naruhina_sakusasuke
04-29-2008, 08:15 PM
i made this up as i was typing for another thread so....yeah.
im coming home from home and i hear a scream...oh no, ali is in trouble, but what it that gynormous thing thats carrying her? is it a beast? a monster? ah wth, its still bad. all of a sudden i fell a white-hot flame in the pit of my stomache...what is it...it is heat? pain? nothing i ever felt before. welll whatever it is its making my body feel ultra-light...is my body really 180 lbs., cuz it feels about 50 lbs now. lets see how faast i can run now. *takes a step and realizes im still moving forward, stomps foot down and stops in an instant*. wow, this is like on-the-spot movement. *oh no* ALI. wait, whats it doing....OMG, ITS FLOATING! ive got to stop it!. but how?!?! i know, ill use this new movement thing i have. umm....wasnt my books in my bag? it feels like theres nothing in there..but they are all there, whats happening. i know...im superman now! yesss! lets lift this log and throw it at the thing.... *ugh* (*Snap!*) wth....i cant lift it...damnit! *slams fist down and smashes log and leaves a crater in the ground*..WTF!?!?!? ok, this works. *ali screams again, this time the scream is cut short, and she falls* i....can....catch...her.....ahh, got her a foot before she hit the ground. stay here with ali, i think shell be fine for now. (sarah says ok with a feeble voice and falls next to ali) *you black out, probably from rage cuz he threw ali to the ground *youve loved ali since grade school, when you first saw her, but only you and the ppl who pay attention know about it, (like sarah)* when you wake up, sarah is shaking your body saying 'shes awake, she's awake, so wake up for her' you look over and see ali, resting her head against the corner of a tree, constantly watching you; and as you realize what is happening, she rushes over to you and yells "WHY!? WHY DIDNT YOU JUST RUN LIKE THE OTHER PEOPLE? DONT YOU KNOW YOU COULDVE BEEN KILLED??" then she looks at you and says "why did you come after me first, there were other people who wouldve been easier and faster to help, so why did you come for me first? TELL ME!"
ok, thats alll for now, i cant find an ending yet, so i cant finish it yet.
thoughts?..............comments?
im coming home from home and i hear a scream...oh no, ali is in trouble, but what it that gynormous thing thats carrying her? is it a beast? a monster? ah wth, its still bad. all of a sudden i fell a white-hot flame in the pit of my stomache...what is it...it is heat? pain? nothing i ever felt before. welll whatever it is its making my body feel ultra-light...is my body really 180 lbs., cuz it feels about 50 lbs now. lets see how faast i can run now. *takes a step and realizes im still moving forward, stomps foot down and stops in an instant*. wow, this is like on-the-spot movement. *oh no* ALI. wait, whats it doing....OMG, ITS FLOATING! ive got to stop it!. but how?!?! i know, ill use this new movement thing i have. umm....wasnt my books in my bag? it feels like theres nothing in there..but they are all there, whats happening. i know...im superman now! yesss! lets lift this log and throw it at the thing.... *ugh* (*Snap!*) wth....i cant lift it...damnit! *slams fist down and smashes log and leaves a crater in the ground*..WTF!?!?!? ok, this works. *ali screams again, this time the scream is cut short, and she falls* i....can....catch...her.....ahh, got her a foot before she hit the ground. stay here with ali, i think shell be fine for now. (sarah says ok with a feeble voice and falls next to ali) *you black out, probably from rage cuz he threw ali to the ground *youve loved ali since grade school, when you first saw her, but only you and the ppl who pay attention know about it, (like sarah)* when you wake up, sarah is shaking your body saying 'shes awake, she's awake, so wake up for her' you look over and see ali, resting her head against the corner of a tree, constantly watching you; and as you realize what is happening, she rushes over to you and yells "WHY!? WHY DIDNT YOU JUST RUN LIKE THE OTHER PEOPLE? DONT YOU KNOW YOU COULDVE BEEN KILLED??" then she looks at you and says "why did you come after me first, there were other people who wouldve been easier and faster to help, so why did you come for me first? TELL ME!"
ok, thats alll for now, i cant find an ending yet, so i cant finish it yet.
thoughts?..............comments?