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caseclosedchild(narurakue
03-21-2008, 07:04 PM
this is a comedy i made its ment to be funny butit might not be

naruto was walkng down the street with sasuke and sakura when Hinata comes ad says"GUYS LOOK AT THIS!!!"they look at a remote..."Hinata thats not the body sticker 4000 is it"sakura said."yes it is"hinata said and she threw it up and when it came down she missed and it exploded
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! !!!!!
They all screamed.when they looked again they were in shock!They were Like this: Sakura and Sasuke where together(Half sakura half sasuke)and same with naruto and hinata! "HINATAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"They all screamed!
"IM SORRY"she said.they all looked at each other and started to walk to Tsunade's Building


sorry if is not funny im good with thi stuff

Naruto: HINATAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Sakura:HINATAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Sasuke:HINATAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
Hinata:IM SORRY!

Always0shooting
03-21-2008, 10:10 PM
needs a little work on the length but im sure if you keep at it you can be a great writer some day ^.^

caseclosedchild(narurakue
03-21-2008, 10:11 PM
thanks its just the first part trust me

caseclosedchild(narurakue
03-21-2008, 10:19 PM
as they walked it Tsunades Building they saw the unsticker 5000!
Sakura:IM TAKING IT!*Grabs the unsticker 5000 and unsticks them all*
Hinata:........i feel funny.......
Naruto:i dont feel right
Sakura:i feel like a girl
Sasuke:i feel sooo weird
All of them:WAIT UR ME N IM U!\
as they noticed that the all brokeat laughing....but they ended up saying
"lets see how hard it is o be each other!!!"
And so they did

Naruto foundout that Hinata's life was like being a slave
Sakura found out how annoying it is to be sasuke
Sasuke found out how hard it is to be sakura
Hinata is just enjoying seeings naruto private and touching it since SHE is naruto

Always0shooting
03-22-2008, 02:23 AM
ah, interesting ending.....

caseclosedchild(narurakue
03-22-2008, 03:24 AM
lol

Tsukiko
03-23-2008, 12:14 AM
You mean perverted ending. :p

I only read it cause I was hell of bored. o_0

Always0shooting
03-23-2008, 02:45 AM
lol, yep, theres nothing to do these days but read perverted poetry o.0

caseclosedchild(narurakue
03-23-2008, 09:35 PM
dude i had no idea what hinata had to do so i used that