Your Eyes

[Always0shooting]

Another poem, enjoy ^.^


Your Eyes
When I look at your eyes, I see your true self.
I see you're sweet, and caring.
I see you're giving and forgiving.
I see your love for me.

When I look at your eyes I stop myself from crying
When I'm alone and think about your eyes I cry.
I can't stop thinking that one day I'll never see those eyes again
That I'll never see the love or the sweetness
Or the love that makes you who you are.
One day you'll be gone - gone from me.
Gone from this world.
No matter what happens, those eyes will one day close
And forever rest in peace.

But you'll never be completely gone,
Because every time I close my eyes,
There you will be.

[~Nel Tu~]

10/10 you should write poems for a living your really good ^^

[Always0shooting]

Im gona be a famous rock singer/bassist, my talent at poetry does help alot with lyrics tho.

[HyuugaHinata]

Aww, it moved me. 10/10

[Uzumaki Naruto 13]

umm...thats good

[HyuugaHanabi]

I really liked it :) 10/10

[Olivia_13]

I wrote a poem about what is in peoples' eyes. But your's is better. 10/10
This really got me inside.