

Kaden
05-02-2008, 03:17 PM
Good good. i'll be waiting

OrochimaruKakashi
05-05-2008, 04:05 AM
Asuma and Iruka treated everyone to ramen. They sat there eating in silence except for poor Kakashi. He was to devastated and worried to even eat. “you have to eat something Kakashi” Iruka said. “yeah….seriously you should eat.” Asuma said in agreement. “ Don’t worry about Katana….She’s under Lady Tsunade’s care….she’ll be fine.” Kurenai assured him. “yeah…you’re right…I probably should eat….” Kakashi said solemnly as he began to eat his ramen…..he didn’t even bother trying to hide his face because Iruka, Asuma, Kurenai and Anko were all good friends of Kakashi’s and Katana’s……so they’ve all seen his face at one point in time. After they all had their ramen Asuma made a suggestion. “Hey Kakashi….you look beat….you should go home and get some sleep.” he said as he lit a cigarette. “I don’t think I can sleep now…..not knowing that it’s possible Katana might not survive the night” Kakashi said. Asuma, Kurenai, Anko and Iruka all looked at Kakashi as he slowly walked towards his house.
“I don’t think we should leave him alone….” Asuma said. “Yeah….in his state who knows what he might do.” Kurenai agreed. “I have and idea…..he can come stay with me for a while…..I think he’d be better off” Iruka added. “Hmmm…I think that’s a good idea” Anko said. “Works for us” Asuma and Kurenai said. “Ok….I’ll go get him before he does something foolish” Iruka said and ran off after Kakashi. Iruka caught up to Kakashi in no time at all due to the fact that Kakashi was sulking and walking so slow. “Hey Kakashi!” Iruka called after him. “huh?” Kakashi said as he turned to see who called his name. “Hey Kakashi…..i think it would be a good idea if you came to stay with me for a while….just till Katana gets out of the hospital.” Iruka said. “nah…..i wouldn’t want to impose” Kakashi declined. “nonsense…..you wouldn’t be imposing.” Iruka said. “well ok….i could use the company” Kakashi said. “come on…I’ll take you to my place.” Iruka said. “thanks Iruka.” Kakashi said. “Anything for my best friend” Iruka said. They soon arrived at Iruka’s apartment. It was a medium sized apartment with soft blue walls and matching furniture. “you can stay in this room” Iruka said as he opened the door to his spare bedroom. He left Kakashi to put his things down and change for bed. Kakashi lay awake in bed just thinking about Katana as he slowly drifted to sleep.

Kaden
05-05-2008, 04:28 PM
Well well. So I'm guessing this is a filler for the next major part in drama/fight sequence? It's definitely setting it up. Please don't forget Team 7 though....

narutoshippud
05-13-2008, 12:38 AM
in an hour? interesting...

yah it is interesting:naruto: :deidara:

and that was a long story.

OrochimaruKakashi
05-14-2008, 03:57 AM
how can I forget about team 7? Kakashi and Katana are thier Senseis......

and yes that was a filler......

here's a little preview of the next part.....


thinking irrationally, a revenge bound Kakashi heads for the Sound Village to get Kabuto back.....but with Orochimaru hiding somewhere in the shadows, will Kakashi get more than he barganed for? Will someone be there to come to hid aid if he needs it?

Kaden
05-14-2008, 04:04 AM
Haha. You sound like you are an announcer for the end of Naruto anime. The part where they preview for the next one.

OrochimaruKakashi
05-16-2008, 03:25 AM
LOL that was the point ^_^

and i'm working on getting the next part up right now.....so look for it within a few days......

Kaden
05-16-2008, 04:51 PM
Well you played it very well. Anyways, looks like i beat you to it, i posted the next piece of my fan fiction first!

OrochimaruKakashi
05-19-2008, 01:28 AM
LOL.....well i'm tyring to write two fan fics at once!!!! give me a break!!! i'm nearly ready to post my newest fan fic.....it's a KakashixIruka Yaoi one i'm writing for Fanfiction.net......but i'm taking out the more *AHEM* "Graphic" bits for here.....otherwise i'd probably get banned....LOL....

anyways...what you've been waiting for....

The next day Kakashi awoke and rapidly ran to the hospital…with Iruka trying to catch up as he put on his headband and shinobi vest. Kakashi arrived at the hospital within minutes. He walked into Katana’s room to find Tsunade changing the bandages. He walked to her bedside and looked down at her lifeless unconscious face. Iruka finally caught up and walked in out of breath. “*huff* You could have waited till I *huff*caught up Kakashi” Iruka panted. “Sorry” Kakashi said apologetically, he then turned to Tsunade “Anyways…how’s Katana?” “Not good….her body is deteriorating…I’m doing everything I can to heal her. If she doesn’t begin to come out of this soon……she’ll die” Tsunade told him solemnly. All of a sudden Katana began to seize. “We have to do something!” Kakashi shouted. Tsunade touched Katana’s forehead with a bluish green chakra and she stopped seizing. The monitor attached to Katana to monitor her heart began to flat line. Iruka just stared in panic. “She’s flat lining!! Her heart’s stopped!!” Tsunade said. Tsunade tried every Jutsu she knew to try to get her heart beating again…none of them worked…..then she had an idea. “Kakashi…….shock her!” Tsunade said. “What!?” He replied. “Use your Lightning Blade to shock her!” Tsunade frantically told him. “But I can’t do that!! It’ll kill her!!! That Jutsu can cut lightning in half!!” Kakashi said. “Not if you weaken the strength of it!! I know you can…I mean you created it after all. Now hurry or it’ll be to late!!” Tsunade said. “o-o-ok…*he quickly performed the hand signs*…LIGHNING BLADE!!!!” Kakashi said as he placed his lightning enveloped hand over her heart and sure enough the monitor beeped and it showed a rickety, but stable heartbeat. The three of them sighed with relief. Kakashi just stared sadly at the floor. He then clenched his fists and his look of sorrow turned into a look of rage. “Kabuto will pay!” Kakashi said in an enraged voice. He jumped out the window and dashed on the rooftops heading north. “he’s heading north” Iruka said. “North!?! That’s the direction of the Sound Village!!” Tsunade said in a panicked voice. “if he runs into Orochimaru who knows what will happen….he’s not fit to fight in his state of mind!!!” Iruka said. “Ok….Iruka…..i want you to go find Asuma, Kurenai, Anko and Gai and go after him!!! Stop him at all costs!! Orochimaru will tear him to shreds!!” Tsunade said. “Yes Lady Tsunade!!” Iruka said as he frantically ran out the door. Once Iruka had found Asuma, Kurenai and Anko they quickly followed their distressed friend.

Kaden
05-19-2008, 02:32 AM
Haha, I got asked to write another fan fic, Sakura's True Strength. I don't know, I just can't see her right now attached to anyone. Anyways, good job.

OrochimaruKakashi
05-19-2008, 02:57 AM
thanks....the next part is almost done too....and I just posted my new fanfic....

Kaden
05-19-2008, 04:12 AM
Yeah, I'll get more on mine tommorow. Sorry, can't get interested/to like the whole gay thing....

OrochimaruKakashi
05-19-2008, 11:00 PM
hehe that's ok ^_^

i'm just a sucker for Yaoi ^_^ especially KakashixIruka.....don't get me wrong....i like straight parings with them too....

Kaden
05-19-2008, 11:31 PM
Good good

victorius
05-20-2008, 03:25 AM
Hey that fan-fic was great!! i loved it!!!

OrochimaruKakashi
05-20-2008, 03:46 AM
thank you!! i'm assuming you've read all of it then....even the updates on other pages?

Kaden
05-20-2008, 05:03 PM
Course I have lol

OrochimaruKakashi
05-21-2008, 09:36 PM
i was talking to the newest reader, victorius......i know you've read all the updates!!! you've been a fan of it practically since the begining!!! LOL ^_^

Kaden
05-22-2008, 04:56 AM
Well why not?! I'm jealous. I wanted to do something with kakashi. and to also explore the avenue of getting him a girl. but you freaking beat me to it you jerk! lol jk. it is nice to read though

OrochimaruKakashi
05-31-2008, 01:49 PM
LOL.... ^_^

the next part will be up soon....

OrochimaruKakashi
06-05-2008, 03:49 AM
sorry for the delay......here's a nice long update.....


Kakashi was frantically running towards the Sound Village. The only thing that mattered now was revenge. He never approved of revenge and thought that it wasn’t the answer…except when it came to this. Kakashi wasn’t about to let Kabuto get away with nearly killing his true love and the only link left to his tortured past. Kakashi was now on the Sound side of the border of the Land of Fire and Land of Sound. He headed to the middle of the land…where he knew that the Sound Village was located. Meanwhile Iruka, Gai, Asuma, Kurenai and Anko all followed Kakashi’s trail. “This is hopeless we’ll never catch him….he’s at least two hours ahead of us!!” Anko said. “That’s no reason to abandon him!” replied Iruka. “Iruka’s right we have to keep going. We can’t abandon him. He’s our comrade. Think about if it was one of us in his position? He’d follow us and protect us to the death. And think about what he always says…‘Those who break rules are scum that is true, but those who abandon their friends are worse than scum’….that’s his Nindo, his ninja way, and we should follow that same way….” Asuma said. “Yes…I agree” Kurenai said. Meanwhile…..Kakashi finally reached the Sound Village. Kakashi didn’t see any sign of Kabuto or Orochimaru. So he cautiously walked in. He reached an inner chamber that looked as if though it was made for fighting. Kakashi looked around and heard a cold dark laugh. Then a voice as cold and dark as the laugh spoke. “Well…..if it isn’t Kakashi, the copy-nin.” said the voice. He knew that voice all to well. “Orochimaru! I have no business with you!!” Kakashi said. “Well now is that so? Then why have you come to my Village Hidden in Sound?” Orochimaru said. “I came after Kabuto!! Where is he!?” Kakashi demanded. “Now, now lets not be hasty…I’ll get someone to fetch Kabuto….Kimimaro!! Your master demands your services!!” Orochimaru said with an evil smirk. Kimimaro walks into the room. “Yes Lord Orochimaru? What is it you want of me?” Kimimaro said. “You again!?!?! I remember fighting you!!! But how were you able to be there to fight!?!? You were supposed to be dead!!! Gaara killed you!!!” Kakashi said baffled. “It’s funny what you can do with someone’s soul and the dead body of one of my most faithful followers… oh and Kimimaro…please fetch Kabuto for me….” Orochimaru said evilly. “Yes Lord Orochimaru” Kimimaro said and left to find Kabuto “You monster!!! You stole someone’s soul to bring him back to life!?!?” Kakashi said. “Yes…and not only that…I cured his illness….which makes him the prime candidate for my next vessel….after Sasuke of course” Orochimaru said with an evil chuckle. “You’re one sick twisted monster Orochimaru!!” Kakashi said. “Hehehe….I’ll take that as a compliment” Orochimaru said. “You’re disgraceful!! Treating people like nothing more than mere pawns!!!” Kakashi said. “Well that’s all they’re good for” Orochimaru said with an evil smile. Just then Kimimaro came back with Kabuto. “I did as you wished my lord” Kimimaro said. Kakashi got even angrier. “YOU!!! YOU FOUL LITTLE PEST!!!!” Kakashi shouted at Kabuto. “Ooh….someone has a grudge” Kabuto said with a smirk.
“I’ll get you for what you did to Katana!!!” Kakashi said growing angrier by the second.
“This bores me…..I’ll be in my sitting chamber. Come Kimimaro….lets let them settle this alone.” Orochimaru said with Kimimaro following close behind. “Now…..lets end this!!” Kakashi said. He quickly performed hand signs. “LIGHTNING BLADE!!!!” Kakashi shouted as he ran at Kabuto. He managed to dodge Kakashi’s attack. However the second time Kabuto wasn’t so lucky and got hit full force with his Lightning Blade. Kabuto smashed into the wall. It shook the entire place. Orochimaru even felt it in his sitting chamber. “Oh……sounds like it’s getting amusing” Orochimaru said. Kabuto lay on the floor semi-conscious. “NEVER……I REPEAT NEVER…..MESS WITH ME!! Got that!?” Kakashi shouted. Then Kabuto sank to the floor fully unconscious. Kakashi headed to leave but Orochimaru stopped him. “Now where do you think you’re going?” Orochimaru said. “Home…..to see my girlfriend” Kakashi said angrily. “I don’t think so…..you think you can nearly kill my right hand man and get away with it? Now prepare to die!” Orochimaru said as he pulled Kusanagi from his mouth. “Hold it right there Orochimaru!!!” Anko said as she, Asuma, Gai, Iruka and Kurenai burst into the room. “Anko…..it’s been so long” Orochimaru said. “Enough of that!!! Let Kakashi go!!!” Asuma said. “Now why should I do that?” Orochimaru said. “Because we have you out numbered!!!!” Iruka said. “Hmmm….I suppose you’re right….but no matter….I can easily take you all…..I’m one of the Legendary Sannin….or have you all forgotten that?” Orochimaru said with an evil laugh. “Just give it up Orochimaru!” Gai said. “Very well then…….You’re all so weak it wouldn’t even make an entertaining fight……I’d be bored to death before you defeat me with your skills. Come back when you can actually put up an entertaining fight…..” Orochimaru said as he vanished deeper into the chambers of the Sound Village. “Kakashi!! You’re alright!” Kurenai said with relief. “Yeah….I knocked Kabuto unconscious. We’re even….for now.” Kakashi said. “Let’s go….this place give me the creeps” Anko said. They headed back to the Village and informed Tsunade that Kakashi was alright. This time Kakashi was not left alone while he slept. Tsunade insisted that they all sleep in her living room in the Hokage’s house. So Tsunade, Iruka, Asuma, Kurenai, and Gai all took turns throughout the night keeping watch over Kakashi.
A few days later Kakashi and Iruka frantically ran to the hospital to check on Katana. They walked into her room only to find Tsunade changing the bandages on her wounds. Katana was sitting up, awake and alert. “Good morning Lady Tsunade” Kakashi said politely. “How are you today?” Iruka asked her. “Oh, hello Kakashi…hello Iruka. I’m fine thank you” Tsunade said. “So how’s she doing?” Kakashi whispered to Tsunade. “She’s actually doing surprisingly well….her memory is fully returned and her wounds are nearly healed. It’s quite remarkable….the only other people I’ve seen heal that fast are Naruto and Orochimaru” Tsunade told him. “Wow……what do you think caused the sped up healing?” Iruka asked curiously. “Hmm…..it could be any number of reasons…..the way her body is distributing her chakra, high white blood cell count, or she could even be a Jinchuuriki and not even know it.” Tsunade said. “You really think she could be a Jinchuuriki? I mean I’ve known her all my life and I’ve never seen any signs that she was a Jinchuuriki.” Kakashi said. “ Like I said…it’s a possibility…but I highly doubt it…it’s probably just the way her body is distributing her chakra….her body senses the wounds and sends chakra to repair the damaged cells …thus speeding up her healing” Tsunade said. “Yeah you’re right” Kakashi said. “She should be able to go home in a few more days…you can go talk to her now if you’d like” Tsunade said as she left the room. “I’ll just leave you two alone shall I?” Iruka said and he left. Kakashi sat next to Katana and held her hand. “Hey….” Kakashi said. “Hi” Katana said with a smile. “Lady Tsunade said you can go home soon” Kakashi said. “Yeah I know.” Katana said. “I’m just glad you’re ok…..I don’t know what I’d do if I lost you…” Kakashi said. “Me either” Katana said. “Oh and once you get out of the hospital I’m taking you to dinner to celebrate your recovery.” Kakashi said with a smile. “I’d like that” Katana said. “Well you need your rest….I’ll be back tomorrow….I promise” Kakashi told her. “Ok...” She replied. He kissed her and left.

Kaden
06-05-2008, 07:55 PM
No big romantic ending? so unlike you.....kdding. another filler but a very well written one concerning content

OrochimaruKakashi
06-06-2008, 03:52 PM
actually this isn't a filler.....it's the next part of the main plot.....don't worry....ther's lots of romance in the next part ^_^

Kaden
06-06-2008, 04:31 PM
My apologies. I meant filler and use that term loosely because its sets up the major fight.

deidara.artisabang.un
06-09-2008, 05:19 AM
great story... full marks 100% ^^

OrochimaruKakashi
06-10-2008, 03:10 AM
thanks ^_^


the next chapter will be up soon.... ^_^

Iruka Umino
06-25-2008, 07:56 AM
I would read it but it's soooo long....I'll get round to it eventually :D

OrochimaruKakashi
07-02-2008, 03:17 AM
LOL.....I know it's long.....i didn't inted for it to be this long....but people said they wanted more chapters....so....

anyways....here's the next chapter.....

A few days later Katana was home and Kakashi couldn’t be happier. He was going to take her out to dinner tonight, where he planned to propose to her. He already had the ring picked out. He gazed down at it in the small black velvet box. It was a beautiful silver ring with a diamond in the middle, with smaller rubies, one on each side of the diamond. “Kashi? Are you ready?” Katana asked coming into the room. Kakashi quickly put away the tiny velvet box containing the engagement ring to prevent Katana from seeing it. “Yep…lets go” Kakashi said as he looked at her, she looked beautiful in her black and red dress with thin straps, that went to right above her knees. She smiled and looked at him. He looked handsome in his black slacks and black dress shoes, with his dark blue dress shirt; she looked at his face and saw that where his headband usually was a silky dark blue folded bandana took its place. It looked kind of like a headband without a metal plate. He also had a dark blue silk mask to match the bandana. They headed out to a nice quaint little place near the center of the village. However they were a little delayed by Asuma and Kurenai who were also heading out for a date. “Kakashi…Katana…...I wasn’t expecting to see you guys tonight.” Asuma said with a grin. “We’re out celebrating Katana’s recovery” Kakashi said. “well isn’t that nice” Kurenai said with a smile. “Yeah…well we have to get going…we have a dinner reservation for 8:00.” Kakashi said. “Yeah we have reservations too” Asuma said. “well we’ll see you around” Kakashi said. They arrived at the restaurant and sat down. They ordered their food and ate in the usual manner, talking about what went on today and events going on and stuff like that. Once they were done they paid and left. Kakashi then blindfolded Katana. “Kakashi! What are you doing?” Katana said. “Just trust me…you’ll see” Kakashi said. Kakashi took her to the top of the Hokage cliff which overlooked the entire village. Kakashi took off the blindfold. “Kakashi what was tha-…..oh it’s beautiful” Katana said as she looked over the entire moonlit village which was nothing compared to how full and big the moon looked from where they were. “Katana….i have to ask you something” Kakashi said. “Yes? What is it?” Katana asked curiously. “Katana…..*he got down on one knee and pulled out the little velvet box containing the ring* will you marry me?” He asked as he opened the box. “oh Kakashi! It’s beautiful!! Yes of course I’ll marry you!!” Katana said with joy. Kakashi put the ring on her finger, pulled down his mask and then kissed his new fiancé.

Kaden
07-04-2008, 04:21 AM
how sweet

DemonCakes
07-11-2008, 05:39 PM
That was good xD

Kyuubi.
07-11-2008, 06:00 PM
very nice story :^^:

OrochimaruKakashi
07-22-2008, 06:20 AM
aww thanks ......sorry i haven't been updating....i will soon....i'm just at a kind of writers block.....i'm actually thinking about making the next chapter my last one for this fic so i can focus on my new fics....my MattxMello one and my Orochimaru one....

Kaden
07-23-2008, 03:51 AM
How sad. But yeah, you kinda did write out the ending in the last post. Or the start of one. Oh well, it's still a good piece of fanfiction!

OrochimaruKakashi
07-25-2008, 02:04 AM
hmmm.....it actually sets things upr for a sequel quite nicely....

maybe in the future when i'm done with my two current fanfics....who knows....there may be a sequel.....

OrochimaruKakashi
07-26-2008, 06:29 PM
thank you.....i seriously thought people wouldn't like this.......

but now after all the positive responses i plan on putting this up on Fanfiction.net.....but of course on there i will put in the more *AHEM* "graphic" scenes that i wrote for it.....however on here i had to take them out in order to keep it well lets just say "appropriate" for the younger members of the site....

Kaden
07-28-2008, 06:45 PM
Haha, yeah fanfiction.net! Home of some of the greatest writers in the world! All the stuff I post here goes there first. Look me up sometime, a.k.a look up Kaden-san. Hehe

OrochimaruKakashi
07-29-2008, 04:38 AM
ok.....i'll do that.....mine is MattandMello'sGirl...but i haven't finished editing any stories yet....but i'll let you know when i do.....

gemini
07-30-2008, 01:50 AM
That was an awsome fanfic I hope you have sommore done soon!!!!!! :)

gemini
08-03-2008, 11:08 PM
cool : )

Kyuubi.
08-04-2008, 05:01 PM
lol oroka nice fanfic :p

OrochimaruKakashi
08-04-2008, 05:53 PM
awww....thanks....i'm thinking about a sequel.......after i finish my MattxMello fanfic and my Oro fanfic....

OrochimaruKakashi
12-17-2008, 12:13 AM
SEQUEL COMING SOON!!!!

I am nearly done my other two fanfics....and i have decided to continue the story!!!