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majinsharingan
02-01-2008, 06:14 PM
Chi Chapter 63: Spirit v2

(Shows Chapter Page)

Apollo takes out a knife.
Udo takes out a knife.
Apollo and Udo run at each other.
Apollo thrusts his hand out.
Apollo and Udo’s knives clash.
Apollo kicks Udo in the stomach, Udo flies back.
Udo throws his knife.
Apollo catches the knife.
Apollo looks at the knife, in question thought: That was odd….
Shows Udo thought: Is this guy for real?
A ball of energy forms in Apollo’s hand.
Apollo thought: I guess we’ll find out…
Apollo shoots the ball of energy at Udo.
Udo: !!!
Udo dives, obnoxiously to the right, barely dodging the ball of energy.
Udo gets up: Geez! What the hell was that!
Apollo looks dumbfounded: My…attack?
Udo: That was strong!
Apollo: That was actually one of my weaker attacks…
Udo: Are you serious!!! Man am I in trouble!
Apollo thought: Seriously….this guy can’t be for real….
Udo shoots a fireball at Apollo.
Apollo exhales loudly.
The fireball dissipates.
Apollo thought: That was the weakest wind attack….how weak must a fireball be to be beaten by that?
Udo: How bout this!
Udo throws three knives at Apollo.
Apollo catches two and jumps, dodging the third.
Apollo throws the two knives at Udo.
Udo: Ah!
Udo ducks, cowardly, dodging the knives.
Apollo looks dumbfounded thought: Wow….
Udo stands up.
Udo: Come on! Is that all.
Apollo: Alright….
Apollo shoots a beam of energy at Udo.
Udo shrieks.
Udo dives obnoxiously to the left, dodging the beam of energy, the beam of energy hits a tree and causes it to explode.
Udo pokes at his finger: Ow…a splinter.
Apollo looks annoyed: …
Udo gets up.
Udo: Okay…enough fooling around!
Udo runs at Apollo and trips.
Udo hits the ground hard on his face.
Apollo thought: Everyone else gets challenging and powerful opponents and I’m stuck with this guy.
Udo rubs his face: Owww…..
Apollo thought: Why me….
Udo gets up.
Udo takes out a knife.
Udo throws the knife at Apollo.
Apollo catches the knife with ease.
Apollo drops the knife.
Udo: What! How do you keep doing that!
Apollo sighs: Your not one of the elite Chi Lords are you?
Udo: Yeah…it was pretty obvious, Huh?
Apollo: Yeah. So what’re you doing out here?
Udo: I had to retreat…I was one of the only ones who survived.
Apollo: So…we did it? We won the war?
Udo: Not yet…there’s still me and a few more Chi Lords out there….
Apollo looks happy: We did it….
Udo: Not yet you didn’t….
Apollo: Hey! Did two people come out onto the battlefield a few minutes ago?
Udo: I wouldn’t know…I retreated a while ago…but…
Apollo: ?
Udo: I did see two people walking down the path in the woods.
Apollo: Oh?
Udo: Yeah, I ducked in a bush as they passed…they were talking about some friend of theirs I guess…
Apollo smiles thought: Everyone’s okay!
Udo: I wouldn’t smile just yet….you have an enemy in front of you.
Apollo: Really? You’ve been afraid of everything I’ve thrown at you….
Udo: Then just…go easy on me.
Apollo sighs.
Apollo turns around and walks away.
Udo: Hey! Where’re you going!
Apollo looks to his right and back at Udo: Go home!
Udo, looks shocked: What?
Apollo: This is a war….not a friendly game….go home….save yourself the trouble before another one of us finds you….
Udo falls to his knees.
Apollo walks off.

(Shows everyone else walking through the woods)
Kadshin: Someone’s coming…
Masashi: Friend or Foe?
Kadshin: Friend, most likely Apollo, is going in the opposite direction as us…his opponent seems to be defeated….
Masashi: That’s good.
Kadshin: And there’s someone else….foe it looks like….approaching from the west.
Hikoro: I know who ever is coming up on us…I’ve sensed this Chi before…
Trige: So have I…
Shows Agatha, Luna, Shino and Cho walking towards the group.
Kinche smiles.
Luna: Hey guys!
Maymi: Wow that was fast!
Luna, rubbing the back of her head: Well I work fast.
Lorelei: Agatha are you alright?
Agatha: Yeah, I’m fine…I won’t be fighting anytime soon, but I’m fine.
Hikoro: Then your mission is done. Can you sense Apollo.
Agatha thinking: Yeah…I think so.
Hikoro: Go to him and help him search for Makoto, Kenodor and Rasodenn.
Mizuro: And Hijima!
Hikoro: And Hijima…
Agatha walks off: Okay…

(Shows the Sky)
Hikoro: There it is again!
Masashi: ?
Hikoro: That same Chi!
Trige: I feel it too….
Trige, yelling: Alright! We know your there! So come out already!
Shows rustling in the bushes.
A shadowy figure disappears into the trees.
Shows a person leaning up on a tree branch, covered by the shadow of the leaves: Well, well. Your as sharp as ever Trige. Good job.
Trige: Who are you?
The Person: It’s been a while, eh? Kinche?
Kinche: ?
The Person: You caught me off guard the last time….this time I’ll slaughter you.
The person disappears.
The person appears behind Kinche, still hidden in shadow: You wanna finish the job too…
A knife is held to Kinche’s throat.
Shows Jara, holding a knife to Kinche’s throat: Don’t you…Kinche?

(End of Chapter)

Summer.
02-01-2008, 08:38 PM
udo sucks :p

and I loved this chapter! it's getting more and more interesting^^

majinsharingan
02-01-2008, 08:40 PM
xDDD Yay! I managed to write a good chapter!
lol.
This took me 3 and a half hours because Lost was very good DDX.

Summer.
02-01-2008, 08:42 PM
yeah I read it in a fc! O.O xDDD

nice work, great job, I appreciate it even more now xD

majinsharingan
02-01-2008, 08:45 PM
xDD Thank You :)

Summer.
02-01-2008, 08:48 PM
you're very welcome.
you need to stop watching lost xDDD it distracts you too much xDDD j/k

majinsharingan
02-01-2008, 08:55 PM
lol.
Nevah!
And it's only on Thursdays it distracts me.

Summer.
02-01-2008, 08:57 PM
It's friday already and it's obviously still distracting xDD

majinsharingan
02-01-2008, 09:00 PM
lol.
I just watched it again that's why. lol.

Summer.
02-01-2008, 09:01 PM
well you see :D
you're ADDICTED! xDDD

GangstaKage
02-02-2008, 04:19 AM
Good Chap but again you didnt tell me
I new jara would come up again
Even though I want him dead

majinsharingan
02-02-2008, 11:24 PM
64'll be up tomorrow.
I didn't write much last night.

GangstaKage
02-03-2008, 01:37 PM
Matt I was talking about the guy M asashi sensed not the guy Agath was fighting