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Always0shooting
04-13-2008, 07:18 PM
Shorter than the rest of my poems but enjoy ^.^

If success is a measure
Of how many nothings
Glorify my bank statements,
Then I am a failure,
After a score of
Meandering years.

If success is a measure
Of how many times
Your airbrushed face
Graces the screens
Then I am a failure

If success is knowing
Then I am a failure.

If success is peace,
Then I am a King.

HyuugaHinata
04-14-2008, 01:49 AM
I really like it ^_^ 10/10

ayu.chan
04-14-2008, 02:52 AM
10/10! great, as always.

~Nel Tu~
04-14-2008, 03:08 AM
10/10 Like I said before I love your poems xP

Uzumaki Naruto 13
04-14-2008, 04:08 AM
thats cool dude 10/10