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majinsharingan
04-28-2008, 09:15 PM
This scene kinda came to me last night, it's a scene from my seventh manga, Affliction(title not final yet).

Sam: They’re coming…
June, a bit confused: What, sweetie?
Sam: They’re coming. And we’re all going to die.
June: Who told you that?
Sam: Andy did.
June: Andy? Your doll?
Sam nods.
June, a bit scared: Can I see it real quick, sweetie?
Sam runs back in her room: Okay!
June walks to the doorway of her daughter’s room.
Shows Sam in her room holding her doll(The Doll: Did you tell her what I told you?)(Sam: Uh-huh…)
June looks scared.
Sam, holding the doll: Now can we have a tea party?(The Doll: *sighs* Fine! But only one!)
Sam: Yay!
June: Sam…
Sam: Yeah?
June: Can I see Andy for a second?
Sam: Okay!
Sam hands June her doll.
June looks at it.
Shows a ring on the back that you pull(and it speaks).
June pulls the ring.
The doll mumbles something.
June looks confused.
June holds the doll to her ear.
June pulls the string.
The string comes in slowly.
The doll: Your next…
Jane, looks shocked: !

Always0shooting
04-28-2008, 09:18 PM
Good chap, by the way, did that company review your Crash manga?

majinsharingan
04-28-2008, 09:24 PM
It's not a chapter, just a preview for the manga, and I'm sending in Hostage first, and not yet, I'm gonna send it in tomorrow :D

Always0shooting
04-28-2008, 09:31 PM
Oh goodie :D Tell meh if they aprove!

majinsharingan
04-28-2008, 09:47 PM
Okay, I will :)