A Poem

[AsaMiyuki.]

Okay so this is a poem I wrote after one of my close friend's friend died.
It's a little morbid and depressing but I have been told it good and speaks to some people so her it is!

Withdraw
She says "This is getting old"
And her throat hurts but notfrom the cold
But from the swallowing of all those pills
Thinking "Maybe time will stand still"
She lives knowing she is cursed
She grows panicked searching through her purse
She starts to sweat, and her heart beats fast
She says to herself, "I wonder how long this is going to last"
She then collapsed with great pain
She fell unconscience when the paramedics came
Her heart grew faint, and almost silent
She wouldn't have died if withdraw wasn't so violent.

The End

[Tsukiko]

Awesome. ^^ I liked it. ^^

[AsaMiyuki.]

Thanks Crimson.

[HyuugaHinata]

That's great. I like it too. 10/10

[Uzumaki Naruto 13]

hmm um... its okay

[Raving Shadow]

I say what i said before

it's mad ali ^^

[~Nel Tu~]

10/10 Its awsome ^^

[AsaMiyuki.]

Thanks guys!!!! ^_^

[Always0shooting]

Its always good to write about a close freind that past away. My freind also past away recently so i know how you feel. Good poem.

[AsaMiyuki.]

Thanks Always Shooting. It actually kinda help writing about her then sobing.


***Oh and this poem is not the way she died it just kinda came after she died if you know what I mean!