For all members of TN and all manga lovers please I need your impresions of.....

[Knight_of_Night]

This is a manga I made year ago and I just accidentally butt of a rifle on it and I wish to make it "active again"! So please tell me if I should continue with it or not! Thanks!

Haggared magic

Chapter #001 : 17 years before.....

Shows two dragons fightng.
Shows two man on the dragons.
Shows one female elf with a child.
Mandagor (old man with long white bired): Akumo gankokyu....
Shows big wolf comes from his mouth!
Wolf atacks black dragon and young man on it.....
Dragon escape it – man take his sword and kill the wolf.
Zamur: Hahahahahah.....I am sure you can do better.....
Man put his hand on his mouth and big fire snake comes out of it!
Snake atacks blue dragon and bite it!
Dragon: Rawrrrrr.....
Elf: !!!!!
Madagor: Fuck....

(shows chapers page)

Mandagor runs to dragons tail.
Mandagor takes his sword!
Mandagor jums at black dragons head!
Zamur: Ohhhh.....finally some fun!
Mandagor trys to hurt Zamur.
Zamur avoid the atack!
Zamor takes his sword and starts the duel with Mandagor!
Elf: MANDAGOR COME BACK HERE.....HE WILL KILL YOU!
Zamur: The elf speaks wise....why dont I help you.....
Zamur debouch Mandagors sword from his hand!
Zamur: KANKO.....
An air blast hits Mandagor.
Mandagor fall into elfs hands!
Elf: Are you okey?
Mandagor: Ughhh.....yeah I quess.....
Mandagor stands up and runs to dragons head!
Mandagor put his hand on the dragon and one in the air....
Mandagor: Help me now will ya....Imano Usake.....
Big ligtning strikes the black dragon.
Dragon starts to fall.
Blue dragon fast went trought some gill.
Elf: Did we lost him?
Mandagor: I dunno....his more powerfull than that.....
Another big fire snake showes from nowhere and bite the dragons head.
Elf: Aiiii....
Mandagor: SARO.....get away from her.
Mandagor rise his hand and destroys the snake.
Elf: Where is he?
Baby: !
Mandagor: He is using the forbiden magic of course.....I cant predict his next move while that.
Saro ( the dragon): I....am hardly hurt.....I dont think I can help you with the spells any longer!
Mandagor: Thats OK.....you have done enough.....
Mandagor looks around.
The black dragon shows.
Mandagor: So there you are.....very unwise from you brother.....Imano USAKE....
Lightning hits dragon.....dragon desapire in dust!
Mandagor: !
Zamur with dragon shows behind them.
Zamur: Yeah very “unwise”!
Black dragon bite Saros tail.
Elf: !
Mandagor: The trap spell.....SHIT....
Zamur: Hahahhahaha.....
Mandagor rise his hand.
A cloud of vapour shows.
Mandagor: I cant see him anymore.....this will buy us some time!
Saro: I.....cant fly.....my wings are getting wet!
Elf: Hold on Saro!
Mandagor: Okey lets see....
Mandagors eyes become extremly blue!
Mandagor: He is standing on some clif!
Elf: Trying some spell.....
Mandagor: Yeah....I cant see what.....
Elf: Dark spell?????
Saro: As usuall I sopose! Mandagor.....give me an eye!
Mandagor puts his hand on dragons head.
Dragons eyes become same blue as old mans!
Saro: He desapeared!
Elf: !
Mandagor: Dont worry he is trying to fly as high as his dragon can!
Elf: .....to avoid the vapour?
Saro; Yeah.....I think I have some strainght left to help you with this Mandagor!
Mandagor rise his hand and the vapour becomes bigger!
Mandagor: Dona.....use the heat spell and make the Saros wings dry!
Elf (Dona) : What about the baby?
Mandagor: Give him to me!
Dona give Mandagor the baby and starts the spell.
Mandagor: Saro.....
Saro: He is following us....somehow.....
Mandagor: He cant see us!
Dona: But he might hear us.....
Mandagor: Than quiet all.
Shows Saro, Dona and Mandagor standing quietly.
Saro doesnt move her wings.....only press on trough the air!
Baby starts to cry!
Mandagor: FUCK.....shut up.....
Dona: You wont attemper him like that.....
Mandagor: Shut up I said.....
Dona: You wont tell me what to do....I am the princess of the.....
Saro: Guys.....
Shows picture of Zamur hearing their voices.
Zamur: !
Black dragon strats to fly fast!
Mandagor: I know who you are just make the freaking baby stop crying!
Saro: GUYS.....
Dona: How can you fight in contitional like this....its not my foult he is hungry!
Saro: Oh SHIT Dona WATCH OUT!
Zamor and the black dragon strike the left wing!
Dona starts to fall.
Half of Saros left wing get lost in the vapour!
Saro starts to fall in deferent vector!
Mandagor: DONA.....
Mandagor takes some cow hid.
Mandagor: AGASU.....
The hid becomes extremly long!
Mandagor catches Dona!
Zamur: Hahahhahaah.....good bay!!!!!
Black dragon burke the hid!
Dona fall in some forest!
Black dragon hit Saro.
Saro fall on some clif!
Mandagor jumps from Saro.....hide the baby in some tree.....
Mandagor: I WILL KILL YOU.....
Zamur: Come and get me brother!
Mandagor rise his both hands and made something like applause.
Giant wind circle apears and hits black dragon!
Zamur jumps from the dragon!
Zamur: Akumo gankokyu.....
Big fire snakes apears and hurts Mandagor!
Zamor take his sword and knife Mandagor!
Mandagor: Aghhhh.....
Zamur: You were saying something.....
Mandagor trys the same spell as last time!
Zamur hits him again and grb his bired!
Zamur: You intevene in my plans for the last time!
Zamur take Mandagor to same recipice.
Mandagor: If you touch the baby.....
Zamur: You’ll do what?
Mandagor: You dont want to do this....
Zamur: Actually.....I do.....
Zamur throws Mandagor in the river below!
Zamur: Ahhhh such a relife.....now the baby!
Zamur rise his hand: Hasho ukamo INSUNO!
Big green light come from the tree!
Zamur: So there you are!
Zamur takes the baby.
Baby starts to cry again!
Zamur: Who would tell.....that some one like you....can cause so many trubles!
Saro: Get....a-a-a-a-away.....from h-h-h-h-him....
Zamor throws his sword into Saros nose!
Zamur: I hear that you are the dragon that carrys the last dragon egs!
Saro: !
Zamur: Well.....I cant afore that comfort for my new kingdom.....
Saro: NO.....
Zamur throw some spell at her!
Zamur: Done....
Zamur looks at baby.
Zamur: You will be just fine prince.....hahahhahahaha.....

(end of chapter)

Next Chapter: Night of anger: Elf vs. Human

[majinsharingan]

I'm not a fan of the whole Magican/Dragon/Elf thing but it's pretty good, needs a bit of editing in a few spots and parts a bit hard to read but still, pretty good.

[Knight_of_Night]

I'm not a fan of the whole Magican/Dragon/Elf thing but it's pretty good, needs a bit of editing in a few spots and parts a bit hard to read but still, pretty good.

Oh yeah well as I said I done it while ago and I just find the paper where I wrote it! So I just typed it fast.....omg I didnt said it was a pilot chapter.....well now I did.....and I know it needs to be re-done again so I am glad you like it!

[Knight_of_Night]

Okey the chapter #002 is ready!

Haggared magic

Chapter #002: Legacy of magic: Part 1: Night of anger

Shows Zamur flying with baby on black dragon.
Dragon flys over some town.
Dragon lands in front of some big castle!
Zamur takes his sword and jupms from the dragon!
Castle doors opens.
Few wariors and one high old man step outside.
General Kraty: My Lord, warior among wariors, dark of the light, magician.....
Zamur: Skip the trail idiot.....I am not in the mood!
General Kraty: Yes my Lord!
Zamur: Take the baby to the highest tower and give it to Manila.....
General Kraty: But where are you going?
Zamur: The elfs ruled this land more than its permissiblly.
General Kraty: ?
Zamur: I am going to end this stupid war once and for all! When you are sure the baby is safe bring your best mans and atack Estalion! We are going to chack them on sleep!

(Shows chapters page)

Shows some old man falling in big river!
Man take his wooden sword!
Mandagor: Astula Inkyuko!
Mandagor transforms into fish!
The fish swims to the river side!
Mandagor swims out of river!
Mandagor: DONA?????
(Only black background)
Mandagor: Fuck.....
Mandagor: What now.....Dona, Elfs or chiled? I quess that baby will be alright, Dona would want for me to help those who are in greater danger.....on the sub rub of death!
Mandagor: Even if I try I cant be there on time.....but still there is hope.....
Shows entire batalion of hard armed wariors.
They enter the woods runing!
General Kraty sees black dragon over them.
General Kraty: My Lord, we are ready when you are!
Zamur: Ima ushi ko ino Ima ushi ko ino.....INO.....
The center of the woods desapire and big city apears!
Zamur: Hahhahahahahah.....ATACK!
Black dragon makes fire and atacks the east part of the town!
Estalion gate guardian #1: WTF?
Estalion gate guardian #2: We are under atacak.....WE ARE UNDER ATACK!
An arrow hits one one guardian!
Zamur’s dragon turs around and breaks the main gate!
Shows some elf sleaping.
The Elf: !
Elf looks trough the window.
Shows army of wariors atacking the city and killing its citizens!
The Elf: In the name of.....
Elf runs to other part of the room and takes some big instrument!
An alarm signal enlarged!
Zamur: TO LATE!
Dragon shows from nowhere and eats the elf!
Shows half of the city on fire and destroyed!
Shows some castle on the end of the city!
Elf #1: MY LORD WAKE UP!
Hushan (the king of Elfs): You better have....an.....good reason!
Elf #1: I am terebly sorry but our city is under atack!
Hushan: WHAT?
Hushan push the elf and runs to open window!
Hushan sees the teror of his city!
Shows Hushans eyes!
Shows Zamurs eyes!
Hushan: Zamur.....Evaquate all people and take the troops on the betlefront!
Elf #1: Yes sir!
Elf runs out of the room.
Hushan thakes his battle armor.
Hushan: How in the name of did he got the hidden spell?
Shows a batalion of elfs.
Warior #1: The elfs are coming!
General Kraty: Be ready.....they are not easly to take down!
Show pictures of battle.
Shows how elf batailon nearly destroys the humans.
Show some big elephant killing Zamurs army.
Zamur: !
Zamur: Akumo gankokyu.....
Shows giant fire snake eating the elephant.
Zamur: Akumo gankokyu.....
Another one killing the elfs!
Elf #1: My Lord the dark magician Zamur is the leader of the atack.....even with the powers of elfs only by himself he looks more stronger than all of us together!
Hushan: His power comes from the dragon! We need to separate them.....
Elf #1: How?
Hushan: Leave it to me.....
Shows picture of elf runing under atack of Zamurs dragon!
Shows how Zamurs wariors kill the elf kids and woman!
All of the elf wariors points their arows at Zamur.....
Zamur: Amakuro.....
The arrows just fly back to the elfs and kill them all!
Husan: STOP!!!!!
Zamur: !
Hushan: You animal.....
Zamur: I tought that elfs are pure magical beings, children of Haggared magic!
Hushan: .....
Zamur: But now I see how much I have grown!
Hushan cruoches to palm dead female elf and child!
Hushan: I’ll kill you.....

(end of chapter)

Next Chapter: Rain of pain, Zamur vs. Hushan! Who is Zamur, or better what is he? Only one battle left to decide the desteny of the world!

Also this manga should be published on Gashu-Group manga comunity soon!