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Always0shooting
04-03-2008, 11:28 PM
Im not realy religious but i wrote this beacause ive been haveing troubles lately, enjoy tho ^.^


My prayers

Each day brings the promise,
Looking for tomorrow,
A chance for the time,
I can live with no sorrow.

To forget the yesterdays,
All the pain in the past,
The promise of a tomorrow,
A journey that is so vast.

The anthem of my heart,
Hollow in it-self,
Drowning in the tears i’ve cried,
From everything i’ve felt.

My heart screams out for you,
My lips for your touch,
But my prayers fall on deaf ears,
And it hurts me so much.

ayu.chan
04-03-2008, 11:37 PM
^^ you're extremely talented. i liked this poem. Keep up the good work! :)

Olivia_13
04-04-2008, 12:20 AM
*clap clap clap clap* Wonderful! You are way better than me.

HyuugaHinata
04-04-2008, 11:31 AM
That was amazing ^.^ Great work.

~Nel Tu~
04-04-2008, 11:37 AM
wow its great ^^