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majinsharingan
03-24-2008, 10:00 PM
[A song.]

Voice of Reason
where have you gone?
We need you now
More than before

Where is hope?
and where is justice.
Gone so long
Without a trace

and If I fall
They'll take it all
But I'll be coming round again
To rise above
The stars and sun
And hopefully the hate end

Chorus:

Stop!
Take a look at yourself
Take a look at the world and
Stop!
Take a look at the ground
You're standing on
Above our lives

Homes destroyed
and children crying
But you are safe inside your bed

And you don't know
What it is like
To sleep alone out in the cold

and If I fall
and lose it all
They'll stare down at me in shame
But I don't care
But I don't care
I won't play their stupid game

Chorus:

Stop!
Take a look at yourself
Take a look at the world and
Stop!
Take a look at the ground
You're standing on
Above our lives

As you rise up
We fall down
Into a dark forbidden place
We're losing Hope
We're losing Faith
And you sit by and watch us pray

[music grows louder]

How much have you given?
How much have you taken away?
Do you even care what happens to us?
Why are you spending?
Why aren't you saving?
Look at us!
Look at yourselves!
We don't need this!
You've fucked us up!
You've fucked us all up!
And you can't fix it!
So no one would fix it!
So we fall farther
and farther

[music gets soft abruptly]

down....
down...
so far down...
While you wait up at the surface we fall
down....
down...
We sit by why you take us all
down....
down...
And we don't know what this all really means

[music grows louder]

Stop!
Take a look at yourself
Take a look at the world and
Stop!
Take a look at the ground
You're standing on
Above our lives

(Stooooo-aaawwww-op.)
Look at yourself!
Look at what you're doing to us!
Do you even care!
Do you even care!
(Stoooo-aaawwww-op.)
People are dying on your watch
Why you sit by in safety.
(Stoooo-aaawwww-op.)
Drowned in your own riches!
While we sit by on the streets!
(Stoooo-aaawwww-op.)
Do you even care what you're doing to me!
(Stoooo-aaawwww-op.)
This belongs to us!
This isn't just your country!
(Stoooo-aaawwww-op.)
How long will it take
For you to open your eyes and see!
(Stoooo-aaawwww-op.)
[fades out]

GangstaKage
03-24-2008, 10:04 PM
I like it!
Well I pretty much like all of your writing but....yea

Olivia_13
03-25-2008, 12:17 AM
I like it! Is it a fast paced song or slow? I think it would do well slow then fast. But it is really good. Maybe it'll bring some sense to people in the world.

HyuugaHinata
03-25-2008, 12:44 AM
I liked it...^_^.

majinsharingan
03-25-2008, 05:03 PM
I like it! Is it a fast paced song or slow? I think it would do well slow then fast. But it is really good. Maybe it'll bring some sense to people in the world.

Kinda slow. and thanks ^_^