Naruto X Sakura FC

[pyledryver90]

man its hard to catch u guys, ur both in diff time zones, king is at least 2 hours behind me, and summer ur like 6-8 hours ahead, im on central mountain time in iowa

[KingTW]

I'm mountain time for america so ya xD. And Lina is 8 hours ahead of me

[Summer.]

everybody on tn is like at least 5 hours behind me.
except for Flavio, Hisham and Rob. and the UK people. xD
I probably forgot someone, cuz I don't know all of them =D

[KingTW]

ya, cuz most people live in north america =p

[Summer.]

yeah they live there, tho europe is so much cooler :D

[KingTW]

never been 2 europe, so I can't put my opinion down on which is better, but ya i've heard good things about europe xD

[Summer.]

well, I wasn't in america before... but since I know many people who live there and say it sucks I'm ok with being in europe =D

[pyledryver90]

i cant realy say i want to go anywhere but the US, nothing against anywhere else, i just want to settle down here and do my thing, is there anywhere u guys want to go besides where u live? i dont think the us sucks, the people who say that usualy care too much about what happens to other people. im sayin if u live an honest life, and u arent clueless about ur finances(thats when ppl get ripped and say america sucks) its a good safe place to live

[Summer.]

Safe? hmmm Idk bout that, usa have lots of school-shooting...

If I would live anywhere else that would be Provence <3ˇhttp://www.learn-french-in-france.info/learn-french-in-provence-1.jpg

But I'm happy here, I love my country =]

[KingTW]

Besides the damn weather I get here, I like it where I am xD, I don't plan 2 move from here permanently

[pyledryver90]

yes, there are alot, but ive never lived anywhere near anything like that, and i would like to visit hawaii sometime, but nowhere out of US... i love The Lake of the Ozarks in Missouri, my dad lives there and im moving there this summer
http://photos-a.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v122/90/83/690765182/n690765182_1268284_2401.jpg (http://hs.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=1079821&id=690765182)

... it smells so great there, and it was still like 80 degrees when i took this pic at like 8:00

[Summer.]

woah, its beautiful^^

[KingTW]

Stuff like that where I live as well, North America and Europe have different types of beauty in them to offer.

[Summer.]

Stuff like that where I live as well, North America and Europe have different types of beauty in them to offer.

indeed :)

almost every country is beautiful in some way :)

[KingTW]

lol ya that's true xD. I know 1 thing that stands out 2 me here is the sunsets we get here

[Summer.]

awh, we don't have nice sunsets :(

but it's great since Slovenia is so small, and we still have lots of different types of landscape. we even have a piece of sea =P

[KingTW]

ya, I live in land, so I don't got that =(

[Summer.]

teehee, I coincidentally found one pic which should be in naruxsaku fc:

http://www.animegalleries.net/albums/userpics/88520/narusaku.jpg

xD

[KingTW]

hahaha nicee xD. I've seen that pic come to think of it. I googled Naruto x Sakura and looked at image results. xD

[Summer.]

and yet you never posted such a wonderful pic :D

[KingTW]

it was too troublesome for me to bother xDD

[Summer.]

now you sound like shikamaru xDD

[KingTW]

you know that thread about which Naruto character reminds u the most about urself. Well I'm most like Shikamaru, besides his thing about girls being to troublesome, it's scary how much he reminds me of myself. I'm lazy, but if motivated, I excel, just like Shikamaru xD

[Summer.]

really! to think bout that... you really sound like him from time to time xD

I guess I'm total opposite. yes, I'm lazy if I have to do school things and I find few things troublesome, but otherwise I'm like naruto. always talking, asking stupid things and I'm like always hyper. that can be really annoying from time to time xD

[KingTW]

eh, none the less, naruto is a good person 2 b like n e ways xD.

[Summer.]

hehe, true xD

tho I don't know how to make rasengan. eh xD

[KingTW]

aww that's 2 bad xD. I'm SUREE if you practise u'll B ABLE 2 xD

[Summer.]

of COURSE I'll :D

there's nothing to worry bout it.
give me 3 days and I'll master it xDD

[pyledryver90]

im gonna keep practicing kage bushnin no jutsu so i can have my shadow clones do my work for me xD

i like ur kyuubi chibi, hes eating raman... i bet kyuubi hates raman, lol


check this out

http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd198/oksi-chan/Naruto/Akatsuki/Tobi%20Madara/Incognito_by_crow213.jpg

[Summer.]

I would love to have kage-bunshins... everyone would have to memorize one sentence and I would know everything for my school. *sigh* what a beautiful dreams xD

and thanks, I bet kyuubi just loves ramen =D everyone likes it!

[KingTW]

haha like the pic xD.

And agreed, Kyuubi must like ramen big time, I bet that's y Naruto likes it so much, he has 2 eat it for himself and kyuubi xDD. I wish I had kage bunshins 2 =(, life would b so much easier

[pyledryver90]

i see the kyuubi lusting for naruto to just take a nice juicy bite out of a cow, i cant see a demon beast loving raman, although animals usualy love human food

the ability to preform jutsus would be kickass, until the guv takes u to area 51 and runs tests on u, at least they try but they actualy took a clone and when they leave ur all like "sukers"

[KingTW]

I wish I could use jutsus =(. Life would b much more interesting xD

[caseclosedchild(narurakue]

can i join???

[pyledryver90]

sure, u can join

[Night-]

can i join???I cant believe you lil bro your support to be the 3rd leader of the nahc clan -.-'''' Your just a memeber of the nahc now you are off the leader of the nahc clan listen -.-






@Everyone I just want to know. Why do you like narusaku?Do you just like them cuz they welll get thogeth?

[KingTW]

go read the why narusaku topic u posted, I've explained myself 2 many times 2 b bothered 2 do so again

[Night-]

Its just a yes or a no aswner -.-"

[KingTW]

u asked y, which demands an explanation, and I dun feel like explaining y again so I had said 2 go and look in that topic xD.

However 2 answer ur 2nd question. No I don't like them just becuz it looks like they will get together. I have supported NaruSaku since episode 1 of the original Naruto. As we alrdy know, things in the original Naruto looked very bad for NaruSaku 2 happen, becuz Sakura was hanging all over Sasuke, add that to the hype NaruHina was getting and things in the original Naruto series didn't look good at all for NaruSaku. However, now that we've come 2 shippuuden, things are looking way up for NaruSaku, so that just makes me happier that it looks like it will happen. I will b NaruSaku til the end, even if it doesn't happen, I'll still stick with saying they would've bin my favorite, and if it does happen, that's great and I hope the Naruto audience embraces it.

The thing about being NaruSaku fan as well, is that maybe while not on this forum, but most everywhere else, NaruSaku fan base is a minority to NaruHina and SasuSaku. NaruSaku get's bashed big time. However, I still stick with it, cuz I like the pairing whether it happens or not.

[Incendiary]

By the way, you gotta add this to the AMV's list:

http://youtube.com/watch?v=XlCHLKoqLT4

It's one of the best. :]

[KingTW]

That was good, I'm usually not big in2 amv's, but that was actually not bad xD

[Summer.]

Its just a yes or a no aswner -.-"

yeah, that was the same kind of question as: "are you still a druggie?" and now answer yes or no.


and thanks Incendiary, that vid was awesome, even the music choice <3 nickelback <3

[KingTW]

I hafta admit, even though I'm not a big fan of them, they're pretty good

[Summer.]

yeah they are :)

I like this band quite much xD
tho I like few others even more...

[KingTW]

mhm, there's quite a few better i'd say, they're still good though xD

[Summer.]

I'm going on the concert in May :)

Bon Jovi! Can't wait.

I already was at his concert once. it was sooooooo awesome.

[KingTW]

NO WAY, U LIKE BON JOVI, HAHAHA I NEVER THOUGHT I'D MEET SUM1 WHO LIKED BON JOVI ON THIS SITE. Ya, he's actually my favorite artist hahaha

[Summer.]

NO WAY, U LIKE BON JOVI, HAHAHA I NEVER THOUGHT I'D MEET SUM1 WHO LIKED BON JOVI ON THIS SITE. Ya, he's actually my favorite artist hahaha

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT!!!!!!!!!

I like him the most, tho I love few others bands as well, but he's my number 1 for sure!
awesome, another thing we have in common. :p
have you ever been at his concert? if you weren't than you just have to go! it rocks.

[KingTW]

he's been where I live a few times lately, I went a couple times, damn it was awesome xDD

[Summer.]

omg you went a couple times!!!!!!!!!
what does that mean! I was just once and I needed like... 8 hourse of driving to got there! and then I was waiting in line for 5-6 hours xD

but it was definitely worth of it. one of the best moments in my life =D

[KingTW]

ya no kidding it was definently worth it xD.

I already live in a city, and Bon Jovi has toured through a few times in the past year, and I'm DEFINENTLY not complaining, we're actually getting a lot of song artists through here now, some good, some bad, but they have nothing on Bon Jovi xDD

[Summer.]

you are... SOOOOO lucky. *envy*

I reserved my ticket 4 months ago tho the concert is in May...
and it's not in slovenia of course. there will be a lot of driving again, but oh well, I don't mind =D

so, which is you fav song?

[KingTW]

"Have a Nice Day" easily xD, how about urself??

[Summer.]

have a nice day is great song^^

I like It's My Life the most =P

I also love Wild Is The Wind, These Days, Always... etcetcetc =D

[KingTW]

It's my life is proly my 2nd favorite xD

[Summer.]

anyways, bon jovi ftw :cool:

g2g to new jersey once :D maybe I'll meet him somewhere :D :D

[KingTW]

haha, who knows xD, I kno he actually owns an arena football league team (not soccer, but american football) called the Philadelphia Soul or sumthin haha

[Summer.]

haha, who knows xD, I kno he actually owns an arena football league team (not soccer, but american football) called the Philadelphia Soul or sumthin haha

I know that! :D When I was at his concert last year he received the news that his team won and he was so happy that he sang way longer than he intended to :D
and he was wearing the shirt of his team as well^^

[KingTW]

hahaha damn good night then for u 2 have him performing a concert there xD

[Summer.]

indeed :D it lasted 3 hours^^

and before Bon jovi started with his concert there were also nickelback there as guests =D
they were awesome as well.

[KingTW]

Nickelback ain't bad at all xD, they have a couple 2 a few good songs.

[Summer.]

more than just few :D

[KingTW]

ur a big fan of nickelback as well then?

[Summer.]

not really big fan, but I really like at least 15 songs.

[KingTW]

oic then xD. I'd hafta give more of their songs a listen, the songs I've mainly heard have bin alright, but I've never rly looked in2 it

[Summer.]

yeah you should :D


I still prefer Breaking Benjamin and Three Days Grace tho...

[KingTW]

I'm not big in2 them, however, i have 2 songs i like from breaking benjamin, and 1 from 3 days grace.

N e ways, wut does every1 think is guna happen with the fight going on in the manga atm??

[KingTW]

Sorry I'm double posting, but no1 is posting so i wanna get this FC back on track.

So, how long do u guys think Itachi has b4 he bites it?

[Summer.]

OMGGGGGG!!! double post! spammer! enough, you're GUILTY! :eek:
xDDDD

anyway
So, how long do u guys think Itachi has b4 he bites it?
what does that mean? I never heard for that phrase before :o

[KingTW]

OMGGGGGG!!! double post! spammer! enough, you're GUILTY! :eek:
xDDDD

anyway
what does that mean? I never heard for that phrase before :o


Nooooooo, LEAVE ME ALONE DAMMIT =((. lmao xD

when i say "bites it" I mean how long do u think til he dies xD

[pyledryver90]

it means how long before he dies, i dont think he will last very long, sasuke is obviously stronger.

haha, double post away, ur owners, u can do as u pleez, besides it keeps us at the top of the first page xD.

i hit someone with my parents 2007 buick rondezvouse today and cracked the bumper, im not going to tell them, ill let them think someone hit them in the parking garage that my mother parks it in everyday. im really lucky, it has onstar, and they didnt call my parents or the car, so i guess i missed the sensors that alert onstar, and it didnt do anything to the other car. LUCKY !!!!!!!!!!!!!! if i told them it was me id be dead, and poor because id be paying them off for a while. (my step father was trained to be an intarigator for the police, so im a VERY good lier when my ass is on the line, i fool him dont I?)

[KingTW]

I think Itachi has 1 or 2 more chapters, 3 if he's lucky.

And damn man, good luck on being able 2 avoid trouble xD

[Summer.]

ahhhh, then say before he dies xD
hmmm how long... well... amaterasu is his trump card, so I he won't last long anymore.
yeah, maybe 3 chaps...



my step father was trained to be an intarigator for the police
that sounds so cool :cool:

[KingTW]

psh, if i said that i wouldn't sound so professional about it xD.

[Summer.]

yeah sure :D

you sound complicated.

and what the hell does that mean? ˇ xD

psh, I'm crossing my fingers for a leg

you need to start talking more simple xD seriously... xDD

[spongeaud]

May I join I have come to really like this pairing because of the last couple of Shippuden episodes they really are cute together?!

[Summer.]

wooohoo, new member =D

sure, you're welcome :)

[spongeaud]

Awesome!!:)
So has anyone read any good fan fics for this pairing because I love to read them so if any one's made one or knows of a good one post it. Im not big on reviewing them (grammar and me don't mix) but I love to read them!

[Summer.]

ahahaha, you should ask boys xDDD

[pyledryver90]

yah, u know cuz we (ahem..) MEN, read the romantic fanfics here and arent ashamed to admit it... xD

this is a great one, i know it says naruXsakuXino, but i promis its good. if u dont believe me, think about this, ive spent about 30 mins reading each chapter for 39 chapters, add that up, now do u think i would spend that much time of my life reading a story if 1. it was not very narusaku, Me being the creator of the NaruSaku FC 2. if the writer sucked

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/3734507/1/Fury_Guilt_and_Love

[spongeaud]

awesome ill read it when I get home my school blocks fanfiction.net because the school is lame.

[KingTW]

wow they block that site, wow that rly is lame, i've never bin in a school that blocks that site lol. Well in order to give u a good referal, it's more or less a question of, how much narusaku do u want, do u want it 2 b a mainplot or a sideplot?

We've been TRYING 2 get Lina to read some but NOOOOO. Now that we have 3 ppl who read fanfic, we've gotta re double our efforts 2 get her reading sum fanfic xD

Actually 2 tell u the truth, if n e 1 is interested, I'm actually thinking of doing a fanfic, it's in the pre planning process atm though, so if I do, it might take a while 2 start up

[Summer.]

We've been TRYING 2 get Lina to read some but NOOOOO. Now that we have 3 ppl who read fanfic, we've gotta re double our efforts 2 get her reading sum fanfic xD
:o
hey, but that's not fair! now the three of you will talk about FF and I won't have any idea what's going on -_-


Actually 2 tell u the truth, if n e 1 is interested, I'm actually thinking of doing a fanfic, it's in the pre planning process atm though, so if I do, it might take a while 2 start up

what! really! that's great! I would read your ff :cool:

[KingTW]

:o
hey, but that's not fair! now the three of you will talk about FF and I won't have any idea what's going on -_-

Ya I know that sucks =(, so I'm guna help u out xD. START READING IT, and u'll have an idea of wut we're talking about xDD



what! really! that's great! I would read your ff :cool:

lol thanks xD, as i say though, it's still pre-planning, I'm not sure when i'll actually get to writing it xD, becuz as I've said b4, I can b pretty lazy.

[spongeaud]

wow they block that site, wow that rly is lame, i've never bin in a school that blocks that site lol. Well in order to give u a good referal, it's more or less a question of, how much narusaku do u want, do u want it 2 b a mainplot or a sideplot?

We've been TRYING 2 get Lina to read some but NOOOOO. Now that we have 3 ppl who read fanfic, we've gotta re double our efforts 2 get her reading sum fanfic xD

Actually 2 tell u the truth, if n e 1 is interested, I'm actually thinking of doing a fanfic, it's in the pre planning process atm though, so if I do, it might take a while 2 start up

Yea my schoo, bloacks lots of major sites like devainent art as well so when people post pics I cant see them:(
Anyways I likw them probally to be the main fouus but if its a good story Ill read it as well.

I dont think I could ever write a fic my grammer and spelling are really bad and I like readin rather then writing but if u made one I would defintly read them:)

[KingTW]

My school was the same, though I'm not sure about deviantart, I never rly looked at that site when i was goin 2 school, so i wouldn't know xD.

lol thanks xD, but I've also never written a fanfic b4, so I'm not exactly sure how good it's guna b.

[Summer.]

Ya I know that sucks =(, so I'm guna help u out xD. START READING IT, and u'll have an idea of wut we're talking about xDD
I would, but it takes too much time to read such a long text in english xD



lol thanks xD, but I've also never written a fanfic b4, so I'm not exactly sure how good it's guna b.

I'm sure it will be great :p

[KingTW]

I would, but it takes too much time to read such a long text in english xD

It's not all in english =p, they have stories in other languages, and even if so, read em 1 chapter at a time xDD




I'm sure it will be great :p

I sure hope ur right xD

[Summer.]

It's not all in english =p, they have stories in other languages, and even if so, read em 1 chapter at a time xDD
hahaha, yeah, and I'm what? Polyglot? xDD


I sure hope ur right xD
I know I'm right :cool:

[KingTW]

hahaha, yeah, and I'm what? Polyglot? xD

This Time u have me at a disadvantage, I dunno wut u meant xDD


I know I'm right :cool:

u better b XD, OR ELSE!!!

[Summer.]

This Time u have me at a disadvantage, I dunno wut u meant xDD

well, that's probably cuz I messed up something, cuz I lack knowledge of english language xDD

[KingTW]

for "lacking knowledge of the english language" u speak it pretty damn well xD. U'll need 2 teach me what a polyglot is xDDD

[Summer.]

for "lacking knowledge of the english language" u speak it pretty damn well xD. U'll need 2 teach me what a polyglot is xDDD

thanks xD

well, polyglot is someone that have incredible talent for learning different languages.
polyglots are extremely rare and they can know even more than 20 languages... I probably didn't say enough high number xD

[KingTW]

ahh i c xD.

Well to answer ur previous question, I would think that Slovenian would b on the site, and if not, a language that closely resembles it xD.

and np xD

[Summer.]

well then maybe I could take a look at it xDD

[KingTW]

YES, DO SO NOW XD.

You kno, with planning this fanfic out, it makes me respects authors all that much more. I mean even with pre-planning, it's basically just giving myself a general plot line to follow, While doing this though, I have 2 think of what I want 2 happen, and I have to make sure that events that I create go along smoothly throughout the story so there's nothing glaring that looks like it was to forced. And yet, while doing this, Masashi has basically already given me 1 hell of a background 2 work off of with making this. Now I look at how much thought this takes, and then imagine how much more work it must b for actual authors, as they have no real background 2 work off, they have 2 create everything for themselves. I'm still only 1/3 done pre-planning lol.

[Summer.]

yeah, everyone who is able to write like masashi is worth of respect :)
without books and mangas our world wouldn't be as fine as it is xD

and I can't read it right now, g2g sleep, it's almost midnight xD

[KingTW]

alright then, gnight Lina xD

[pyledryver90]

man, 7 hours ahead of our time (5 ahead of u)... anyway, yah, i havent seen a fanfic that hasnt followed the original plot line of the show, but alot of the authors put a twist on it, on the Fury Guilt Love one i read, they had naruto die, and the kyuubi took over his body, he comes back to life though, it sounds kinda weird, but it was really well planned out ud have to read it to see... now that im to the most recent chapter, i realize how far in advance he had things planned. i dont think i could to a full on fanfic like that

[KingTW]

they usually always have a twist off the main show/manga, whether it's a rly big twist or just a small 1.

[No.XIV Xion]

can i join I love sakura and Naruto

sakura cares about naruto

[KingTW]

Of course, welcome xD

[Uzumaki Naruto 13]

can i join

[pyledryver90]

sure

[Summer.]

yeees, I'm back and I know you all missed me xDDD

I have one week off now =D

no school... damn, that feels good. xD

maybe I'll have some time to read ff :cool:

[spongeaud]

really are gonna read some!!lol
but that thats sweet no school gor a week thats comin up for me soon to:)

[KingTW]

I wish I was still in high school

:mad: :mad:

[Summer.]

haHA! =D

I wish I wouldn't tho.
I kinda don't like it.
there's too much work everyday. I'm completely exhausted, cuz I studied like crazy for the last two weeks. ><

[KingTW]

i can see where ur coming from. I thought High School wasn't the greatest. But then I got out of High School, and there's so many more worries now.

[Summer.]

there is? =[
I always thought it was much more simple after high school...

[KingTW]

as did i xD, then reality kicked me in the nuts.

[Summer.]

c'mon, now you sound like my grandpa xDDD

[KingTW]

well, back in my day.. (rambles on for an hour)

n e ways, 2 the point. i guess it might not b 2 bad depending. My marks were passing grades, but not good enuf 2 get in2 collages. So right now, I'm having 2 work for money and upgrade my marks. But b4 I can upgrade my marks, I have 2 get the money 2 pay for the courses. (Which actually will b at the end of this month.) Not only that, But I need 2 find time 2 do other stuff. With all this going, I can't just blow off my friends, So I gotta find time 2 do that. As well as time 2 just relax (which isn't hard 2 come by).

[Summer.]

woah! Got it...

so you're actually doing double work?

working + school =O
respect.


well, back in my day.. (rambles on for an hour)
xDD

[KingTW]

haha thx xD.

[KingTW]

Man I'm really bad for killing conversations aren't I.

Well, what did you guys think of the last chapter, and do you think this technique of Sasuke's will finish Itachi? Also I've noticed that throughout this fight, they've shown Zetsu far more than usual in other fights. Do you think he'll play a roll?

Also, I've finally started writing the 1st chapter, I'm actually doing so as I type this xD

[Summer.]

you're welcome xD

itachi has two more chaps.
then he will die.

you started? :D great. can't wait to read it xD

[KingTW]

ya, it depends whether or not Sasuke takes his time 2 explain his jutsu next chapter, or if he executes it xD.

Ya I started, it starts where chapter 381 starts. The fiction is also a fanfic version of the Naruto series. I don't think it would happen, some of it is to unrealistic for it to happen now in the series, (you'll easily see why after 1st chapter). But basically, it's a different version of the Naruto series.

[Summer.]

cool :D

that will be the 1. naruXsaku ff I've ever read xD

[KingTW]

romance is guna be sideplot, Naruto doesn't seem to be all about romance to me, so it won't be in the story, but it will be there xD. And yes, it's NaruSaku, I'd never write a Naruto fic that was otherwise xD

[Summer.]

no, her really doesn't :D
he's funny and clumsy^^

I wanted to write my own book once.
I'm good in writing, but I just didn't have enough of patience xD
I prefer shcool essays <3

[KingTW]

I've never really been in2 essays, I always got 70&#37; on them, no matter what I seemed to do, Every grade, every essay, a 70%. However I've never really enjoyed writing essays. At the moment, I'm kind of enjoying typing up this fanfic, I've been at it for 3 hours now

[Summer.]

essays are awesome <3 that's like the only time in school that I love.
and maybe physics lessons...

woah 3 hours of typing already? you sure have patience.

you know what's amazing xD
I got up today by myself, no one woke me up xD
and I went to sleep yesterday when I wanted as well.
unbelieveable xD

[KingTW]

NO WAY, omg it's like 11:17am there!! My personal law is to not get up before noon on a weekend xD.

The patience I've shown writing this chapter has amazed even me lol. I never knew I could go at it for so long. I've almost concluded the chapter and it looks alright xD.

[Summer.]

it's 11.27am here xD

post it when you'll finish it =D

[KingTW]

you mean on this site??

[Summer.]

yeah sure.
post it in ff.

[spongeaud]

Wow your writing a fic for that long straight. I couldn't do it I'm an ok writer but I'm a slow typer and I spell horribly so it'd take me like twice as long to finish but thats awesome I can't wait to read it.

Oh and I'm reading the one that was posted earlier and it's really good man Ino and Sakura had an intense fight God. I think one f them should of died from the way it written they beat each other up pretty good.

[pyledryver90]

yah, i remember that part, it seems the writer likes breaking things, it does seem overdone in that part. or any time someone fights, walls and things get crushed or holes punched through them....

haha, if u get into writing something, sometimes it just flows out and u lose track of time, and i love writing essays, im so good at bullshiting a topic, even if i know nothin about the topic, i can make it sound like i do. and i can bulshit a speech if i know anything about the topic. everybody hates essays in my classes, but if all the tests were essays, i would be an A student

[Summer.]

^yeah same here :D

I'm always able to write and write and write and even make it sounds professional, tho I don't have any idea what should I discuss about xD

[KingTW]

yah, i remember that part, it seems the writer likes breaking things, it does seem overdone in that part. or any time someone fights, walls and things get crushed or holes punched through them....

haha, if u get into writing something, sometimes it just flows out and u lose track of time, and i love writing essays, im so good at bullshiting a topic, even if i know nothin about the topic, i can make it sound like i do. and i can bulshit a speech if i know anything about the topic. everybody hates essays in my classes, but if all the tests were essays, i would be an A student


You've got it bang on. The reason I write for so long straight, is becuz ideas came out easier. It's hard 2 start, because you gotta know where you wanna start, and how you wanna start it, and it's easier to start and stop continuously, becuz then u gotta do that bit over and over again. But if I keep going, ideas come 2 me easier and it all just flows out.

Also in regards to my fic, I'm not ready quite yet to post in on fanfic. The reason being is that the 1st few chapters's (as few as 3, and as many as 5). Are more of a prologue to set up where I want my fic to be. So I'd rather begin posting on fanfic when I'm done my prologue chapters.

However, if you like, for people in Naruto x Sakura FC, I'll email it to you. It's kinda something I was thinking of doing, giving people in the NaruSaku FC 1st look.

[Summer.]

ok then. email it xD

[pyledryver90]

me too, pyledryver@msn.com

[KingTW]

alright then, give me some feedback, cuz i wanna improve as well xD. Think I'm guna b writing chapter 2 2night.

[pyledryver90]

i thought that it was very good, i didnt see any grammer mistakes or misspellings, and it flowed very well, it didnt jump around any which is a fall of alot of fics, u were prolly wishing for some kind of suggestion on improvement, but i rly dont have any, it was very well written.

[KingTW]

damn.. sounds as though I've set my standard to high now hahaha

[pyledryver90]

i think u did, ur very talented at writing, dont doubt urself... well goin to sleeps talk 2 uguys l8er

[KingTW]

lol ya, we'll cya later xD

[Summer.]

you sent it already or what!!! O.O gotta check my inbox :p
and btw I can't looking for grammar mistakes, since I make like million of them in every post xDD

[KingTW]

lol ok then xD, ya check your inbox, it should've gone to you

[Summer.]

Yeah I got it :)

I'm going to read it right now =D

[KingTW]

alright then, enjoy xD, I'm currently writing the 2nd chapter right now.

[Summer.]

ooo 2. chap already! great :cool:

you have talent, I wouldn't change anything, and ooomyyyyy, ero-sennin is alive!!!! :eek: I wish he would still live in manga, I missed him, nice to have him back =D

[KingTW]

haha thanks xD, I hope I continue to live up to it.

Ya I kept him alive xD, he has a purpose to serve in my story, and he serves it better when he's alive rather then being dead xD. But don't get me wrong, I already have planned death's in the fic =(.

[Summer.]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO :(:(:(

we lost him once already, and now we'll lose him again? T_T

j/k, I know, it's necessary for the story flow. =]

[KingTW]

hahaha xD, no, I never said I was planning HIS death. I said I was planning deaths though xD.

[Summer.]

omg others deaths??? =O

whooooooooooooooooooooooose!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????? xD

[KingTW]

haha "other" deaths. lol xD.

"If" Jiraiya is guna die, it's not guna b for a long time. and my fic is guna b a long 1 xD. I havn't decided whether or not I'm guna axe of Jiraiya yet haha xD.

However, tune in for chapter 2 xD. *coughs*

[Summer.]

thanks for the correction =D

you told me... like... NOTHING about who's gonna die xDD
and I expected that xD

alright *tunes in*

[KingTW]

haha as much as I'm tempted to spoil it, that would ruin the surprise, and that's a great part of reading xD, so I won't spoil n e thing.

[Summer.]

blah, no need to telling me, I already know how the story will end.
you will kill naruto, so sakura'll become widow lady xD
which means you'll finally have free way to marry her xDDD

[KingTW]

psh, I'm killing Naruto next chapter in order to do that xDDD, which makes U A WIDOW AND GIVES ME SAKURA MUAHAHAHA >O

but in all seriousness xD, I'll be finished chapter 2 b4 I leave, so I'll send that over 2 u as well xD. I'm not posting on fanfiction.net til I'm completely done the prologue.

[Summer.]

omg you're right O.O
that makes me a widow as well =O T_T no way! xD

alright, send it when you'll finish it^^

[KingTW]

it's almost done now xD

[Summer.]

woot!

*sigh* what a boredom.
can't wait till evening. I'll meet some of my friends again.

yesterday I watched complete second part of lotr again xDD lol *feels obsessed xD*

and I'm eating candy right now.
and I couldn't be more random xDDD sorry :o

[KingTW]

haha nice xD. it's early early morning here right now. I do my writing after midnight. I seem to write better during that time, plus there's nothing really going on at that time unless I've already gone out.

That's a good series xD, I have it as well, I havn't watched it forever though haha.

Candy kicks ass, plain and simple xD. I have a weird addiction though.. I like cooking pasta hahaha.

[Summer.]

pasta is one of the things that even I know how to cook *proud* haha =D

and now I'm still eating candies (damn, I HAVE TO stop O.O) and listening to Bryan Adams - Summer Of 69 <33 I have nice memories connected to that song + his concert was awesome <3

[KingTW]

Hahaha Bryan Adams kicks ass xD. Summer of 69 is my 2nd favorite song from him. My favorite from him is "Thought I'd Died and Gone to Heaven"

[Summer.]

that one rocks as well :cool:

he's one of the best artists.


you know what just came on my mind... did Zetsu come to watch this fight just to get his lunch?
you know... to eat the defeated one...

[KingTW]

you mean for the manga fight? I dunno, maybe haha, They've shown him more than usual though, I'm wondering if he might have a part in this fight.

[Summer.]

yeah, for the manga fight.

I know that masashi involved him cuz he can explain different new things through Zetsu's mouth, but still... I wonder if he will eat the body at the end xD

[KingTW]

haha knowing Zetsu, he will xD, he's a cannibalistic pig haha.

I have a reason he might be there. Sasuke will kill Itachi and he'll be about to leave, then he'll find Zetsu and Masashi will quickly feed him 2 Sasuke -.- . I can see that happening...

N e who, I'm just proof reading chapter now xD.

Edit: Done with the chapter, might b a few tweaks in the end. However, I've sent both of you Chapter 2. So enjoy xD and will wait for feedback, though, I won't b on til wednesday most likely. So til then xD

[Summer.]

damn, again till wednesday O.O
ok, see you later then, I'm gonna read it soon, I just have to finish my english essay first xD

[spongeaud]

Oh so you started and finished some of stroy did u I wanaa read as soon as you guys started posting about what was happening in your story I'm like no spoliers so I skipped like the last 3 pages in the forum. I don't think I can help with grammer but I'd still like to read it:)

[KingTW]

u want 2 read it I take it xD, 1st 2 chapters r part of a prologue. doing 1 or 2 more prologue chapters after that.

N e ways, wuts ur email xD

[spongeaud]

oh ok its spongeaud@aol.com i know predictable screenname email same thing

[KingTW]

kk, it should be sent through. Enjoy xD

[Summer.]

ooooo, nice, sasuke vs itachi fight :cool:
tsukuyomi was incredibly cruel =O

naruto would kick your a$$ if he would know you're writing FF about him and you still didn't mention him xDDD

[KingTW]

haha thanks xD.

I had to think of something different for tsukuyomi. It tokk me a while to think that 1 up.

Naruto!! Kick MY ass!?!? Ya right!! (looks over shoulder).

n e who, i'm gone til wednesday now xD, til then

[Summer.]

*sigh* ok ok. see you on wednesday then :)

and don't forget to look over your shoulder from time to time xDD

[pyledryver90]

. He also had those all to familiar red eyes that the Uchiha Clan was famous for.

should be too

ur the one who asked to be critiqued, and i did so... besides that one thing, its all good, good fight scenes, not too overdone or unfocused.... very good xD

[Numer1]

Yo can I join?

[~Neliel]

can i join?

[pyledryver90]

sure, ill add u

[pyledryver90]

can anyone think of a topic?

[KingTW]

*sigh* ok ok. see you on wednesday then :)

and don't forget to look over your shoulder from time to time xDD

And I'm back, 9:06pm Wednesday my time, which I suppose for u is thursday 5:06am. Nothing new to report, Naruto jumped me for not mentioning him yet, so I now sport a dislocated shoulder, broken ribs and a broken leg. He left me alive with my guarantee's that he'll be in my next chapter, thank god that's actually the case xDDD.




. He also had those all to familiar red eyes that the Uchiha Clan was famous for.

should be too

ur the one who asked to be critiqued, and i did so... besides that one thing, its all good, good fight scenes, not too overdone or unfocused.... very good xD

bah, damn my grammar xD, it's a good thing I havn't posted these yet, so I can fix that xD.

With my fight scenes, the main thing I'm trying to maintain is the focus. The fight scenes I write in the prologue are more or less just tasters for the fight scenes later on. I'm planning for some pretty long fight scenes later on in the fic, so I gotta make sure people can keep the focus and picture the fight clearly in their head, that's my main goal with fight scenes. Also, with the prologue fight scenes, they are also shorter so I can be critiqued on them, so I can improve on them if I need 2 when the time for the fight scenes that really matter come.

Also, my 1st real tweek on Naruto happens next chapter. What I've done the last 2 chapter's I'd call minor, as it's more or less just giving different outcomes to fight's that have already been started. You'll know what the tweek is when you read it, it will stand out, and the explanation about why I did it will be at the end of the chapter.

[Summer.]

And I'm back, 9:06pm Wednesday my time, which I suppose for u is thursday 5:06am. Nothing new to report, Naruto jumped me for not mentioning him yet, so I now sport a dislocated shoulder, broken ribs and a broken leg. He left me alive with my guarantee's that he'll be in my next chapter, thank god that's actually the case xDDD.
xDDD he will be in next chap? awesome =P

yeah, fights are the most interesting anyway, lots of fights <3

[KingTW]

I've started a bit so far on chapter 3, but I'm having a bit of a time thinking so far 2night lol

[Summer.]

I wish you a productive thinking then xD

[KingTW]

haha thanks xD

I have the general idea's of this chapter down, I'm just trying to think of a good transition from event to event in the chapter

[Summer.]

sounds complicated xD

you're writing it right now?

[KingTW]

ya, atm n e ways xD.

I'm only 4 paragraph's through however, I'm stuck at a certain part, so I'm trying to find a good way to keep it going. I'm also taking a quick break to let my mind relax a bit so i might b able 2 come sit down again and have the answer

[Summer.]

hehe ok.

My sister was writing something once, and she even got inspiration in her dreams. very weird xD

[KingTW]

lol, that seems 2 b a common theme xD. I wish I could get that lucky

[Summer.]

maybe you will.

Matt got inspiration in his blanket once xDD sooo... everything is possible xD

[KingTW]

haha that's true xD.

I thought of a way out of the spot however, I'm just finishing that up then I'm guna go 2 sleep, I'm really tired atm lol xD

Edit: Going to sleep now xD, cya on Friday

[Summer.]

alright.

see you later. =]

[spongeaud]

I'm sorry I haven't even started reading yours yet I want to finish the one Im reading now so I don't get them confused but don't worry its saved on my computer so I can start as soon as I'm done with the first one I'm reading

[pyledryver90]

r u reading Fury Guilt Love?

[pyledryver90]

i added a poll to this fc, asking when people think this will happen if it does, i put answers ranging from 15 manga chapters from now, all the way to a possible second timeskip/epilogue.... 15 chapters i think is very soon as far as the speed of events in manga chapters, but i thought some people may think it will happen that soon. i personaly think if kashimoto has it happen within the series, it will be at least within 50-60 chapters, i think at the speed he writes, this is somewhat ample time for things to get rolling. although i dread the day naruto is ended :(, it is also possable for it to happen in a second timeskip/epilogue to the series.....
i hope naruto will be as long as inuyasha, and not end anytime soon, i would be so bored without it

[spongeaud]

r u reading Fury Guilt Love?

Yea its good I like it!:)

[pyledryver90]

yah, i loved it, waiting for the next chapter sucks, i like when u first start reading and can sit for hours and read read read, cuz theres like 42 chapters, but once uve read all of them, u have 2 wait

[KingTW]

I answered your question with "soon." However, I'm thinking it'll be 20-40 chapters. I think for me it mainly depends on how soon they start focusing on it. If they start focusing on them again very soon, then I think 20 chapters, but if Kishi jumps around with other characters like he has been since pretty much chapter 340, then I think it'll be 40 chapters. However I guess he's also at the point in which he's running out of places to jump around. So I'll go on a whim and say about 25 chapters. In July or August to be more specific.

I also have 2 questions to add xD.

1. How do you think the Naruto series will end?
2. Which couple do you think is the most serious threat to screw up NaruSaku?

[pyledryver90]

i hate to think about the end of the series, but i think the two ways that it will end will be the eventual death of naruto in some way (him dying before becomeing hokage), or him achieving his goal in love (sakura) and becomeing hokage, but have sasuke being like orochimaru (just like tsunade, jiryah, and orochimaru)......

and for the second question, i think the only think being a danger to narusaku would be sasuke, i know sakura has no feelings for him any more, but i realy dont know the mind of Kashi, so sakura could be blinded to her love for naruto if sasuke becomes a konoha nin agian after killing sasuke, which i cant see happening, but if that doesnt happen, and he is still evil and nevercomes back, there will be no threat to naruto and sakura... i think when (if) it happens, it will start with naruto passionately appologizing to sakura for not keeping his promise (with many tears and much pain), he tells her he just wanted her to be happy and feels like he failed her, she starts on how he makes her happy, feelings are truly confessed and things go from there

ud shit ur pants if it actualy goes down like that

[KingTW]

1. I think if Naruto dies, Sasuke will live, and if Naruto lives, Sasuke will die. However, I do believe that this series is going to end with the extinction of the Sharingan. Therefore that means that Itachi, Tobi(Madara or Obito), Kakashi and Sasuke have to die for my theory to be right. With that said, I think Naruto will get Sakura (I've already stated how soon I think that will happen, plus the fact that I'm in this FC says I support and think the couple will happen) and either be Hokage, or be named the person who will take over the position.

2. I also think the biggest threat is SasuSaku. No offence to NaruHina fans, but I think that that pairing simply won't happen, no matter what happens. The way I look at it is, is that Sakura loves both Naruto and Sasuke, however, I think they are 2 different types of love. I think her love for Sasuke is more of a superficial type of love, while her love for Naruto is more personal and true. So the question, with me saying that, and assuming my theory true (not saying it is, let's just pretend), is how much Sakura has grown up. If she truly has grown up, which I think she has, she will choose Naruto.

[pyledryver90]

true.... true indeed, very wise....

what ive read in alot of fanfics (but is a good point) is that if sakura comes to terms with her feelings and they end up reavealing them to each other, naruto might be hesitant because he might think she is going to him because she couldnt have sasuke, so if that is true.... even if sasuke dies, naruto might have to get over the idea that he feels second best to sasuke, and she will probly have to do something to prove her love

[KingTW]

I don't think it'll be to the point in which she has to prove it big time, but she might have to talk 2 him a bit more than 1 would think when it happens. Naruto might be a bit hesitant, but not to that point I think.

[pyledryver90]

true, since his first reaction to her confessing will brobly one of great happiness, it will prolly not take much to convince him, hes not as dumb as he makes himself out to be, he knows her very well, so he will know that she is telling the truth

i wonder if Kashi ever looks at fan sites or forums about what people think will happen?

[KingTW]

I wouldn't be surprised if he does, As a fanfic author always is curious as 2 how people like his/her story, a real author would be curious 2 xD.

[Summer.]

I'm sure he does.

and then he will see all predictions of ours and do the opposite to surprise us xD

[KingTW]

If he wonders into this specific forum.. I'd be scared =(

[Summer.]

why!?

that would be awesome!
kishi on tn! just great! =D

[KingTW]

nono, I mean this specific "Naruto x Sakura FC" sub forum. =p. Then he'd change it from NaruSaku :mad:

[Summer.]

oh that! that would suck.

if he would change it into naruhina. blah, naruhina. I mean... hinata. I kinda don't like her.

[KingTW]

i don't think it would ever happen. Hinata is 2 much of a side character, no real development. xD

[Summer.]

plus, she's also not naruto's type.

[KingTW]

definently not, she barely even knows him anyways. Which makes her definently null. Sakura knows Naruto very well, making her the perfect candidate xD

[Summer.]

that perfect candidate is what I'm afraid of O.O KISHI DON'T READ THIS!!!!!!!!!!!

maybe he will kill sakura and let naruto all alone for the rest of his life -_-

[KingTW]

psh, there's no worries for you, Naruto would have you xD.

Unfortunately, if Sakura was killed off, that would make me a male-widow =(

[Summer.]

you're right, naruto still has me :p

and what if both of them get killed! =O
that would suck so much!

[KingTW]

Time to go threaten Kishi!

If he kills both of them.. I will RIP HIM APART!!!!!

[Summer.]

hellzzz yeah!!!

KISHI READ THIS!!!!!! xDDD

he can't do that. the two main characters... no no no, he can't kill naruto.
I don't really mind what will happen to sakura tho... xDDD J/K xD

[KingTW]

Haha damn rights, he better read this now xD. If he reads it, he'll know that we'll hunt him down if he kills him!!!

He can't kill NARUTO AND SAKURA DAMMIT, NOT JUST NARUTO T-T

[Summer.]

indeed, we saw through him, or how you englishmen say it xDD

but still... at some point it would be cool whether he kills sakura, cuz that means naruto remains single =D

[KingTW]

PSSSH, I'd rather he knock off Naruto, so Sakura would be single, hence, SHE..WOULD..BE..MINE!!

[Summer.]

NO!!!

1. naruto is still more important for the story than sakura is.
2. naruto should be single.
3. which means: me+naruto= <3

xDD

[KingTW]

NO!!!!!!

1. Naruto's death is forshadowed, so he MUST die. Sasuke also MUST DIE, because the extinction of the Sharingan MUST happen.
2. Sakura, will be the only one 2 survive, as she will be overlooked in power compared to her 2 teammates
3. That leaves her alone, until "moi" comes along

xDD

[Summer.]

=O O.O !!!

1. you would kill off naruto AND sasuke????????!!!!!!!!! you're CRAZY!!!! what should I do then? no naruto AND no sasuke! tragedy! that won't happen -_-
2. she's the perfect one for death, since she's not... well male xD
3. you think she would like you? :p

xD

[KingTW]

1. YES I WOULD KILL THEM OFF *maniacal laughter* AND YOU *points finger* WOULD BE A WIDOW *more maniacal laughter*
2. Sakura is the perfect one for life, for those exact same reasons.
3. DAMN RIGHT'S SHE WOULD!! Do you think Naruto would really like you?? xDDD

[Summer.]

1. Canadian psychopath!!!!!!!!!!!! O.O
2. that reason is very very poor =P from my point of view xD
3. I don't think, I simply KNOW! xDDD

[KingTW]

1. I..AM..NOT..A..PSYCHOPATH!!!!!!!!!!! I'M NORMAL DAMNIT!!! *rocks back and forth on the floor, curled up in a ball*
2. Personally, I think it's a very sound and correct reason xD
3. O DO YOU NOW!?!?!?! WELL I SIMPLY KNOW AS WELL!!!!

[Summer.]

1. *shows many people sitting in the circle.
-"Meet Tanner, he's also psychopath, but he's already taking medicines"
-"Weeeeeeeeelcome Tanner!"*
2. yeah but we both know that your personal opinion is weird =D
3. and again: we both know that what you think you know is actually far from truth xDDD

[KingTW]

1.*I'VE BEEN FORCED HERE, I'M NOT A PSYCHOPATH, AND I'M DEFINENTLY NOT ON MEDICATION DAMNIT!!!!*
2. My personal opinion is LAW!!!
3. Once again: my opinion is LAW!!!!!

[Summer.]

1. typical example of a man who tries to deny his own free choice. it's nothing wrong with finding help in some community :)
2.&3. damn, men are so complicated creatures *rolleyes* xD

[KingTW]

1. I..DON'T..NEED..HELP!!!!!!
2. Psh, Women are the 7 wonder's of the world rolled up into 1, there's no point in trying to understand them. TAKE THAT xDD

[Summer.]

1. I..DON'T..NEED..HELP!!!!!!
2. Psh, Women are the 7 wonder's of the world rolled up into 1, there's no point in trying to understand them. TAKE THAT xDD

1. *shows man in white frock, approaching with a huge needle*
"easy, easy, calm down, everything's gonna be just fine."

2. What? sorry, I didn't understand even one single word. It has to be my lack of english knowledge :o :o :o

HAHA :cool:

[KingTW]

1. NOOOOO!!!!! *jumps out window*

2. Haha xD, I got that line from a comic book I read way back. Basically the meaning of it is "Man will never completely understand the mind of a woman."

[Summer.]

1. emo.
2. hahaha, I was joking xDD I understood it, it was just much more simple to pretend not to xDD

[KingTW]

1. It was a 1 story drop, I ran when I hit the ground xD
2. PSSSSHHHHH

[Summer.]

1. you messed up something... you were in 10th floor
2. no. xD
3. why is there no 3. ? T_T

[KingTW]

I'm starting to lose track of this conversation now hahaha.

[Summer.]

yeah me too xDD

that's cuz you made it too complicated. HA! xD

[KingTW]

NUH UH, U MADE IT TO COMPLICATED.

Would you believe I've been writing my fanfic during this whole convo xD, I'm still writing chapter 3 lol. I'm actually really tired now and I'm going to bed. I should finish the chapter by tomorrow.

[Summer.]

haha you have? :D nice, sakura would be proud of you :cool:

alright, good night then :p

[KingTW]

psh, would be proud, hell she is proud xDD

[KingTW]

Well now, since conversation died, I'll start us up again.

I just finished chapter 3 xD. I'll send it to you now. Enjoy and look forward to your input xD

[Summer.]

Well now, since conversation died, I'll start us up again.

I just finished chapter 3 xD. I'll send it to you now. Enjoy and look forward to your input xD

conversation is never dead.

thanks for the chap, it's quite long, so I'll read it as soon as I will have more time (end of the week probably) cuz I have 4 tests this week T_T

btw, great sig xD

[spongeaud]

I'm probably gonna start reading your story because it will take me forever to finish the other one I'm reading I think my mind can handle 2 stories at one time and plus I really want to read yours:)

[KingTW]

conversation is never dead.

thanks for the chap, it's quite long, so I'll read it as soon as I will have more time (end of the week probably) cuz I have 4 tests this week T_T

btw, great sig xD

no one was posting =(, and this topic is my favorite place to talk on these forums xD.

Ya it's a long chapter, there was a certain point in there where I wanted to maybe end it, but I decided if I did that, chapter 4 would be too short. End of the week eh, alright then xD. and gl with your tests.

Thx xD, I like the sig 2 =p


I'm probably gonna start reading your story because it will take me forever to finish the other one I'm reading I think my mind can handle 2 stories at one time and plus I really want to read yours:)

Yay xD, another reader!! Chalk the # of readers up to.. 3! xD. I hope you enjoy my story lol. And I also hope u enjoy the other 1 your reading. It'll b hard to get confused, cuz if your reading that Fury, Love, and Hate story, our stories take place in different times xD

[spongeaud]

oh ok sweet do you think you could send me the first two chapters I can't find were I saved them and I wanted to read it darnit. Sorry to have to make you email me again. But thanks.

[pyledryver90]

jeezus christ!!!! that fight was depressing!!!!! DONT DO THAT AGAIN!!!!! GOD... it made me feel like crying for Kiba to watch that !!!! please dont have naruto go and see the aftermath, just have him show up at the funeral.... dont be that cruel !!!!

i was just wondering, is this a narusaku fanfic, or just a naruto fanfic?

[KingTW]

Ya, that was a really cruel fight lol. I did my job then if I got you to feel for Kiba in that fight. The aftermath to the following 3 chapters is for chapter 4. So Naruto will find out about the Kiba fight, but I won't tell you how. Also, It sounds like it would be hard to go read that fight again, but, with that fight, I also made sure to word certain parts very carefully.

Also, it is a NaruSaku fanfic. However, it's not going to be one of those fics that touches upon the NaruSaku relationship every chapter. If I was to categorize this fanfic, I'd put it under Adventure/Romance. The Action/Adventure bit will take a big roll in this fic. However there will be NaruSaku in the fic as well, just not to the degree in which it's all your reading about. With that chapter I also tried to integrate a bit of NaruSaku... kind of. I wanted it to look at the point in which, they still don't realize it, but it's there. I'm not going to immediately rush the relationship and have Naruto and Sakura making love in chapter 5. Instead I'm going to try to build it throughout the story.

[pyledryver90]

kewl kewl, yah, good idea not to rush the relationship, thats where alot of fanfics go down the tube.... and ur lucky that u did that to post-skip hinata, and not pre-skip.... i would have had to kill u for killing the cuteness of the pre-skip hinata.... i dont realy like her now

[KingTW]

Exactly, that's what I find as well. I'm also proof reading the chapter right now lol. There were some glaring vocab mistakes that I had to change lol.

Yeah, the long hair don't suit Hinata lol. However, all I can say is read chapter 4.

[Summer.]

I don't like any kind of hinata xD
she's too much of a stalker.

[UCan'tCMe]

could i join

[KingTW]

I don't like any kind of hinata xD
she's too much of a stalker.

hahahhaha xD, I'm indifferent to her I guess, she's kind of just there in my opinion xD.


could i join

Sure, welcome xD

[Summer.]

she's annoying stalker imo xDD

[KingTW]

Well you can hardly call her annoying xD. I mean all she does is follow him around quietly. She doesn't follow him shouting random nonsense every couple seconds xD.

[Summer.]

what she is doing is WAY more annoying. and a bit scary as well. xD