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majinsharingan
02-12-2008, 04:33 PM
Chi Chapter 71: Bent


Shows the raining sky.
Valentine: Interesting….it seems you can use the Weapon Master’s Ultimate Form.
Kinche: Yep.
Valentine: Then I can’t even think about touching Kusuke, or else you’ll have me beat.
Valentine disappears.
Valentine appears a few feet in front of Kinche: So let’s go.

(Shows Chapter Page)


Valentine forms a sword in his hand.
Valentine: Whenever your ready…
Kinche: Hmph.
Kinche and Valentine disappear.
Shows clashes in the sky, everywhere.
Kinche skids against the ground on his feet.
Valentine skids against the ground on his feet.
Kinche throws his sword at Valentine.
Valentine charges forward.
Valentine slashes Kinche’s sword forward and in the air.
Kinche appears where the sword is, holding the sword, about to slash at Valentine.
Valentine blocks Kinche’s attack with his sword.
Shows Kinche and Valentine struggling: Heh….not bad kid…
Valentine’s sword disappears: However.
Kinche: !
Kinche jumps far back, dodging a stab from Valentine.
Kinche skids against the ground, right next to Luna.
Kinche glances at her.
Kinche runs forward.
Kinche disappears, flying off to the left in a string of dust.
Kinche zigzags towards Valentine in a string of dust following his movements.
Valentine prepares to block.
Kinche zigzags past him.
Valentine: ?
Valentine turns around.
Kinche skids against the ground on hi feet.
Kinche disappears in a string of dust towards Valentine.
Valentine is punched in the stomach: !
Valentine flies back.
Valentine looks behind him: Heh.
Kinche appears behind Valentine: You’ll never get near her!
Kinche punches Valentine in the back, Valentine flies forward.
Valentine skids against the ground on his face.
Valentine gets up.
Valentine: Not bad, but lucky for you I’m restricted.
Kinche: Restricted? What?
Valentine pulls up his pant legs, revealing two black locks around his legs.
Valentine pulls up his sleeves, raveling two black locks around his arms.
Kinche: What are those?
Valentine: Benji put them on me so I don’t go out of control and accidentally kill her. We need her alive.
Kinche: For what?
Valentine: If you must no we are trying to gain the powers of the Kusuke Clan.
Kinche: Well then….I’ll stop you!
Valentine: With these on I wouldn’t be surprised….but if you would’ve fought me with these locks off….you would never of stood a chance.
Kinche: Oh well.
Kinche disappears.
Valentine ducks, dodging a stab from Kinche with a dagger.
Valentine back flips, knocking the dagger out of Kinche’s hand.
Valentine catches the dagger.
Valentine stabs rapidly at Kinche.
Kinche ducks and dodges all of the stabs.
Kinche claps his hands together in front of him, catching Valentine’s hand as he is about to stab Kinche.
Kinche kicks Valentine in the stomach.
Valentine flies back.
Valentine flips to his feet.
Valentine: !
Kinche punches Valentine in the face.
Valentine flies back into the woods.
Kinche focuses: …
Something flies out of the bushes extremely fast.
Kinche looks back to Luna: !
Shows Valentine running extremely fast at Luna: Got you!
Valentine stabs at Luna.
Luna: !
Shows Kinche standing in front of Luna, the knife through his side.
Valentine: Your quick.
Kinche looks up, incredibly angry.
Valentine jumps back.
Kinche glances at Luna: Luna back up.
Luna: Right.
Luna backs up.
Shows Kinche standing a few feet in front of Valentine, Luna a few feet behind Kinche.
Kinche grabs the knife in his side.
Kinche yanks the knife out, blood comes out of the knife.
The knife turns into a pole wrapped in tape.
Kinche grabs one end of the pole with one hand.
Kinche grabs the other end with the other hand.
Kinche bites the middle of the pole.
The pole starts to glow.
Two very large Axe-Heads attached to spiked chains come out of both ends of the pole.
Valentine thought: Wow…pretty cool.
The axes start spinning rapidly, chopping up the ground as well.
Valentine: That’s just badass!
Kinche jumps incredibly far, at Valentine.
Valentine leans to the left and back, dodging a spinning axe.
Kinche twirls the axes.
Valentine dodges the axes, just barely.
Kinche leans back.
Valentine(something in both arms): *click*
Kinche slams his body forward, slamming the axes at Valentine.
Luna: !
Kinche: !!!
Shows Valentine, holding the two axe-heads with one hand.
Valentine: Benji must’ve noticed it was taking a while…he released most of the locks on my arms.
Valentine looks scary and evil: Your finished!
Kinche flies back far in an explosion of Chi, the axes disappear.
Kinche skids against the ground.
Kinche flips up to his feet.
Kinche thought: This isn’t good…
Kinche runs at Valentine.
Valentine runs at Kinche.
Kinche punches at Valentine.
Valentine swats the punch away.
Valentine punches Kinche in the stomach.
Valentine punches Kinche in the face.
Valentine kicks at Kinche.
Kinche catches Valentine’s kick.
Valentine spins around, kicking at Kinche with his other foot.
Kinche ducks, dodging the kick.
Kinche grabs Valentine’s other leg he just used to kick with as it came over his head.
Kinche pulls Valentine forward.
Valentine’s face slams into the ground: Ooof!
Kinche flips Valentine, a throwing him slightly into the air so his head is level with Kinche’s knees.
Kinche punches Valentine in the stomach a few times.
Kinche kicks Valentine in the stomach, Valentine flies back.
Valentine skids against the ground, upside-down.
Valentine, on the ground thought: Heh, looks like we’re equals when I’m in this state.
Kinche: Seems so.
Valentine and Kinche disappear.
Shows explosions of Chi everywhere,.
Weapons hit the ground.
Kinche hits the ground.
Valentine hits the ground.
Kinche pants.
Valentine panting, gets up: Not bad…
Kinche: Same to you.
Valentine: Heh.
Valentine disappears.
Kinche thought: Dammit! Again!
Valentine stabs at Luna with a sword.
Blood falls on the ground.
Shows Luna on the ground, looking shocked: A-Ah!
Shows Kinche and Valentine standing near each other, Valentine’s sword through Kinche’s stomach, Kinche’s sword through Valentine’s stomach.

(End of 13th Volume)

Summer.
02-12-2008, 05:00 PM
Shows Luna on the ground, looking shocked: A-Ah!
Shows Kinche and Valentine standing near each other, Valentine’s sword through Kinche’s stomach, Kinche’s sword through Valentine’s stomach.

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majinsharingan
02-12-2008, 05:06 PM
lol.
Is that a cookie?
xDD
Don't worry he doesn't die :)
And not counting this one, there are only 2 fights left.

Summer.
02-12-2008, 05:15 PM
HE DOESN'T!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????'

omg what a relief!

and yeah, that's a cookie for you :p
hmmm just 2 fights left? which ones?

majinsharingan
02-12-2008, 05:24 PM
My bad three, sorry.

And no he doesn't.
:D
Yay! A creepy smiley face cookie!

Summer.
02-12-2008, 06:22 PM
and what will happen when there will be no fights anymore?

have a gingy :D http://www.smallstep.gov/kids_esp/html/images/says_gingy.jpg

majinsharingan
02-12-2008, 08:30 PM
lol.
Yay!
No there are three more fights until the end of the war and the arc. The arc will end on Chapter 86 or 87, Volume 16 :D

Summer.
02-12-2008, 08:36 PM
and what will you write about then? :P

majinsharingan
02-12-2008, 09:26 PM
There's still 9 story arcs left once this one is completed.
But I will say this...the next two arcs will be epic....then the three after the next too will be building up a lot. And the final three arcs will be the best. :D

Summer.
02-13-2008, 11:49 AM
oh c'mon, tell me more :D:D

majinsharingan
02-13-2008, 06:06 PM
Okay, xD

Next arc is kind of slow, not many fights, only like one or two fights. More of a serious arc, then the next arc is similar to this one except they face much stronger opponents, like they face some of the strongest Chi Lords.
In the next 2 arcs, 3 people will die. :D

And after those two arcs are over things are going to be a little slow, more serious, everything's pretty much building up for those three arcs. And then the final 4 arcs are basically everything that's been building up exploding. :D Izz nice.

And also this is what Zasalamel looked like in attack mode.

http://public2.tektek.org/img/av/m02/d13/13/963042.png (http://tektek.org/avatar/10705309)

Summer.
02-13-2008, 06:42 PM
woooohoooo! sounds very interesting^^

In the next 2 arcs, 3 people will die. :D

:eek: :eek: :eek:

majinsharingan
02-14-2008, 01:28 AM
Yep. :D
I won't say who dies though....it's funner that way :D

GangstaKage
02-15-2008, 02:00 PM
Yea and after that there is gonna be more cuz Im still holding you hastage and you cant end Chi its against the law
lol

Anyway good Chapter
I cvant believe I didnt read it till now though
Im behind on subbed too
Whens the next chapter gonna be up???

Summer.
02-15-2008, 02:34 PM
Yep. :D
I won't say who dies though....it's funner that way :D

yeah, funner for you. xDD

majinsharingan
02-15-2008, 02:36 PM
lol yeah exactly Lina. :D

I have my cousins and aunt and uncle over so I won't be on much for the next few days.

Summer.
02-15-2008, 02:37 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO. T_T

blaaaaah. ><

I hope they will leave as soon as possible xDDD

GangstaKage
02-15-2008, 02:40 PM
Yea I do to
Hotdog Man looks scary
Now you cant right the next chap
T_T

majinsharingan
02-15-2008, 02:59 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO. T_T

blaaaaah. ><

I hope they will leave as soon as possible xDDD

They're either leaving Sunday or Tuesday.

Yea I do to
Hotdog Man looks scary
Now you cant right the next chap
T_T

Yeah I know, sorry :D

Summer.
02-15-2008, 03:01 PM
They're either leaving Sunday or Tuesday.




it has to be sunday! =D

GangstaKage
02-15-2008, 03:20 PM
Yea I have of on Monday so that works pefectly
You have to have post like 5 chapters up by then tho to make up for lost time

Soul
02-16-2008, 12:28 AM
geez matt, you really have nothing better to do dont you xD

no offence.

^.^

majinsharingan
02-16-2008, 02:46 PM
geez matt, you really have nothing better to do dont you xD

no offence.

^.^

Your right I do have nothing better to do from 11 to 3 Monday through some Friday's.

Soul
02-16-2008, 03:06 PM
more like 24/7 >.>

but ya whatever.

majinsharingan
02-16-2008, 04:12 PM
more like 24/7 >.>

but ya whatever.

No, just from 11 to 4.

Soul
02-16-2008, 04:13 PM
mmk
>.>