Knight_of_Night
04-26-2008, 08:16 AM
Yo guys this is manga of mine that I started two years ago and I kind of found a document in my computer about it! So,i read it again, found it a little bit childish but i couldn't help it: I decided to continue with it! I'll post you the first two chapters of Volume #1 of my manga here! You can tell me what you think of it, make some comments and maybe even predictions LOL (that would help me to develop story better)! So here you go and enjoy! (yeah there are some grammar mistakes, I'll correct them later)!
Haggard Magic Manga
Written by Sasuke of AD
http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/7499/73894754.png
Volume #01 - Northern Land Crisis
Chapter #001: ENTER! Disaster in the snow!
Haggard Magic
Haggard Magic Volume #01: Northern Land Crisis!
Haggard Magic Chapter #001: ENTER! Disaster in the snow!
Shows white background.
Shows black letters on the second page bottom:
“It used to be nice….”
Shows white background.
“…Oh so nice, here in the Northern Land. Even the undying winter breeze felt warm and encouraging! I can clearly remember the soft rays of the Sun tapping my head…”
Shows a lonely pink flower.
Shows an empty bird nest.
“ and that loud scream of the polar eagle over our heads, while we used to travel around the land, enjoying the song of nature…”
Shows white background.
‘…it felt like home…but now…everything changed!”
(shows chapter page)
Shows mountain in the background.
Shows a man walking in the snow.
Shows the mans face (has big bared, hair over his left eye and scars over his face), and his cigar.
Text Box in the bottom of the page: “Mandagor! Age 77, old smuggler and traveler!”
Shows a black cat walking beside the old man.
Text Box: “Magic! Age ???, a lazy good for nothing bother (says Mandagor)!”
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: !
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: ?
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: Shut up, you stupid pest! My mood is bad enough you don’t need to spoil it with your irritating voice.
Magic: #
Mandagor: Oh yeah? Now it’s my fault that we got lost in this Nederland!?
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: Well than next time maybe you should lead the way, smartass!
Magic: Mew Mew!
Mandagor: Yeah right you can’t even get that your tail is not another cat!
Magic: MEW?
Mandagor: Well sorry for crushing all of your dreams and hopes I guess you’re just stuck with me…which is sad…really sad!
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: If that is so than why are you still here?
Magic: Mew?
Mandagor: I knew you would say something like that! But what if I stop giving you food will that make you go away.
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: Yeah, I figured you are evil from the first time you’ve stolen my bag!
Magic:…
Mandagor:…
Shows them walking thought snow storm.
Shows Mandagor looking in all directions.
There is nothing but white surroundings.
Mandagor: Great! First I went senile and forgot the path, than I started arguing with a cat and now I am caught in fucking snow storm. We should try to find some shelter.
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: Say what?
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: Hey, people could die without my products.
Magic: Mew?
Mandagor: No not really I’ve never told them its just a Serevera!
Note: “Serevera! A plant that can change shapes and looks. Usually old smugglers use it to make people believe its a cure for some illnesses.”
Magic: Mew Mew!
Mandagor: NO, of course not! That doesn’t make me a bad guy.
Magic: Mew.
Mandagor: Heh, you know so little about this world. If you make people believe that they are desperate and that this is the cure for all of their problems, they’ll buy it and on the end they’ll think it actually helps them. Its all up here.
Shows Mandagor throwing his dead cigar.
Mandagor: Damn wind!
Shows Mandagor pointing his head.
Shows Magic nodding.
Mandagor: Besides, I never sell Serevera to those who actually have any chance of surviving.
Shows how wind started to blow harder.
Shows Mandagor losses his hat.
Mandagor: Damn it!
Shows Mandagor running in the direction of where the hat landed.
Shows Magic following him.
Shows magic standing alone in the middle of the storm.
Mandagor: Graaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
Magic: !
Shows Magic running towards Mandagor.
Shows Mandagor holding on the edge of a cliff.
Magic: !
Mandagor: You stupid cat, don’t just stand there help me!
Magic: #MEW#!
Mandagor: Hey its not only my fault!
Magic: Mew Mew Mew!
Mandagor: I didn’t do this on purpose, I was trying to get my hat back.
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: DON’T CALL ME AN IDIOT, IDIOT!
Shows Magic and Mandagor fighting!
Shows two balloons filled with many many.....many curse words!
They stop.
Show them looking each other .
BRUUUUMMMMMMMM!
Mandagor: W...What is that?
Magic: ?
Shows how part of the mountain falls.
Magic/Mandagor: IT MEW A MEW AVALANCHE MEW!
Shows them falling off the cliff with the snow!
Shows them hitting their heads of the rocks.
Shows them merging with ground!
Shows white background and black letters:
“So damn nice!”
Shows a young boy and girl poking someone's but with a stick.
Boy: I think this but is dead.
Mandagor (from the snow): Muwhawhawhwh!
Girl: Oh my God, the but has spoken!
Shows girl hiding behind the boy.
Boy: Don’t be ridiculous.
Shows boy grabbing Mandagor and dragging him out of the snow.
Shows a creature with body of a man and head of a black cat.
Boy and Girl: AAAAAAAAA, its a CAT-MAN!
Shows them running away.
Shows Mandagor throwing Magic off his head.
Mandagor: BEGONE!
Shows the cat falling in front of the boy and girl.
Boy and Girl: AAAAAAAAAAAA Its a CAT-MANS HEAD!
Shows them fault
Magic: Mew 0.0!
Mandagor: Sigh...our loud voices must have provoked that avalanche.
Shows Mandagor getting up and looking around.
Shows mandagors hat in the snow.
Mandagor (picking up his hat): Its a miracle we are still alive!
Shows Magic still looking at the boy and the girl.
Magic: Mew?
Mandagor: Nah, leave them. Their parents will take care of them.
Magic: MEW MEW?
Mandagor: Sheesh before you start yelling look down there.
Show Mandagor pointing at some village in the dell.
Mandagor: We finally arrived at our destination.
(end of chapter)
Next Time: Who are these fellow travellers, and what is their objective in that small village? Find out next week in chapter: "Northern Land Crisis"! CYA!
Chapter #002: "Northen Land Crisis"
Haggard Magic
Haggard Magic Volume #01: Northern Land Crisis!
Haggard Magic Chapter #002: Northen Land Crisis!
Shows Mandagor carrying two little children.
Shows Magic jumping on the rocks.
Shows the village.
Note: Snowtown, small village hidden deep in the mountain. Its said that this village is the only independent part of the Northern Land.
Magic: Mew?
Mandagor: Yeah, I am sure no one followed us.
Shows Mandagor turning around.
Mandagor: Besides no one is stupid as we are to go thought a snow storm.
Mew: Mef pf!
Mandagor: Yup, I am speaking of myself.
Shows a woman running from the village.
Shows Mandagor putting the children down.
Woman: Yuki, Ewo are you okay.
Shows the children waking up.
Shows Magic jumping on them.
Shows Magic looking at them
Magic: Mew?
Yuki/Ewo: ITS the CAT-MAN’s HEAD!
Shows them faint again.
Woman: !
Shows Mandagor kicking Magic.
Mandagor: BEGONE!
(shows chapter page)
Shows an empty town square.
Shows a small house in some dirty street!
Shows Mandagor sitting on the table and Magic behind him.
Shows the woman cooking.
Woman: The meal will be ready soon mister.
Mandagor: !
Woman: Thank you for bringing them back in the village. After that avalanche I was worried they maybe caused it! Who knew what could’ve happened!
Mandagor: Well yeah they probably did cause it.
Shows Mandagor and Magic looking at the children.
Shows Mandagor drinking bear and smiling.
Mandagor: After all its that time of the year and I am not stupid to.....
Yuki/Ewo: They did it!
Shows them pointing over Mandagor.
Shows Mandagor spitting his bear all over the place.
Mandagor/Magic: NO MEW WE MEW DIDN’T!
Yuki: Your voices were so loud we could hear you miles away.
Ewo: I wonder what those words...
Shows Magic running to Ewo.
Shows Magic putting its palm over Ewo’s mouth.
Mandagor: Ehehe, I am sure they had fever out there.
Shows woman laughing.
Woman: Yuki, Ewo go and grab us some wood will you. And apologize to this kind mister.
Yuki: Its not fair no body ever trusts us.
Ewo: Lets go sis.
Shows them leaving the house.
Mandagor: Heh, don’t worry they are still kids, they don’t understand the meaning of “lie”.
Women: I guess so.
Magic: Mew?
Mandagor (to Magic): Yes I understand, now shut up and drink that milk of yours.
Shows woman putting the plate with meat in front of Mandagor.
Woman: You must be hungry to after coming all the way here mister.
Mandagor: Well yeah, thank you....
Woman: Elza!
Mandagor: Thank you Elza.
Shows Mandagor finishing his meal.
Shows Magic sleeping.
Mandagor: Can I ask you something?
Elza:?
Shows the room from above and Mandagor and Elza in it.
Mandagor: I am sure this is the first time you met me, and I am sure you know about the village status. How can you be sure I am not the kings spy?
Shows woman looking Mandagor in the eyes.
Elza: You saved my children, that's good enough reason.
Mandagor: !
Elza: Besides there something good in your eyes..or one eye...whatever.
Mandagor takes his cigar.
Mandagor: It must be hard...
Elza: It is. Sometimes I just wish the king to send his army and take this place in his control.
Mandagor:?
Elza: We have no splays anymore. Half of us got sick, and the other run away from here, believing they will reach the Konkura town on the other side! On the end they got lost in the mountains and died.
Elza: After them some of the leftover people tried the same thing but winters are becoming worse and worse every year, and we couldn’t even walk 10 fetes outside of the village.
Mandagor: There is only one explanation for the sudden weather change...
Elza: I am not stupid stranger, and I did hear the stories of our idiotic, lost-minded leader, and I do not have time to believe in something as “magic”!
Shows Magic opening its eyes.
Elza: Which rings my mind...how did you manage to come here?
Mandagor: Magic!
Shows Elza turning red.
Elza: Sorry but I find that offensive.
Mandagor: He he no no, what I wanted to say a magician never reveals his tricks.
Shows Elza turning around and taking the plate.
Elza: I am alone with two children. My man died seven years ago when the king last time sent his men to conquer us.
Shows a young mans face in the background.
Man: We won, they are leaving the dell.
Shows men celebrating.
Shows a solider with black armor throwing his knife.
The knife hits the man in his head.
Shows the group of men watching the dead body.
Solider: Pathetic! Remember thisssssss: thissssss wasssss the last attempt. I'll probably die ssssssoon and thisssss issss my gift to you.
Shows the strange solider pointing at dead body.
Solider: Your fate hassss been sealed from the moment you chose to oppossssse ussss.
Shows soliders green eyes.
Shows Mandagor closing his eyes.
Mandagor: He must have been a hero.
Shows Elza washing the plate silenty.
Elza: We have no money, and we depend on old smugglers like you, who only want to screw us up even more.
Mandagor: HEY!
Elza: I want to get out of here.
Shows Elza grabbing Mandagors hands.
Shows Elza starting to cry.
Elza: I am sick of this all. I am sick of running around and trying to convince that old fool to give up.
Shows Mandagor making serious face.
Elza: Do you know how much my heart breaks when I tell my children “There won’t be dinner tonight.” Not to mention that I can’t buy them anything, I can’t educate them, cause I never went to school.
Mandagor: !
Shows Yuki and Ewo entering the house.
Yuki: We got the woods mum.
Elza: I do not want my children to live their life the way I lived it.
Mandagor: Sigh, I do not have money or food to give you Elza-chan. and I can do little for you.
Shows Mandagor taking his coat and bag.
Mandagor: But what I can tell you that you have no business complaining.
Elza: What?
Mandagor: You don’t know how people live outside this village. All of them would die for your place and that little part of bread you gave me.
Magic: !
Mandagor: We do not chose our destiny, what life throws at us we take it, there is no other option. Your kids will have to deal with that. YOU have to deal with that.
Yuki: Mum, are you crying?
Ewo: What have you done to our mother Cat-Man?
Shows Mandagor ignoring the children.
Mandagor: The king you so want to come here will only make your lives miserable after all the troubles you gave him. Northern Land is in deep crisis. The are so high you will lose your house in few days, the prices are so high you would sell your shoes in few minutes, and the horror that you will experience when they recruit your boy and take your girl to...
Shows Ewo and Yuki watching him.
Shows Mandagor smiling at them.
Mandagor: Just watch what you wish for, it might come true. You should not think of what the others have. Instead you should thank God for your so damn good life.
Elza: !!!!!
Elza: Where are you going?
Mandagor: To see “the old fool”.
Shows Mandagor leaving the house.
Shows Magic turning around.
Magic: Mew!
Shows Elza and the kids standing alone and speechless in the house.
Shows Elza hugging Yuki and Ewo.
Ewo: M...
Elza: Forget it. Lets get you something to eat
(end of chapter)
Haggard Magic Manga
Written by Sasuke of AD
http://img686.imageshack.us/img686/7499/73894754.png
Volume #01 - Northern Land Crisis
Chapter #001: ENTER! Disaster in the snow!
Haggard Magic
Haggard Magic Volume #01: Northern Land Crisis!
Haggard Magic Chapter #001: ENTER! Disaster in the snow!
Shows white background.
Shows black letters on the second page bottom:
“It used to be nice….”
Shows white background.
“…Oh so nice, here in the Northern Land. Even the undying winter breeze felt warm and encouraging! I can clearly remember the soft rays of the Sun tapping my head…”
Shows a lonely pink flower.
Shows an empty bird nest.
“ and that loud scream of the polar eagle over our heads, while we used to travel around the land, enjoying the song of nature…”
Shows white background.
‘…it felt like home…but now…everything changed!”
(shows chapter page)
Shows mountain in the background.
Shows a man walking in the snow.
Shows the mans face (has big bared, hair over his left eye and scars over his face), and his cigar.
Text Box in the bottom of the page: “Mandagor! Age 77, old smuggler and traveler!”
Shows a black cat walking beside the old man.
Text Box: “Magic! Age ???, a lazy good for nothing bother (says Mandagor)!”
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: !
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: ?
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: Shut up, you stupid pest! My mood is bad enough you don’t need to spoil it with your irritating voice.
Magic: #
Mandagor: Oh yeah? Now it’s my fault that we got lost in this Nederland!?
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: Well than next time maybe you should lead the way, smartass!
Magic: Mew Mew!
Mandagor: Yeah right you can’t even get that your tail is not another cat!
Magic: MEW?
Mandagor: Well sorry for crushing all of your dreams and hopes I guess you’re just stuck with me…which is sad…really sad!
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: If that is so than why are you still here?
Magic: Mew?
Mandagor: I knew you would say something like that! But what if I stop giving you food will that make you go away.
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: Yeah, I figured you are evil from the first time you’ve stolen my bag!
Magic:…
Mandagor:…
Shows them walking thought snow storm.
Shows Mandagor looking in all directions.
There is nothing but white surroundings.
Mandagor: Great! First I went senile and forgot the path, than I started arguing with a cat and now I am caught in fucking snow storm. We should try to find some shelter.
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: Say what?
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: Hey, people could die without my products.
Magic: Mew?
Mandagor: No not really I’ve never told them its just a Serevera!
Note: “Serevera! A plant that can change shapes and looks. Usually old smugglers use it to make people believe its a cure for some illnesses.”
Magic: Mew Mew!
Mandagor: NO, of course not! That doesn’t make me a bad guy.
Magic: Mew.
Mandagor: Heh, you know so little about this world. If you make people believe that they are desperate and that this is the cure for all of their problems, they’ll buy it and on the end they’ll think it actually helps them. Its all up here.
Shows Mandagor throwing his dead cigar.
Mandagor: Damn wind!
Shows Mandagor pointing his head.
Shows Magic nodding.
Mandagor: Besides, I never sell Serevera to those who actually have any chance of surviving.
Shows how wind started to blow harder.
Shows Mandagor losses his hat.
Mandagor: Damn it!
Shows Mandagor running in the direction of where the hat landed.
Shows Magic following him.
Shows magic standing alone in the middle of the storm.
Mandagor: Graaaaaaaaaaaaaa!
Magic: !
Shows Magic running towards Mandagor.
Shows Mandagor holding on the edge of a cliff.
Magic: !
Mandagor: You stupid cat, don’t just stand there help me!
Magic: #MEW#!
Mandagor: Hey its not only my fault!
Magic: Mew Mew Mew!
Mandagor: I didn’t do this on purpose, I was trying to get my hat back.
Magic: Mew!
Mandagor: DON’T CALL ME AN IDIOT, IDIOT!
Shows Magic and Mandagor fighting!
Shows two balloons filled with many many.....many curse words!
They stop.
Show them looking each other .
BRUUUUMMMMMMMM!
Mandagor: W...What is that?
Magic: ?
Shows how part of the mountain falls.
Magic/Mandagor: IT MEW A MEW AVALANCHE MEW!
Shows them falling off the cliff with the snow!
Shows them hitting their heads of the rocks.
Shows them merging with ground!
Shows white background and black letters:
“So damn nice!”
Shows a young boy and girl poking someone's but with a stick.
Boy: I think this but is dead.
Mandagor (from the snow): Muwhawhawhwh!
Girl: Oh my God, the but has spoken!
Shows girl hiding behind the boy.
Boy: Don’t be ridiculous.
Shows boy grabbing Mandagor and dragging him out of the snow.
Shows a creature with body of a man and head of a black cat.
Boy and Girl: AAAAAAAAA, its a CAT-MAN!
Shows them running away.
Shows Mandagor throwing Magic off his head.
Mandagor: BEGONE!
Shows the cat falling in front of the boy and girl.
Boy and Girl: AAAAAAAAAAAA Its a CAT-MANS HEAD!
Shows them fault
Magic: Mew 0.0!
Mandagor: Sigh...our loud voices must have provoked that avalanche.
Shows Mandagor getting up and looking around.
Shows mandagors hat in the snow.
Mandagor (picking up his hat): Its a miracle we are still alive!
Shows Magic still looking at the boy and the girl.
Magic: Mew?
Mandagor: Nah, leave them. Their parents will take care of them.
Magic: MEW MEW?
Mandagor: Sheesh before you start yelling look down there.
Show Mandagor pointing at some village in the dell.
Mandagor: We finally arrived at our destination.
(end of chapter)
Next Time: Who are these fellow travellers, and what is their objective in that small village? Find out next week in chapter: "Northern Land Crisis"! CYA!
Chapter #002: "Northen Land Crisis"
Haggard Magic
Haggard Magic Volume #01: Northern Land Crisis!
Haggard Magic Chapter #002: Northen Land Crisis!
Shows Mandagor carrying two little children.
Shows Magic jumping on the rocks.
Shows the village.
Note: Snowtown, small village hidden deep in the mountain. Its said that this village is the only independent part of the Northern Land.
Magic: Mew?
Mandagor: Yeah, I am sure no one followed us.
Shows Mandagor turning around.
Mandagor: Besides no one is stupid as we are to go thought a snow storm.
Mew: Mef pf!
Mandagor: Yup, I am speaking of myself.
Shows a woman running from the village.
Shows Mandagor putting the children down.
Woman: Yuki, Ewo are you okay.
Shows the children waking up.
Shows Magic jumping on them.
Shows Magic looking at them
Magic: Mew?
Yuki/Ewo: ITS the CAT-MAN’s HEAD!
Shows them faint again.
Woman: !
Shows Mandagor kicking Magic.
Mandagor: BEGONE!
(shows chapter page)
Shows an empty town square.
Shows a small house in some dirty street!
Shows Mandagor sitting on the table and Magic behind him.
Shows the woman cooking.
Woman: The meal will be ready soon mister.
Mandagor: !
Woman: Thank you for bringing them back in the village. After that avalanche I was worried they maybe caused it! Who knew what could’ve happened!
Mandagor: Well yeah they probably did cause it.
Shows Mandagor and Magic looking at the children.
Shows Mandagor drinking bear and smiling.
Mandagor: After all its that time of the year and I am not stupid to.....
Yuki/Ewo: They did it!
Shows them pointing over Mandagor.
Shows Mandagor spitting his bear all over the place.
Mandagor/Magic: NO MEW WE MEW DIDN’T!
Yuki: Your voices were so loud we could hear you miles away.
Ewo: I wonder what those words...
Shows Magic running to Ewo.
Shows Magic putting its palm over Ewo’s mouth.
Mandagor: Ehehe, I am sure they had fever out there.
Shows woman laughing.
Woman: Yuki, Ewo go and grab us some wood will you. And apologize to this kind mister.
Yuki: Its not fair no body ever trusts us.
Ewo: Lets go sis.
Shows them leaving the house.
Mandagor: Heh, don’t worry they are still kids, they don’t understand the meaning of “lie”.
Women: I guess so.
Magic: Mew?
Mandagor (to Magic): Yes I understand, now shut up and drink that milk of yours.
Shows woman putting the plate with meat in front of Mandagor.
Woman: You must be hungry to after coming all the way here mister.
Mandagor: Well yeah, thank you....
Woman: Elza!
Mandagor: Thank you Elza.
Shows Mandagor finishing his meal.
Shows Magic sleeping.
Mandagor: Can I ask you something?
Elza:?
Shows the room from above and Mandagor and Elza in it.
Mandagor: I am sure this is the first time you met me, and I am sure you know about the village status. How can you be sure I am not the kings spy?
Shows woman looking Mandagor in the eyes.
Elza: You saved my children, that's good enough reason.
Mandagor: !
Elza: Besides there something good in your eyes..or one eye...whatever.
Mandagor takes his cigar.
Mandagor: It must be hard...
Elza: It is. Sometimes I just wish the king to send his army and take this place in his control.
Mandagor:?
Elza: We have no splays anymore. Half of us got sick, and the other run away from here, believing they will reach the Konkura town on the other side! On the end they got lost in the mountains and died.
Elza: After them some of the leftover people tried the same thing but winters are becoming worse and worse every year, and we couldn’t even walk 10 fetes outside of the village.
Mandagor: There is only one explanation for the sudden weather change...
Elza: I am not stupid stranger, and I did hear the stories of our idiotic, lost-minded leader, and I do not have time to believe in something as “magic”!
Shows Magic opening its eyes.
Elza: Which rings my mind...how did you manage to come here?
Mandagor: Magic!
Shows Elza turning red.
Elza: Sorry but I find that offensive.
Mandagor: He he no no, what I wanted to say a magician never reveals his tricks.
Shows Elza turning around and taking the plate.
Elza: I am alone with two children. My man died seven years ago when the king last time sent his men to conquer us.
Shows a young mans face in the background.
Man: We won, they are leaving the dell.
Shows men celebrating.
Shows a solider with black armor throwing his knife.
The knife hits the man in his head.
Shows the group of men watching the dead body.
Solider: Pathetic! Remember thisssssss: thissssss wasssss the last attempt. I'll probably die ssssssoon and thisssss issss my gift to you.
Shows the strange solider pointing at dead body.
Solider: Your fate hassss been sealed from the moment you chose to oppossssse ussss.
Shows soliders green eyes.
Shows Mandagor closing his eyes.
Mandagor: He must have been a hero.
Shows Elza washing the plate silenty.
Elza: We have no money, and we depend on old smugglers like you, who only want to screw us up even more.
Mandagor: HEY!
Elza: I want to get out of here.
Shows Elza grabbing Mandagors hands.
Shows Elza starting to cry.
Elza: I am sick of this all. I am sick of running around and trying to convince that old fool to give up.
Shows Mandagor making serious face.
Elza: Do you know how much my heart breaks when I tell my children “There won’t be dinner tonight.” Not to mention that I can’t buy them anything, I can’t educate them, cause I never went to school.
Mandagor: !
Shows Yuki and Ewo entering the house.
Yuki: We got the woods mum.
Elza: I do not want my children to live their life the way I lived it.
Mandagor: Sigh, I do not have money or food to give you Elza-chan. and I can do little for you.
Shows Mandagor taking his coat and bag.
Mandagor: But what I can tell you that you have no business complaining.
Elza: What?
Mandagor: You don’t know how people live outside this village. All of them would die for your place and that little part of bread you gave me.
Magic: !
Mandagor: We do not chose our destiny, what life throws at us we take it, there is no other option. Your kids will have to deal with that. YOU have to deal with that.
Yuki: Mum, are you crying?
Ewo: What have you done to our mother Cat-Man?
Shows Mandagor ignoring the children.
Mandagor: The king you so want to come here will only make your lives miserable after all the troubles you gave him. Northern Land is in deep crisis. The are so high you will lose your house in few days, the prices are so high you would sell your shoes in few minutes, and the horror that you will experience when they recruit your boy and take your girl to...
Shows Ewo and Yuki watching him.
Shows Mandagor smiling at them.
Mandagor: Just watch what you wish for, it might come true. You should not think of what the others have. Instead you should thank God for your so damn good life.
Elza: !!!!!
Elza: Where are you going?
Mandagor: To see “the old fool”.
Shows Mandagor leaving the house.
Shows Magic turning around.
Magic: Mew!
Shows Elza and the kids standing alone and speechless in the house.
Shows Elza hugging Yuki and Ewo.
Ewo: M...
Elza: Forget it. Lets get you something to eat
(end of chapter)